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First of all, there seemed to be a new chapter every two to three pages. This had the effect of breaking what concentration I could muster because, with each chapter, we switched characters. And there were a LOT of characters. A new one at every turn.
The writing was weak and badly edited, rife with typos and missing words. The story was disjointed and doubled back on itself repeatedly.
The whole thing would benefit from a complete work over.
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Title: A Change of Heart
Author: Mark Benjamin
Genre: Urban Fantasy
Formats available: Mobi, epub and pdf
Pages: 476
Bullied his entire life, orphaned university graduate, Gabriel Harper, is bitten by a Royal vampire moments before sunrise, transforming him over the course of six terrible and exhilarating nights into a hybrid—human by day, vampire by night.
Just as he learns to come to grips with what he has become, the Silver Legion—a covert, vampire-hunting organisation—kidnap him and his three friends, forcing them to join their clandestine crusade; however, they remain unaware of Gabriel’s nature until it is too late.
Each choice made sets in motion a turn of devastating events—from love-triangles and fratricide, lust and betrayal, broken dreams and the thirst for power, vengeance and the spilling of blood defines victory.
A CHANGE OF HEART is set primarily in the fictional City of Penance; interweaving the lives of Legionnaires, humans and vampires in the course of a year.
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Review Due Date: December 18, 2016