What do you think of this blurb?

[David]

Nervousness!

[Patti (baconater)]

It'll be a best seller in no time.

[David]

I hope so. Then I can spend more time writing.

[Patti (baconater)]

What have you priced it at?

[David]

Just under £2.50, but the download cost never seems to be accurate.

I hope that's reasonable.

[Patti (baconater)]

It absolutely is. Not too high, not too low.

I approve.

[Patti (baconater)]

Oh, did you get my email today?

[David]

Not checked them. Been wrangling with formatting issues all afternoon. I'll look now.

Thought you'd have been too drunk to type by now :~)

[Patti (baconater)]

Not had a drink today. My tummy hasn't been right all week.

Might try a glass of wine with dinner tomorrow.

[David]

Oh well, drink isn't everything, so I've been told :~)

[David]

Thanks so much everyone who commented on this. Even if the blurb went in a direction different to the suggestions offered, believe me, I would arrived at it without all the prompts.

I think The final version was good enough to draw readers in and guess time will tell.