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message 2551: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah, and she isn't the only one that's been hurt in all of this." Liv said and then she said "Umm... I'm sorry...?"


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"Good, but he's planning something big," Gwen said. "We should find the others. I have a feeling we're going to need as much help as we can get.


message 2553: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan shook her head," No, it's fine." her eyes sparkled. "I know it's a girl, Sha-Salem told me."


message 2554: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Alright" Rife said taking her hand and walking.

"How could Salem tell? And you can call her Shadow, we just don't like that name." liv shrugged


message 2555: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She grinned. "No, everyone calls her Salem, and she's a seer, that's how she knew..nevermind."


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) Drake felt a tingling, he stopped and looked around. "Hello, Is anyone there?"


message 2557: by [deleted user] (new)

((hey sistah!!!!!))

Gwen was glad Rife was back. It felt like everything was going to be alright, even though she knew it would be a while before that happened.


message 2558: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: "Drake felt a tingling, he stopped and looked around. "Hello, Is anyone there?""

Shadow grinned and stood, walking closer to where he was. "Yes."


message 2559: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "She grinned. "No, everyone calls her Salem, and she's a seer, that's how she knew..nevermind.""

"I knew she's s Seer. And she said that only a few people call her Salem, that why she was suprised when we did." Liv shruged.


message 2560: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "She lied to you." Teeghan said simply. If only you knew..


message 2561: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rachel wrote: "((hey sistah!!!!!))

Gwen was glad Rife was back. It felt like everything was going to be alright, even though she knew it would be a while before that happened."


Rife loked back at her, just to reassure himself that she was still there.


message 2562: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " "She lied to you." Teeghan said simply. If only you knew.."




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"Rife," Gwen started. "Do you think everything will be ok, that we'll win?"


message 2564: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " "She lied to you." Teeghan said simply. If only you knew.."

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"What should I know?" Liv asked warily. Damn Readers...




message 2565: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rachel wrote: ""Rife," Gwen started. "Do you think everything will be ok, that we'll win?""

"Of course I do," Rife said


message 2566: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shades of Grey wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " "She lied to you." Teeghan said simply. If only you knew.."

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"What should I know?" Liv asked warily. Damn Re..."


((olo why'd she say damn readers? oh...))

Teeghan grimaced. "What happened when she-"


message 2567: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((bc thats wat Salem is and she doesn't like that ppl in her head she HATES that..))
Liv stopped and stood still.
"What?"


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Gwen gave him a small smile, "I hope so. Now where are Emmy, Patrik, and Liv?"


message 2569: by Ky (last edited Jan 19, 2010 06:43PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((hahaha, I got it by the end of my post..))

"It was Limerick and Whitney, but he didn't want to! He didn't know." she felt the need to defend him even though she hadn't really given any of the story away.


message 2570: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Liv is somewhere as always, AN dPatrik and Emmy are togther in the Warehouse." He answered

"Teeghan, you forget I have no clue what you are talking about..." Liv said holding up a hand.


message 2571: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Sorry. Okay..so it's a long-ish story. Can we stop running?"


message 2572: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yeah," liv stopped instantly "So.. what happened?"


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"Warehouse," Gwen asked.


message 2574: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yes, Warehouse." Rife nodded walking into it.


message 2575: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan stopped also. "So one night, a Thursday in December, a bunch of us girls had a slumber party." she made a face. "It was really girly and Whitney insisted on a fashion show, no contacts." She realized this might not make sense to Liv, so she took out her brown contacts, revealing abnormally beautiful azure blue eyes. "Colours like this are a sure sign of being gifted, and with all the laws, we'd be dead without these. So we listened, after all, we are all 'Dancers'. It was fun, Whitney took pictures." She took in a deep breath. "She only printed some, and we thought they were for us, but she gave them to Limerick, told him to pass them on to..to Cobra. He did, not knowing what was in it and they came. During gym class, every gifted person in the class was scared, even the older ones."


Teeghan needed to stop for a moment.


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: "Drake felt a tingling, he stopped and looked around. "Hello, Is anyone there?""

Shadow grinned and stood, walking closer to where he was. "Yes.""


Drake spun around to the voice, "Who are you?"


message 2577: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv's eyes widened. "Just your eyecolor?" Liv's own eye color was not that much different than Teeghan's.


message 2578: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Shadow." She said, a hint of a smile on her lips.


message 2579: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen followed Rife in, "Why a warehouse?"


message 2580: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "They are hiding from the Shadows."


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) "You're not a shadow..." Drake said suprising himself.


message 2582: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shades of Grey wrote: "Liv's eyes widened. "Just your eyecolor?" Liv's own eye color was not that much different than Teeghan's."

She shrugged. "Most of the humans in 2023 have dully coloured eyes, though the authorities can never be sure until thay have hard proof..and that's what they got. Apparently she fought them well, she is a fighter after all, but they teamed up against her and it didn't help that they had weapons." she laughed.


message 2583: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Wait this is Salem we are talking about right?" Liv asked trying to keep up. Her time was so much diferent than this one.


message 2584: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yeah, and the reason I'm laughing is probably not what you are thinking," she said, sobering considerably. "It's just that, they tased her..and it didn't work. I bet you can imagine how pissed she was, she almost beat the kid, Kensington or whatever..annoying english twit..anyway, Oxford hit her with a shovel and they dragged her to their headquarters. It was then that she changed her name."


message 2585: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Well, Emmy just killed both of those guys." Liv said trying to connect everything.


message 2586: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Really? Good. Little basta-" she smiled. "Anyways, the meaning behind it, so Limerick told me, cause Kenny boy was a reader too, was that Salem felt like she was just a 'shadow' of who she was before..she felt betrayed and such. Anyways, I refuse to call her that."


message 2587: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ah, I understand now. In your time were lots of people gifted?" Liv asked


message 2588: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No, not actually. Cobra and Torch try to stamp out the population, but since her parents worked for them they decided to use her for testing."


message 2589: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "That sounds like what happened to Emmy.." Liv trailed off. "Cobra and Torch are they Norms or Gifted?"


message 2590: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "A mix, they started out with just humans, but determined that the best way to weed out gifted people was to use gifted people.Friggin' jerks. Traitors." she looked up. "That happened to Emmy?"


message 2591: by [deleted user] (new)

"Are they everywhere now?" Gwen asked.


message 2592: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: ""You're not a shadow..." Drake said suprising himself."

"No," she replied," that's just my name."

((sorries, I never saw this!))


message 2593: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I only know what she's told me." Liv started she bit her lip. "Her mother was a freakishly gifted Fire elemental and her father a Fighter. Her mother went on a raid of some camp and she was captured. They took her and kept her for nine months. During that time they did experiments on them both." Liv stopped and ran a hand through her blonde hair. "Emmy's mother was let go just before she was going to have Emmy. Her father was beside himself when she was born. She was his child yet they had put in her Shadow. It's what makes up her tatoos. Thats why if she freaks too much, we could loose her." Liv looked at her sadly.


message 2594: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan was shocked. "Um, I'm kinda confused about the whole Shadow deal.."


message 2595: by [deleted user] (new)

((g2g, and I wan to watch another castle...))


message 2596: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((bye))


message 2597: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((See ya rachel have fun :]))

"What are you confused about? I'll try to explain it the best I can." Liv said


message 2598: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What you said about the Shadow in her.. or something like that."


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "I am a Legend of Zelda Lover! wrote: ""You're not a shadow..." Drake said suprising himself."

"No," she replied," that's just my name."

((sorries, I never saw this!))"


((fine))


"Are you following me?"


message 2600: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I honestly have no clue. But I'm going to guess that that they just injected it into her mother and it got to her and stayed there." Liv thought for a second and then realized something. "Shadows aren't people. They are a thing. They just inhabit people. It's like a disease.." She struggled for the correct wording.


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