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message 2401: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv laughed and stifled it quickly. She tensed up getting in a fighting stance. Emmy placed a hand on the metal of the door. Patrik threw a glance at them all.


message 2402: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow's face was no longer frightened, instead it was serene and knowing. "Brace yourselves, they are heading for Emmy's door and will connect...now!"


message 2403: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy had heated up the door. When the Shadows touched it the molten metal it stuck to them. The metal dripped down and spread like lava on the ground. More Shadows jumped through the space of the metal and the doorframe.
Liv flicked her hand and the wind hit the jumping Shadows and smacked them into the metal.


message 2404: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow used her mind to pick up the closest Shadows and throw them farther away. Her wind was slightly less powerful than Liv's because of this and she used it only to block ones that managed to come back.

Shea cowered,useless in this fight.

Blaze tackled one and beat it to death.


message 2405: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik somehow got some water to play with andmade a make shift sword and stab one with it.
Liv had moved onto another one and killed it. Emmy had lit one on fire.
((I gtg I'll be on later tomorrow. :]))


message 2406: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((awesome, I gtg too!))

Shadow killed a few Shadows by crushing them under the tall metal shelves that were easily liftable for her.

Blaze side-tackled a second.


I am a LoZ & anime Lover!! (CityofEmber) ((what's happened in the past 489 posts?))


message 2408: by [deleted user] (new)

"Rife," Gwen asked seeing a familiar shape coming toward her.


message 2409: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife looked up at Gwen.
"Hey you." He smiled at her.


message 2410: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shea watched the fight in utter horror.

Shadow killed one more Shadow.

((olo confusing!))

Blaze let one tackle him and then fought it,laughing the whole time.


message 2411: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments (((lol ikr?))

Emmy stood palms up and hands at her sides, she stood in the middle of a purple colored fire. It burned the shadows to ashes when they came in contact to it. Emmy laughed and the circle of fire got higher.


message 2412: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*nods*))

Shadow stopped fighting, dropping the shelves back into place as she ran towards the back of the warehouse. She climbed the metal shapes nimbly and sprinted along the tops, breath ragged. "Please no, let it be not true.." she whispered to herself,jumping down and landing in front of a long hallway of doors. One number shone out in her mind: 73. She looked for it, anxious and fearful, and when she found it she smashed it open. "No."


message 2413: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((should Patrik go after her?))

Liv flicked her hand again and sent more Shadows flying into Emmy's death ring. Patrik had killed a few more Shadows with his ice sword.


message 2414: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Sure))

Blaze finally killed the one he'd let tackle him and resolved to not let it happen again as he fought another two.


message 2415: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Behind you," Liv said to Blaze.
Patrik's eyes saw Salem was nowhere to be seen. He growled and his eyes flicked to Emmy. She nodded at him and continued to fight. Dodging as one jumped over her flameing death ring.
Patrik took off running.


message 2416: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze spun around, kicking out as he did so. "Thanks."


Shadow stood frozen in the doorway. "What the hell? Why are you here? How are you here!" she shouted at the figure standing in the room.


message 2417: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Don't mention it." Liv said landing and kicking a Shadows legs out from it.

Patrik skidded to a halt behind Salem.


message 2418: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He nodded and fought on.

Shadow stiffened, but then she knew it was Patrik.

The figure in the room stepped back. "Who's that?" she asked in a small voice.


message 2419: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy growled and walked to the middle of the room.
"Oh damn." Liv said stopping. The room got really hot all of a sudden. "Blaze."


message 2420: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What?" he said.


message 2421: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Don't touch a Shadow untill Emmy moves." Liv said standing still. Waves of heat emmenated from Emmy, they got intense quickly.

"I'm Patrik" Patrik said smoothly.


message 2422: by Ky (last edited Jan 19, 2010 12:49PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Got it," Blaze replied, stepping away from the nearest one.

The girl looked up, face hidden in the shadows of the room, at Shadow. "Is he safe?"

Shadow nodded. "Yeah, more than safe."

The girl took this information in and looked at Patrik. "I'm Teeghan."


message 2423: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv raised a hand and the heat was deflected away from herself and Blaze. Emmy stood still and the remaining Shadows burned where they stood.

"hello," Patrik said smoothly nodding. "What are you?"


message 2424: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She shot a wary glance to Shadow before continuing with zeal, "Elemental- Sound and Time."


message 2425: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Elemental-Water and Stealth." Patrik nodded


message 2426: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Cool!" She said,grinning.

Shadow smirked. "Well then."


message 2427: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I think so." Patrik grinned

"Emmy! Stop!" Liv shouted as the last of the Shadows burned. The fire died.


message 2428: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She rolled her eyes teasingly. "Right, so what's going on here?"

Blaze grinned lopsidedly.

Shea heard Liv yell. "Is it over then?"


message 2429: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Battle." Patrik shrugged "One we need to get back to,"

"Well wasn't that fun?" Liv asked Blaze grinning.
"Yeah," Emmy replied sitting down cross-legged on the floor.


message 2430: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan nodded. "Alright."

Blaze grinned. "Yeah."

Shea wrinkled her nose and walked over,sitting beside Emmy without thinking.


message 2431: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((sorry, what's happened?))


message 2432: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((um well the Shadows came so they evacuated, everyone is in a warehouse now.))


message 2433: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((Right, okay. and Gwen is back? Anything else?))


message 2434: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv sat down against a wall. "We should be fine for a little while."

Emmy's eyes flicked over to Shea.


message 2435: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha nodded,"Right," she added sarcastically.


message 2436: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Stephanie wrote: "((Right, okay. and Gwen is back? Anything else?))"

((yes.))


message 2437: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shades of Grey wrote: "Liv sat down against a wall. "We should be fine for a little while."

Emmy's eyes flicked over to Shea."


"Good." Shea sighed, aware of Emmy's glance.

Blaze smiled teasingly.

Teeghan chuckled. "So, we going to get out of this room?"


message 2438: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) ((ok))


message 2439: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I didn't say forever. I said a little while." Liv replied looking at her.


message 2440: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shea flushed.


message 2441: by Stephanie (last edited Jan 19, 2010 01:28PM) (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha sighed heavily. How come she felt like the baby sitter here?

Secura shivered for a moment then relaxed her head against the wall.


message 2442: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze ewalked over to Secura and sat beside her. "Hey."


message 2443: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: "Shades of Grey wrote: "Liv sat down against a wall. "We should be fine for a little while."

Emmy's eyes flicked over to Shea."

"Good." Shea sighed, aware of Emmy's glance.

Blaze smiled t..."


"Yeah," Emmy said nodding.

Liv smirked at him.

Patrik nodded "Yeah, I got to get back to Emmy. We need to go."


message 2444: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Kennyninja (the ninja is silent) wrote: " Blaze ewalked over to Secura and sat beside her. "Hey.""

"Hey," she smiled.

((i'm doing research so I'll probably be slow today.


message 2445: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow flitted back over gracefully,taking the shelves again for the sheer joy of it.

Teeghan walked briskly.

Blaze grinned.


message 2446: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik went in and sat down with Emmy.

Liv rested her head against the wall and closed her eyes. She didn't want have look anymore. She tried to fall asleep.




message 2447: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan sat a foot from the burnt door.

Shadow grinned and sat at the edge of the shelf,legs dangling like a child's.

Blaze stood and danced around the room in a random manner.

((...like I did at lunch today down the hallways of my highschool...))


message 2448: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie (chasmofbooks) Samantha kicked a rock around and looked up. "What are we going to do?"


message 2449: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((if you were at my school I have a feeling we would be wiked good friends. haha I did that today after finals. I was listening to epic music. lol))

"I wouldn't stand on that for so long if I were you." Emmy said

Liv laughed she could feel the way Blaze was dancing around the room.


message 2450: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Yeah! and I wish I did! barely any of my friends are like me..it's sad..but at least we are friends on here!..olo I have finals next week...did you have fun?))

Teeghan smirked. "I like to live my life on the edge," but she stepped down, listening only because of the baby.

Blaze started singing the theme song from the movie "Hairspray".


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