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message 15351: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Waverly shifted Eliana to one arm and nodded to the woman to take Logan.
"Patrik should be up soon." Waverly said as she walked by Salem.


Emmy looked at Josiah alarmed
"What?" he asked
EMmy raised a hand to silence him
What happened?


message 15352: by Ky (last edited Oct 09, 2010 08:18PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The woman put her hands out to grab Logan, but she didn't get close enough to take him before orange and yellow flames licked at her skin, thriving on her labcoat. She tried to get the fire out but it didn't work.
The babies were born! Frig, Em!


message 15353: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Waverly sighed
"Salem, please. You'll only hurt yourself. We're not going to keep your kids.."

Emmy's eyes widened
"Holy shit!" She said to both of them
Really?!


message 15354: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She hated to admit that Waverley was right about hurting herself. "What are you going to do?" she managed.
Emmy, I'm going crazy!


message 15355: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Waverly looked at Salem
"See if your children are like you or like their father. When we know that it will determine weather or not what we do from there."

Josiah looked worried
"Emmy what is going on!?"
"Hush!"
What do you mean Salem?


message 15356: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments They're trying to take my kids! Waverley knocked out Patrik too! Salem didn't relent with the fire. "You're such a stone cold b***h, Waverley."


message 15357: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Declan almost smiled
"Yeah. I know.""


Dani nodded.


message 15358: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Waverly sighed
"Salem, please don't make me use my own powers against a new mother of less than an hour. I may be cold, but I have morals."

Emmy walked away from him
What do you mean? TAKE your kids?


message 15359: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem clenched her jaw and looked at Eliana in Waverley's arms for a long moment before looking at Logan. With a long breath, Salem let the fire on the woman's clothing die. There wasn't even anything burnt. It had mostly been in the woman's head, but for the image.
The woman snatched Logan before Salem had the chance to stop her again.
They're taking them, Em... She groaned, closing her eyes. To see if they're like me, or Josiah.


message 15360: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "We'll be back." Waverly said leaving the room with the woman and the twins.

Tell me where you are. I can send Josiah, he'll be there in a second.


message 15361: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I don't know where we are, Emmy! She felt like screaming, but she was just too exhausted.

The woman wrapped Logan's blanket around him better.


message 15362: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie (AKA Clementine/Connie/You) wrote: "({Hannah}) wrote: "Declan almost smiled
"Yeah. I know.""

Dani nodded."



message 15363: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Waverly walked down a long and dark corridor with a silent Eliana in her arms.

Patrik was 'Waking up' by the time the man had the closed the door as he left.

Emmy could sense her frusteration and shook her head to appease some of her own volitile emotions
What do you see? Who has you? I'll see if either Josiah or I can pick you up ok?


message 15364: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan sighed


message 15365: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments "sooo..."


message 15366: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Waverly walked down a long and dark corridor with a silent Eliana in her arms.

Patrik was 'Waking up' by the time the man had the closed the door as he left.

Emmy could sense her frusteration..."


Salem tried her best to explain it, fighting the overwhelming feelings of protectiveness and exhaustion.


message 15367: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan forged a smile
"So, what do you want to talk about, now that I have you all night?"

Patrik looked at Salem and figured out what she was doing and staying quiet.

Emmy nodded and relayed what she said to Josiah who nodded and made a quick portal.
"You comming Emmy?"


message 15368: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Declan forged a smile
"So, what do you want to talk about, now that I have you all night?"

Patrik looked at Salem and figured out what she was doing and staying quiet.

Emmy nodded and relaye..."


Salem opened her eyes to see Patrik. She looked pained. "Pat..."


message 15369: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani shrugged. "Anything."


message 15370: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Waverly entered a inky black room.
"Alright Eliana. Let's see what you can do." Waverly whispered setting her down on the floor and stepping back. She watched intently as the room started to react in responce to her being there.
((They're your kids. I'm guessing you would like to pick who does what. ;) ))

Patrik looked at her
"What happened Salem?"

"Hells yes I'm comming." Emmy said almost running into the portal.
Josiah followed her and they both landed on the metal floor of the same corridor that Waverly and the woman had just traversed moments before.
Emmy started looking around and running her hands over doors. Josiah followed her lead.


message 15371: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan thought for a minute
"Ask me anything. Any question that pops into your head about me and I'll answer truthfully." he proposed


message 15372: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Waverly entered a inky black room.
"Alright Eliana. Let's see what you can do." Waverly whispered setting her down on the floor and stepping back. She watched intently as the room started to react..."


((I think Eliana should be like Josiah. :D So..how exactly does the room work?))

Salem's eyes flared. "THEY FUCKING TOOK MY BABIES!" She was surprised with herself; she rarely swore.


message 15373: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((It is like a Shadow simulator... It just makes dormant power come to the surface as a defense. But unless Waverly says so, it's not really harmful.))
((Awesome! <3 the swearing Salem btw!))

Patrik's eyes widened

Josiah looked up and almost laughed in releif
"Salem." He sighed
"And where there's Salem there's Patrik." Emmy said walking up to the door and melting the lock with a stare.
Josiah went in first and was at Salem's side in a second. Emmy was next to Patrik looking releived he was unhurt and in one peice.
"Who took the kids Salem?" Patrik asked throwing a look at Emmy who knew what she was supposed to do.


message 15374: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okay))
((hahahha))

Salem took Josiah's hand.
"Waverley and some bitch."

((How would I explain what happens with Eliana?))


message 15375: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((:D))
((Maybe just say that she developed a little less intense version of Josiah's Tattoo. That is what people that are part shadow get when they're born...))

Josiah squeezed her hand gently and narrowed his eyes
"Ok, now I'm definately going to kill Waverly." he said angrilly."
"How about we do that after we get your babies back?" Patrik volunteered
Emmy pressed her arm up against his and closed her eyes
"Waverly is in another building. Her thermal is like nothing..."
Josiah looked up at that
"Metal room?" Emmy asked confused
Josiah knew what that meant
"Let's hope not."

Waverly watched intently, the process shouldn't be taking as long as it was. She had to hurry before Salem felt the need to kill everyone.


message 15376: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The woman gasped. "See, look...the marking."
Eliana cooed in her baby way.

Salem felt hot inside. She wasn't as tired as she'd been, though she knew she should be. She felt...energized. And extremely pissed off.


message 15377: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Waverly grinned wickedly
"Perfect. Put Logan down. We'll see if he is like his mother or not. Maybe we'll get lucky." She said scooping up Eliana

Patrik looked at Josiah and Salem
"take Salem home. She'll end up hurting herself. Emmy and I can get the twins and bring them back."
Josiah looked bullshit
"Not a snowballs chance in Hell. Patrik you take Salem, I'll go kill Waverly and get our" he pointed at Salem then at himself "children." Then burn Waverly into a overly charred crisp.


message 15378: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments As soon as the woman put Logan down, he began squalling, causing his sister to start up too.


Salem didn't want to leave without her babies.


message 15379: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Hey, Emmie. Can we bring Matt/Abby/Ben back into this? Even though we weren't really part of the real storyline... that was fun!))


message 15380: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Waverly sighed
"He's like the mother then. Well one out of the two is better than none. Let's go Salem may have killed everyone by now."

Emmy was at the door
"Well, this is stupid arguing about it. Salem wants to come let her. She'll deal with the reprucussions later."
Patrik nodded at that and looked at Salem, who was still on the floor.
Josiah held a hand to her to help her up.


message 15381: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The woman clenched her jaw and closed her eyes hard. She gasped, her face paling.
Logan and Eliana stopped crying at the same time. His eyes held a spark of intelligence.

Salem took his hand gratefully, swaying when she stood. "On second thought..."


message 15382: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Lav Stathopoulos (Lavendarlol) wrote: "((Hey, Emmie. Can we bring Matt/Abby/Ben back into this? Even though we weren't really part of the real storyline... that was fun!))"

((YES!))


message 15383: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Declan thought for a minute
"Ask me anything. Any question that pops into your head about me and I'll answer truthfully." he proposed"


Dani thought about that. "What's your favourite song?"


message 15384: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Waverly looked impressed
"On second thought, Maybe Logan will kill everyone..."

"I'll take you home then." Patrik said already finishing the Portal.
"Thanks Patrik." Josiah said scooping Salem up and handing her to Patrik
A part of Emmy knew they should hurry, something was about to go down.


message 15385: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The woman fell to her knees, gasping like a fish out of water.
Logan looked like he was going to fall asleep.

Salem sighed quietly. "I felt them, Patrik. They're powerful..."


message 15386: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie (AKA Clementine/Connie/You) wrote: "({Hannah}) wrote: "Declan thought for a minute
"Ask me anything. Any question that pops into your head about me and I'll answer truthfully." he proposed"

Dani thought about that. "What's your favo..."



message 15387: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Waverly smiled and looked at Eliana
"I think we may have gotten lucky after all..." she purred

Patrik nodded and within seconds they were standing in the living room and he was laying Salem on the couch.

Josiah looked up
"You can feel that righ Emmy?"
Emmy nodded already down the hallway
"Yeah. But come on. The sooner we get your kids the sooner we can get them back to Salem and the sooner they'll stop."


message 15388: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Hannah....))


message 15389: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmie (AKA Clementine/Connie/You) wrote: "({Hannah}) wrote: "Declan thought for a minute
"Ask me anything. Any question that pops into your head about me and I'll answer truthfully." he proposed"

Dani thought about that. "What's your favo..."


((I'm soooooo sorry Emmie!!))

Declan chuckled
"On The Inside by Daughtry."


message 15390: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Waverly smiled and looked at Eliana
"I think we may have gotten lucky after all..." she purred

Patrik nodded and within seconds they were standing in the living room and he was laying Salem on ..."


Eliana's tiny hand curled around Waverley's loose hair.

The woman coughed and clawed at her shirt, falling forward to the ground, red pooling on the floor under her head.


message 15391: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik sat down on the edge of the couch
"You want anything Salem?" he asked

Waverly smiled at her then walked over to Logan
"Make sure your brother doesn't kill me ok?" She bent to pick up Logan.

Josiah and Emmy were running, they didn't want to be here any longer than they had to be. Anyway, Josiah wanted to kill Waverly more than Emmy did now


message 15392: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She almost said 'my babies' but instead she just asked for water.

Logan started crying again and that made his twin cry too.


message 15393: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik nodded and got her a glass and walked back.
"Here." he said handing it to her
"They should be back soon Salem." he reassured her.

Josiah's ears pricked up at the sound
Emmy was already at the door melting it when Josiah just crushed it.
"Ok that works too." Emmy muttered as he walked past her and faced Waverly
"Put my children down Waverly," he said with enough venom in his voice to kill an elephant


message 15394: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem knew she had to let herself cry before she just exploded.

Logan stopped crying and, of course, his twin quieted as well. Eliana's hand tightened on Waverley's hair.


message 15395: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik put a hand on her leg, just to let her know that he was there. Sometimes you didn't really need words, sometimes small things, like brushing your arm against someone or placing a hand on their shoulder(or leg) was enough for them.

Waverly froze, this was really not the place she wanted to face Emmy and Josiah. Their advantage would be too great.
Emmy walked forward, her eyes flickering to silver as her brother's did the same. She bent down and picked up Logan soundlessly and without interferences. When she looked at the little girl in Waverly's arms her eyes got caught on the little tattoo that was on her skin.
Josiah stood still, the room convulsing around them.
"Now my daughter." he ordered


message 15396: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments With that gentle reminder the dam broke and Salem cried.

Logan settled down once he was in Emmy's arms, falling asleep almost instantly.
Eliana began wailing.


message 15397: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik moved so he was next to her and he sat there. Just waiting for her to stop crying or tell him to move.

Emmy held him easily. She didn't mind it as much as she would have expected, she wasnt the children person out of the four.

Josiah's irises were pure silver. The room that was made of Shadows that had been encased in glass, were dying to break out and do what he was telling them to do.

Waverly sensed that she was going to loose no matter what she did. If she threatened to hurt either of the children, Josiah and Emmy would kill her. If she tried to incapacitate Emmy, Josiah would have her posessed before she was finished.

Josiah was getting impatient and he advanced on her. Shadows were leaking out of the cracks in the glass.
"Give. Me. My. Daughter." he said each word punctuated with more glass breaking
"If I do you'll kill me..." Waverly said for the first time since she was little, sounding truly afraid.
"You have me kidnap Salem and my Sister. Then Make me torture them both, then you kidnap Salem again while she's pregnant again with Emmy and torturing them. Then this last time. She gives birth to our children and you take them." Josiah paused as the Shadows coated the floor like a mist
"You're going to die anyway."


message 15398: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ignore the message I just sent you.))

((this is an awesome post!))

Salem took his hand.

Logan's little fist was closed over a tiny handful of Emmy's shirt.

Eliana's cries faded when she seemed to notice the shadows.


message 15399: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok I will...))

((Yes, yes it is!!! <3 <3 <3 so happy!!))

Patrik held hers and with his free arm pulled her into his side.

Emmy watched, ready to make Josiah stop if he went too far.

Waverly looked down at the Shadows that were lapping at her feet and legs like the tide under a full moon. Trying to put on a brave face she said
"You wouldn't risk hurting your daughter..."
Josiah laughed darkly
"I can see the tattoo from here. They wont touch her unless I tell them too."
As if on cue a woman materialized from the mist, a tall silver haired silvery eyed woman stepped toward Waverly looking scarily real. She took Eliana into her arms, arms that in the process on taking Eliana passsed through Waverly's body.
Josiah was holding his daughter seconds later, the evil that he was capable of in a scary contrast with his little new born daughter in his arms.
"Take her." he ordered as he left
"Josiah!" Waverly screamed as they wrapped up her legs
Emmy didn't look back as she walked out.


message 15400: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((:P))

Eliana and Logan were both asleep by that point.

Salem clung to Patrik; he was like a brother to her.


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