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message 14151: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Waverley took her hands back and nodded to the men to let go of Salem. "She can't hurt me now." She spun on her heels and left the room.

Salem collapsed to her knees.

Damien swore in french. "Waverley isn't in kid mode anymore."

"Oh." Farrow nodded. "Okay."


message 14152: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The voltage was upped before Waverly entered. Emmy was dragged to her knees and the fire died in her hands. Her eyes flicked to silver, then black then back again. Apparently men didn't want to have to hold her down while Waverly did her hocus pocus.

"I know." Josiah tapped his temple.

Patrik nodded smiling softly.


message 14153: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Waverley smiled. "Hey Emmeline, miss me?" She pushed her blonde hair behind her ears and approached her. "Cause I missed you."

Damien sat back. "But why?"

Farrow smiled quickly and then left. "I'm going to have a shower. See you later."


message 14154: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Screw you, bitch." Emmy spat hair falling loose of it's pony tail.

"She hasn't been a kid in years Damien. She only looks it, and she likes it that way." Josiah said seriously "It's part of the Teachings."

"OK See you." Patrik said nodding


message 14155: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "That's so sweet," she murmured, pushing Emmy's hair back. "What a waste."

Damien shrugged. "The Teachings?" And how the hell does she change forms? Like..she looks five...then she looks seventeen...it's disturbing. Alien.

Farrow went into the bathroom and locked the door, undressing and stepping into the shower, which she had turned on to almost maximum heat.


message 14156: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy recoiled from her touch.

Josiah nodded, wondering why Damien didn't know about The Teachings, then again Damien wasn't like him Waverly and possibly Emmy. He had a family, sisters that talked to him people that he loved. Josiah had none of those things and hadn't even wanted them untill he was forced to lose them.
"Yeah, The Teachings." he nodded

Patrik sighed, alone again


message 14157: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "You're so pretty...but too bad...too bad..." Waverley took Emmy's face in her hands, holding tightly. "Shhh...it's okay."

"What exactly are those, dude?" Damien asked.

It didn't take her more than ten minutes to shower and get dressed. She came back to the kitchen with her hair in a towel.


message 14158: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy shook her head trying to get away from her, but her body became less and less responsive to the screamings in her head.

"They are guidelines on how to train children to be Cons, torturers and assassins." Josiah told him nonchanantly.

Patrik nodded at her
"You look cleaner."


message 14159: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Waverley closed her eyes, concentrating. "Don't fight me, Emmeline, it'll only hurt more...what a waste..."

"Oh well that's interesting," he said off-handedly.

She choked, laughing. "Really?"


message 14160: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy would have liked to say something rude as well as light the girl on fire.

"Yeah. I enjoyed it." Josiah said making a face.

Patrik shrugged
"That's how bored I am."


message 14161: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments When she was done, she let go and stepped back. "Done. Good luck."

Damien looked at him. "Right."

Farrow sighed. "You could rent a movie?"


message 14162: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy nodded in thanks, standing up slowly.

Josiah rolled his eyes.

"I think I will."


message 14163: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Waverley left the room, pinning up her hair. "Gawd I like this body so much better."

Damien shrugged. "I found...something. I don't know." He turned the laptop screen towards him.

"Get a good one."


message 14164: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy moved through the door with ease nothing could touch her now.

"What is that?" Josiah asked leaning towards the screen

"Like what?" Patrik asked
"I normally don't watch movies."


message 14165: by Ky (last edited Sep 10, 2010 09:10PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem didn't even notice when she wasn't alone anymore.

Damien played with his bangs. "It could be our solution. Maybe."

Farrow shrugged. "I dont know," she smiled sheepishly. "I've never seen a movie before. I've only heard about them."


message 14166: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments The Emmy part of her brain saw Salem and was happy for a second. Then se remembered that she wasn't who she was and niether was Salem.

"I hope to God." Josiah exhaled

"You want to come, help me pick a good one?"


message 14167: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem fixed her hat, glancing around the room.

Damien nodded. "Do you think it could work?"

Farrow nodded. "I'd love to." She was really excited about movies.


message 14168: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy walked in materializing out of the shadows
"Salem." The word fell from her lips like ice.

"It very well might." Josiah nodded "How do we gt it?"

Patrik waved her to the Portal
"Well come on then."


message 14169: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Emmy," Salem said quietly, almost warmly. A smile curved her lips.

"Let me get the passcodes," he took over the laptop again.

Farrow edged over. "I never get used to these," she said.


message 14170: by Jules (last edited Aug 17, 2010 06:31PM) (new)

Jules (fiddlebug13) | 77 comments ((OMG I love this story but I have no clue what to write ...after mesage 14195 you guys seem to be going strong! oh btw...could I mayb have some background knowledge-i have to admit i really didn't want to read ALL of the comments!!))


message 14171: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy nodded at her looking dark and vicious suddenly.

"Go at it Techie." Josiah said leaning back.

"Mine don't hurt." Patrik winked.


message 14172: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((You like it? *pleased*))


message 14173: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Thank you Julia! :D))


message 14174: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ({Hannah}) wrote: "Emmy nodded at her looking dark and vicious suddenly.

"Go at it Techie." Josiah said leaning back.

"Mine don't hurt." Patrik winked."


"May the best girl win." Salem would never have said that. Not to Emmy.

Damien tapped away at the keys and wrote the passcodes on his arm.

She smiled a little. "Okay."


message 14175: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "She will." Emmy assured her. There was nothing there, nothing in her eyes her tone. There was just nothing.

Josiah stood and started pacing.

Patrik went through waiting for Farrow on the other side.


message 14176: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Oh I know. Bring it."

"Let's go, mon ami." Damien said, grabbing his jacket.

Farrow went through finally.


message 14177: by Jules (new)

Jules (fiddlebug13) | 77 comments ((Yeah I definitely do! But is there any background knowledge you could give me? Sorry, but I only read some...I'm excited to see where it goes!)


message 14178: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Not really. Just my four people (Emmy and Patrik are the most Important) They control elements, Emmy fire, Patrik Water, Liv air and Rife Earth. ))

Emmy tilted her head and smiled darkly the room was surrounded by flame.

"Where to?" Josiah asked already by the door

Patrik looked at her
"See? It didn't bite."


message 14179: by Jules (new)

Jules (fiddlebug13) | 77 comments ((Ohhh I see! Still confusing...but now i'll follow the story for a while b4 i write anything! Thanks!))


message 14180: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yeah i'll try to explain more as I go. It's just A TON of stuff.))


message 14181: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Um, Salem, Farrow, and Damien are the only characters I use besides Waverley. But out of mine Salem is the most important. I'm not even gonna try to explain her...she has too much to explain. :D))

"Oh I like fire Em," Salem said, spinning around. She made her own fire flare just within Emmy's circlet. It shone blue.

"Down the hall, up the stairs, to the left."

Farrow nodded. "Yeah...that's good."


message 14182: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy burnt it out smothering it with her own black and silver fire.

Josiah moved as soon as he got the directions

Patrik nodded
"yeah. You comming now?"


message 14183: by Jules (new)

Jules (fiddlebug13) | 77 comments ((Ok thanks...very confusing! Eek I will follow along. I am getting there!))


message 14184: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((if you need an explanation I'm more than willing to give them!))


message 14185: by Jules (last edited Aug 17, 2010 06:57PM) (new)

Jules (fiddlebug13) | 77 comments ((ok thanks, but for now i'll deal :) plus yay (!) now we're friends))


message 14186: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*smiles* Good luck, Julia.))

She made tornadoes, reinforcing them with her energy siphon and then letting them do as they wished around the room.

Damien followed him quietly.

"Yeah, let's go."


message 14187: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yay!))


message 14188: by Jules (new)

Jules (fiddlebug13) | 77 comments ((I am totally getting it! I'll probably write something tomorrow!))


message 14189: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((cool. Looking forward to it Julia. :D))


message 14190: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy watched them getting bored as she did so directing them along paths of fire.

Josiah was at the place Damien instructed within minutes.
"Get in." josiah said to Damien pointing at the keypad.

Patrik nodded
"Alright."

((Cool))


message 14191: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem laughed. "Hey Emmy. It's no use for us to fight fire with fire."

Damien typed in the passcodes one after another. The door opened.

"Lead the way, I don't know where to go."


message 14192: by Jules (new)

Jules (fiddlebug13) | 77 comments ((;) GTG, be back on tomorrow around 10 am TTYL!))


message 14193: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((alright, ttyt))


message 14194: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((See ya!))

Emmy smirked at her
"Well you have another idea?"

Josiah went in.
"Where is it?" he breathed

"Ok." Patrik nodded


message 14195: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Let's fight with out hands Emmy. Our minds and our hands," Salem said in a sickly sweet voice. "Can you handle fighting without your fire?"

"It should be at the end...the third container from the bottom."

Farrow followed him along.


message 14196: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy stared at her eyes flicking between black silver and normal.
"I don't like to, but I can."

Josiah ran his finger counting them off and snapping the lock from the inside Shadows comming alive at his will.

Patrik walked into a movie store.


message 14197: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Good," she said, taking a step closer. "Come over here."

"Is it there?"
((we never said what it is. olo))

Farrow immediately flocked over to the shelves, running her fingers over the movies on display.


message 14198: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy moved one step closer, wary. She still knew what Salem was powerful so she was cautious.

((lol secrecy works.))
"I think so..." Josiah said taking it out.

Patrik just watched and waited. He didn't really care.


message 14199: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem tilted her head. "What's wrong?"

((haha, it's fun when we find out what it is.))

Damien nodded. "That's it."

"There are so many movies!"


message 14200: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy was getting bored of all the talk.
"I'm bored." She lit the space around them on fire.

((hahah yeah it will be))
"Awesome, let's pray they work." Josiah said looking at the dubiously.

"I know right?" Patrik said looking at all of them.


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