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message 13901: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "((Mmmhhmm...OMG! I KNOW!))

Zack was walking out of bar, when he saw Dani sitting in a cab with some dude. ((Dani's ex...))

Dani watched him."



message 13902: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmie wrote: "((Ummm... I think Emmy.))"

((Really man?! Haha sounds like a plan so Salem is already freaking out by the time Josiah gets to her... I like how edevious you are Emmie))


message 13903: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((kay, Hannah, Emmy is first. :D))

Farrow looked up suddenly and the glazed look was gone from her eyes. "What's wrong?"

Did the same thing just happen to you that happened to me? Salem asked, her mind voice sounding a lot more composed than she felt.

Waverley nudged Josiah forward. "It's your sister first. How splendid."


message 13904: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Meeep!!! OH, Josiah and Salem are so freaking cute!))


message 13905: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Emmie wrote: "((Meeep!!! OH, Josiah and Salem are so freaking cute!))"

({Hannah}) wrote: "Emmie wrote: "((Ummm... I think Emmy.))"

((Really man?! Haha sounds like a plan so Salem is already freaking out by the time Josiah gets to her... I like how edevious you are Emmie))"


((*laughs* We are so splendidly evil. Thanks, Emmie.))


message 13906: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Anytime.))


message 13907: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Thanks Emmie! I love them too! They are so awesome!))

Patrik looked worried
"Something is very bad is about to happen. Like no going back from bad..."

Yeah... only the opposite. Emmy said moving throughout the room trying to shake the light.
JOsiah grinned savagely and pushed the door open momentarily letting light filter through and fall on the floor the beam' spoint resting directly at Emmy's feet. Making her the redhead at the end of the trail. She looked suprised at Josiah's shadow
"Thank God you're here Josiah." Emmy sounded relieved
Josiah's dead eyes flicked to her
"Sit." He said sharply, a chair appearing behind Emmy.
Emmy chanced a glance at it, it didn't seem to be something one wanted to sit in.
"I'm going to pass on that..." she said slowly
Josiah shrugged and pressed the Shadows down on her shoulders untill she was in the chair.


message 13908: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Hannah!!! Answer my post!!))


message 13909: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((sorry!))((I did you just didn't see it))

Declan looked like someone had just shot him
"What do you mean?"


message 13910: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow froze. "I just got that. Just as you said it...oh no no..." she shook her head, tears filling her eyes. "It's really bad."

Waverley stepped into the room behind him then, stepping to the side and smiling to herself. "You really should learn to listen, Emmy."


message 13911: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Ahhh! So sorry!!!))

Dani watched him, concerned.


message 13912: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik nodded every other thought moving from his mind
"Yeah. I can feel it. If Emmy's scared then it's bad."

Emmy went right for the sarcasam
"Then I would make your lives too easy."
Josiah got bored quickly and pushed the shadows down harder making Emmy's body hurt.
"So are you going to listen now?" JOsiah asked


message 13913: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Sorry about last night I had family stuff I had to deal with.))


message 13914: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((It's fine. I chilled and watched a movie with my dad.))

Farrow nodded and paced around the kitchen.

Waverley shrugged. "It'd be easier for everyone if you listened."


message 13915: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((oh sweet which movie?))

Patrik needed noise so he flicked on the tap with a thought and manipulated the water for a little while.

Emmy couldn't speak, the Shadow weight was pressing the air out of her body and it took all of her concentration just to keep breathing.
JOsiah moved the Shaodws away from her
"Now, you and Salem are crucial to the operation that our people want to run, and for that we need you alive. So I have room to work with you see, because I don't need to kill you or Salem for that matter. BUt after we're done here, you'll wish I had just killed you."
((What do they need to know? Or is the torure just to get the weak enough that they comply with what these people need?))


message 13916: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((He's Just Not that Into You. My dad fell asleep at the end, but it's the thought that counts. :P Oh, and I'm not on yet, sadly. Today is my day to help my mom with the daycare. I'll be on around 1.))

Farrow watched, using it as a distraction just as much as he was.

Waverley was happy, and it showed on her face.

((Um...ha. It could be both.))
Salem flinched, 'hearing' everything from the room next door.


message 13917: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((THat one was cute and Same here. I'll see you then right?))

((Oh an dI heard this song and I thought of Salem and Josiah when I heard this song http://www.playlist.com/searchbeta/tr... ))

Patrik went silent and just focused.

Josiah just looked dead, as he flicked the Shadows towards Emmy, who sat still and silent watching the darkness creep in on her. She could feel her hands start to shake even before the first Shadow touched it. Every feeling in her body magnified wen it connected with her tattooed hand and ran into it like ink staining a paper. Not this again she thought desperately. There was nothing they couldn't get at with Shadows inside her, every secret every bad thing she'd ever done was about to be laid bare and set on a silver platter infront of them.


message 13918: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((of course. Sorry I'm late. D:))

((I'm about to listen to that. :P))

Farrow got bored easily and walked around the house, cleaning up the mess from the break-in earlier that day.

Salem felt like she was feeling what Emmy was, but that wasn't right. I'm not feeling it, she convinced herself. I'm just imagining it...calm down...I need to calm down. Josiah...but why....Wave?


message 13919: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "((Ahhh! So sorry!!!))

Dani watched him, concerned."



message 13920: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Ky looked at her knife. She would never need it, of course, being able to make an instant knife, but it was so no one knew what she could do.


message 13921: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Ky put the knife back in her overcoat and took it off. She sighed, wishing for her cold antarctic home.


message 13922: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((DId you like the song? and it's ok I'm late too...))

Patrik froze the water and walked over to the bar and sat in a stool.

Josiah flicked through Emmy's memories mercilesly((spelling? Idk)). Emmy flinched as they passed her eyes, she had no clue what they were looking for but whatever it was they were intent on finding it.


message 13923: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I love the song! It was so cool!))

Tinkling glass sounds came from the livingroom.

((*mercilessly? Maybe.))

Salem was watching the memories pass. She couldn't see enough to stop her confusion, but what she saw was bad enough.


message 13924: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Emmie wrote: "Emmie wrote: "((Ahhh! So sorry!!!))

Dani watched him, concerned.""



message 13925: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((:D YAY!!))

Patrik looked up
"Farrow? WHat are you doing?"

((OK thanks))

Emmy closed her eyes
"What are you looking for?" She managed to say, it was painful enough trying to squeeze th words out the Shadows like to leech the life out of you.
"Leverage" Josiah said simply "And some idea as to how you escaped death so many times."
"Ahhh.. Well, I have just such importance-" the rest of it was cut off.


message 13926: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((HANNAH!!))


message 13927: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I know my comp is going all wonky!))

DEclan nodded and put his phone away
"I have to go. I'll call you or something." He produced a magic marker from nowhere and penned his number on her forarm.


message 13928: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani looked at him. "Okay."


message 13929: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*smiles*))

"Cleaning. I'm cleaning," she said quietly, but loud enough for him to hear from where she was.

Waverley sighed. "You really shouldn't try to talk, it'll only get worse."


message 13930: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments DEclan nodded and jumped out of the Cab and took off running

"Ok." Patrik nodded sitting still again.

Emmy glared at her
"You're a-" she looked up at the celing the vein in her neck showing beneath her skin. The swearing that was going on in her head, lets just say she would have had to pay a lot of money to some mothers swear jar.
Josiah rolled his eyes
"You should really start listening to people Emmeline."
Don't you dare call me that.


message 13931: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani was awfully confused.


message 13932: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow smiled softly, sitting amongst the glass shards and burn marks.

Waverley scowled, the expression looking odd on such a childish face.
Salem winced. Of course...ah what a foul mouth. She was trying to think of things other than the pain Emmy was feeling. By the hands of her brother. Her brother Josiah. Josiah. The one Salem loved.


message 13933: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan dissapeared around the next corner.

Patrik looked at the Shadowy burns on his wrists.

A memory played against Emmy's closed eyelids, it was recent, one that she hadn't even had time to forget yet.
Emmy whirled around to the sound of her name being spoken gently, like Patrik had so many times before. Their eyes locked for the breifest second before she noticed the stray man running at Patrik, his grusome weapon held firmly ing his hand. It took too long, everything wasn't fast enough in that second. His name leaving her lips was too late and her legs jumping into motion too slowly to make a difference. Patriks eyes were still on hers, looking at her like he always had, with that deep loving she craved and then nothing. Blood ran down the front of his white shirt leaving scars on her eyes he hit the ground the same time she reached him.
"Stop." Emmy said, as close to pleading as she was ever going to get.
Josiah flicked it to another memory, one that was just as cruel.


message 13934: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani gave the cab driver directions to her house.


message 13935: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Farrow picked up a larger shard, the size of a kitchen knife. Fascinated --like a child on Christmas day-- she peered at it, bringing it closer to her face and even daring to run her fingers along the edges, staining them pink. A memory flashed, something she'd seen Salem do. It made her happy and sad at the same time.

Salem winced, seeing what Emmy saw but with a lot less meaning behind it.

Waverley perched on a stool and watched. "Keep it up Josiah. I don't think she really feels it."


message 13936: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments *Declan off doing the things e needs to do*

Patrik brushed his fingers over the grey staining, thinking about everything that anyone had ever said to him about Emmy. No one had ever had anything good to say, just because she was so blatantly Her. You couldn't deny what was right infront of your face and most people preffered the whole 'Ignorance is bliss' statement. Emmy in and of her self was knowladge that no one wanted anymore.

Emmy knew what he had selected for her viewing before it flickered to life before her eyes.
Her mother's singing wafted down the hall leading her to the kitchen, singing equaled baking and baking equaled bowls to lick the batter out of. Rounding the corner she almost screamed she was so happy, she threw herself at the hulking figure that was standing behind her mother
"Daddy!" Emmy squealed in her seven year old voice.
He spun and caught her in a big sweeping embrace
"Hey Warrior!" he laughed his throaty laugh and kissed her head.
"I missed you." She said smiling up at him and brushing her long hair out of her eyes
"And I missed you too, but it seems I picked the perfect time to come home, Mom's baking." He winked at her.
Emmy smiled mischeviously
"I know it smells great."
"Thank you, you two." Aloysia said smiling and kissing her husband happily.



message 13937: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Dani went home and fell asleep.


message 13938: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments **Declan's off doing illegal stuff...**


message 13939: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Ooh, like what?))

***Dani is dreaming about Declan**


message 13940: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The memory or a memory was a pleasant escape for her and she lay back in the debris just to stay in it, away from the gnawing dread of the present.

Salem was confused by this memory of Emmy's more than the others. It seemed so simple. So normal. So...unlikely. Truth be told, she'd never been able to see Aloysia in that way. Even watching it, it was hard to imagine.

Waverley yawned. It's always more fun when they scream and shout. Blood is pretty too.


message 13941: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Ky flipped the knife in her hand. It was too unnaturally heavy, unlike ice. She stared at the knife, willing it to turn into a hook sword with no such luck. She growled at it and put it back in her overcoat, then made a ball of ice.


message 13942: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((like idk pick something))


Emmy looked up at them and cleared her throat
"Can I have the bowl mom?" she asked cutely.
Aloysia laughed and handed her the mixing bowl, which had some expertly place cookie dough in it. Emmy laughed
"Thanks mumma." she smiled and hopped up on the counter on it.
"You're welcome Sweetie." Aloysia said smiling at her. Gavin, her husband took her hand and pulled her off to the table and sat her down, no doubt telling her about his latest hunt and how much closer the Shadows were getting. They thought she didn't know about that, but she did she wasn't going to let on that she knew, for fear of getting in trouble with her father for spying. Boredly she placed the cookie dough on her hand and lit a small blue fire under it, it cooked quickly and before she knew it she was munching on the perfect cookie.
"Emmy we need to-" Her mother started to say looking frazzled
"What did you just do?" her father barked
"The cookie... I just"
"Shit, shit shit shit." Her dad said pacing thinking for a minute
"Gavin!" Aloysia said loudly then turned to Emmy "Come on honey we have to go"
Gavin stood stock still and looked at his wife and Daughter
"It's too late." he said in a dead voice.
That was when the room imploded.

"Please, just stop. Please!" Emmy was crying, the hot tears sliding down her face
"Everyone you love seems to die around you Emmy. And somehow it alwas seems to be your fault." Josiah informed her cooly
"I-" Everything in her hurt, her heart her mind and her body. Sobs hit her like a freight train
"Just stop." she pleaded "Enough."


message 13943: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Ky tossed the ball from hand to hand, rolling it over her shoulders and kicking it. She tossed it high into the air and kicked it hard as it was coming down. it soared into the air and headed back down for a loud demise when Ky sort of caught it. it was levitating about five feet from her. Ky moved her hands around, the ice moving with it. Then she clapped her hands together and the ice fell to the ground, flat as a pancake. With one swift movement of Ky's hands, the ice turned into an innocent puddle.


message 13944: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Hearing Emmy's cries made her heart clench. This was another time she wished she were normal. Wished she couldn't Hear, See, and Feel things she shouldn't.

Waverley smiled finally. "Better."


message 13945: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Ky looked around, her eyes hardening and becoming catlike.


message 13946: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Ky grew her wings and flew onto a roof. the wings melted into her coat.


message 13947: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Josiah just watched as his sister greived and cried and he could swear he heard her sprit break if he listened hard enough. His eyes flashed silver breifly then flickered back into the dead black the mind control had enlisted.
Emmy looked upwards again the silver lining of her tattoos flashing in the brilliant white light. Her tears making streaks down her cheeks.
Josiah's eyes flashed again
"We're done here." he told Farrow through gritted teeth.


message 13948: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments ((Hannah, what illegal stuff is Declan doing?))


message 13949: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Idk yet...))


message 13950: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Waverley smiled. "I believe we are done here. For today. Moving on!"


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