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message 8851: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Alright makes sense to me.))


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She sighed. "He got impatient. I didn't do it fast enough. He hit me. And he threatened to do worse. He hit me a lot. And I always cried. He said I was pathetic for crying so much."


message 8853: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife sighed and put his hand on hers.


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She pulled it away. "Wait. I don't want to cry yet." She took another deep breath, then continued. "He started putting me in this chair, strapping me down, and giving me little jolts when I didn't do thinks right. But that scared me more. I got worse. And he hit me more. And once... I got angry."


message 8855: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Did you kill the bastard?" Rife asked


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"N-no," she whispered, "I couldn't. I can't. I can't hurt people. Even if I tried... I would have. But I couldn't. I'm not dangerous like you or Salem. I'm just- just a scared little girl." Her eyes welled with tears.


message 8857: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife moved back into her direct line of vision
"Hey, your stronger than you think. A scared little girl wouldn't have gone after four very powerful elementals, two fighters, one being part Shadow and the other going out with a very powerful Elemental. Then a time changer."


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Elly shook her head. "You don't understand. I was ordered to. I have to obey. It hurts if I don't. I am a scared little girl, still."


message 8859: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Well, we'll have to make you braver wont we?" Rife said


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She flinched at the word 'make'. "I wish," she murmured.


message 8861: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife shook his head.


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She looked away, out the window. "Anyway... in the dream, he was about to hit me- and then he turned into you. And... you said what I told you."


message 8863: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife rested his arms on her knees and stared into her eyes
"I would never say that. No matter what you did."


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The tears came to her eyes now and she nodded. Her hands covered his and she summoned a smile. "Thank you..." she whispered


message 8865: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Don't mention it."


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"Too late," she laughed hoarsely.


message 8867: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife smiled


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She couldn't stop the stupid tears, and they just kept coming. She dropped her head and let it rest on their hands, shaking with the tears but trying to hold them in. "I hate crying..." she mumbled.


message 8869: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife looked at her
"Well, don't do it then."


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She raised her head and thought about glaring at him, but didn't. "I would if I could."


message 8871: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife nodded "Alright."


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She laughed and wiped away the tears. "You really are a man of few words."


message 8873: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "But you love me for it." Rife winked


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"You caught me," she smiled.


message 8875: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ah-ha!" Rife laughed


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She smiled and looked down, and happened to notice his tattoo. She traced the outline lightly with her fingertips. "What's this?" she murmured to herself.


message 8877: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife looked down at it.
"It's my Mark. You know how Emmy has her Tattoos? Mine is like a tiny version. We all have one."


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She nodded. "It's... beautiful," she smiled.


message 8879: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife grinned
"Thank you."


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She raised her hand to his face, wanting to explore him now, wanting to trace her fingers over more of his skin. He fingers touched his lips, and she blushed as she slid her fingertips across his skin, barely touching.


message 8881: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife closed his eyes, wherever her fingers touched he could feel his skin warm. It was plesant.


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She moved her fingers to his cheek and leaned forwards, pressing her lips to his.


message 8883: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife smiled and put one hand on tghe nape of her neck.


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Her eyes fluttered closed, her fingers drifting across his skin.


message 8885: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife stood up, taking her with him.


message 8886: by [deleted user] (new)

Her lips didn't move from his, and she locked her fingers in his hair.


message 8887: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife stood kissing her deeply. His hands pressing on the small of her back and the nape of her neck, pulling her closer.


message 8888: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: "Emmy blacked out after a few more swipes with the blade.
Yeah you look like her. You just have different eyes. She's harsher."


That sucks..I want to meet her.


message 8889: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Hey Kenny!))

No, you don't.


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She moaned and pulled away slightly, leaning her head back, her eyes still closed as she caught her breath.


message 8891: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife smiled and brushed his fingertips over her eyelids and down her cheek.


message 8892: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((hey..I gots bad news...in my bible study, my group the 'Sole Challengers', we have a challenge this week..starting tomorrow..no FB for them, and no Goodreads for me. Great. This is what I get for not having facebook. So I won't be on until next friday. I think I will DIE. I'm so sorry! But I hope it'll be okay, help my charries out?))

Yes. I do. She's my mom, I want to know her.


message 8893: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((NO WAY!!! I think I might die! You are the only person that I rp with except with Bellie! Ahhh!!! But I'll tottaly help your charries out.))

I see your point.Well, she's in dream hell like my mom. So...


message 8894: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*sobs* thank-you Nephi..I am seriously already going through withdrawal. man I wish I had your email. but I'm not allowed to give mine out I don't think. GAH. I am going to vent in my journal...because that's what this is for..))

Damn, that place isn't easy to get to.


message 8895: by Hannah (last edited Mar 25, 2010 06:50PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((*Sad-face* You're welcome! I know a loop hole to that rule. I'll give you mine. Send me a mssg on goodreads and I'll give it to you. =D))

Really? I can't seem to stay away from that place.


message 8896: by [deleted user] (new)

((Aw, that sucks. I'm sorry!))

Elly let out a quiet, contented sigh. "Rife..."


message 8897: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki, this could be fun! I mean, we could even make a random seperate rp through email..lol))

Well, I might be able to right now...you don't want to know what I did. But it was fun, and good for the both of us involved..I didn't mean to say anything about it..


message 8898: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol yes thatd be wicked cool!))

"Elly..." Rife said smiling.

I don't want to know right now. But I'm glad you had fun doing whatever.


message 8899: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((coolio :P))

Salem's lips twitched into a smile, even in 'slumber'. Ya.Sean was about to kill me.


message 8900: by [deleted user] (new)

((I've done that before with someone. It was great... XD))
((Me too, me too!))

Elly opened her eyes and laughed lightly. "You know... I think Salem will be pretty proud of herself when she hears how well my new nickname has stuck."


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