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message 8601: by [deleted user] (new)

She smiled. "Thank you..." she whispered.


message 8602: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You're welcome." Rife said quietly.


message 8603: by [deleted user] (new)

"Rife... kiss me," she murmured.


message 8604: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "My pleasure." Rife said kissing her again.


message 8605: by [deleted user] (new)

She kissed him back with passion, her hands roaming his back. Her eyes were closed, and her lips parted under his.


message 8606: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife pressed his hands on her back pulling her closer to him.


message 8607: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 22, 2010 05:57PM) (new)

She moaned quietly into his mouth, her hands fisting in his shirt.


message 8608: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife smiled against her lips. Lifting her up a little.


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She put her arms around his neck, fingers weaving themselves into his hair. Her heart was pounding so loud that she could hear it.


message 8610: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife wrapped his arms around her waist.


message 8611: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Poetic Ingenius- [Kenny:] wrote:
Wave's smile widened. "My mommy used ta sing it to me!"

Salem stared at him, "I want to know."

Connie nodded and smiled, but a touch of sadness appeared in her e..."


Waverley's smile faded. "Wha's wrong Connie?"

Salem nodded silently, giving him permission.


message 8612: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy fell against the wall, a Shadow advancing on her with a wicked looking needle
"Aw Shit."


message 8613: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem was still tuned in with Emmy and 'felt' the change. Something bad Em?


message 8614: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments I'm screwed...

Emmy had stood up eyes widening a little.
The Shadow smiled darkly and Emmy found she couldn't move. The needle poked into her skin and felt the molten liquid pouring through her veins. She was out before her knees hit the ground.


message 8615: by Ky (last edited Mar 22, 2010 07:02PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Emmy! But Salem, somehow, knew Emmy wouldn't answer.


message 8616: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik walked in keeping to the Shadows.
"Salem?"


message 8617: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Om my gawd, don't scare me like that!" she jumped, squeezing Sean's hands. "I didn't hear you coming, either way. But ya?"


message 8618: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I'm getting good at that." Patrik mused "You looked freaked out and it made me nervous."


message 8619: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Oh..ya..Something's wrong."


message 8620: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I'm sorry, gtg. gah stupid school nights))


message 8621: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "What is it?" Patrik asked leaning on the doorjamb


message 8622: by [deleted user] (new)

Elly pulled away slightly, just so that her lips no longer touched his. She was panting for breath, and her heart was pounding. "Rife..." she whispered.


message 8623: by [deleted user] (new)

Connie shook her head. "It's nothing, really. Just... I never knew my parents. I don't know if I ever had any."

Sean looked to Patrik, slightly annoyed that the moment had gone. He wanted to be alone with her, with no interruptions.


message 8624: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife smiled catching his breath.

Patrik's eyes flicked to Sean, a dark look on his face. If this bad thing had anything to do with Emmy he needed to know. Sean's feelings could wait.


message 8625: by [deleted user] (new)

Elly smiled back at him. "Rife you make me feel- I've never felt like this before."

Sean looked away.


message 8626: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: ""What is it?" Patrik asked leaning on the doorjamb"

"I lost Emmy."


message 8627: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Connie shook her head. "It's nothing, really. Just... I never knew my parents. I don't know if I ever had any."

Sean looked to Patrik, slightly annoyed that the moment had gone. He wanted to be al..."


"Ever'body has parents you silly goose! 'Else we'd be dead!" Waverley giggled, somehow managing to look horrified.


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Sean frowned. "Oh..." he murmured, listening to her thoughts so he could understand. He looked at Patrik again, sympathetic.


message 8629: by [deleted user] (new)

Connie smiled slightly. "I mean I don't think they even knew me. I think I was taken away soon after I was born. But I'm okay now. The Shadows raised me."


message 8630: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Oh-oh, that's not happy Con-Con," Waverley, if she 'had' parents, didn't know.


message 8631: by [deleted user] (new)

Connie shrugged. "No... but it's okay."


message 8632: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "We gots each otha' though!"


message 8633: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yeah. We have each other." Connie smiled and hugged her.


message 8634: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I gtg))

Waverley grinned and hugged her tight. "I luh you."


message 8635: by [deleted user] (new)

((Bye!))

"I love you, too. You're like a sister to me, Wave."


message 8636: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Uh-huh, ditto!"


message 8637: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Elly smiled back at him. "Rife you make me feel- I've never felt like this before."

Sean looked away."


Rife smiled down at her unsure what to say but sure the look on his face said what words couldn't.

Poetic Ingenius- [Kenny:] wrote: "Nephilim wrote: ""What is it?" Patrik asked leaning on the doorjamb"

"I lost Emmy.""


Patrik looked slightly alarmed but hid it quickly
"Lost as in...?"


message 8638: by [deleted user] (new)

Connie laughed, but then froze as a vision flooded her mind. "Oh, my," she whispered. She stood and looked around. "Excuse me!" She called, "I need to speak to someone!" No-one heard, so she opened the door to their room and beckoned for Wave to come with her.


message 8639: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: "Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Elly smiled back at him. "Rife you make me feel- I've never felt like this before."

Sean looked away."

Rife smiled down at her unsure what to say but sure ..."


"I can't hear her anymore," she was hasty to explain, "But that could just be me."


message 8640: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Connie laughed, but then froze as a vision flooded her mind. "Oh, my," she whispered. She stood and looked around. "Excuse me!" She called, "I need to speak to someone!" No-one heard, so she opened..."

Waverley, feeling Connie's angst, followed quickly.


message 8641: by [deleted user] (new)

Nephilim wrote: Rife smiled down at her unsure what to say but sure the look on his face said what words couldn't.

"I- I think-" Elly bit her lip, paused, then finished, "I love you."


message 8642: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean frowned slightly. "Do you think it could be that someone like Elly is with her? I found out that Elly was shielding Ellis, so that could be it..."


message 8643: by [deleted user] (new)

Connie held Wave's hand. "We're looking for someone I can talk to. We really need to see that girl, as soon as possible."


message 8644: by Ky (last edited Mar 23, 2010 05:07PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I don't think so," Salem said gently, her grip on his hand tightening. "She was nervous about something."

"Yes,yes. I know Connie. That girl needs us."


message 8645: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean nodded, thinking hard.


message 8646: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Nephilim wrote: Rife smiled down at her unsure what to say but sure the look on his face said what words couldn't.

"I- I think-" Elly bit her lip, paused, then finished, "I love you.""


"I love you too." He said the words tenderly.

Patrik raked a hand through his hair, it stuck up at odd angles.
"What- Did?" he seemed to stumble over the words.


message 8647: by [deleted user] (new)

Tears welled in Elly's eyes, but she was smiling.


message 8648: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife laughed
"Girls, always crying when they're happy."


message 8649: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I think someone sedated her." Salem said calmly.


message 8650: by [deleted user] (new)

Nephilim wrote: "Rife laughed
"Girls, always crying when they're happy.""


Elly giggled and nodded. "Sorry..." She buried her face in his neck.


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