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message 8551: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Well..I'll come anyway."


message 8552: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Alright."


message 8553: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Balze smiled.


message 8554: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv grinned


message 8555: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Let's go."


message 8556: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "im already gone."


message 8557: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze chuckled and started running.


message 8558: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv didnt look back, she knew he would be there.


message 8559: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((gtg))

Blaze enjoyed the view.


message 8560: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok byes))
Liv had some wind buffet him from the side.


message 8561: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "HEY!"


message 8562: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv laughed


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Nephilim wrote: "((ok i'll talk to you later.))

"Yeah, I'm sure. Rife smiled trailing his thumb across her lip."


"Thank you..." Elly let her lips part slightly, and she kissed his thumb. "But Rife, I-"
She was scared of her feelings for him, scared that she would end up being made to betray him, just like with Sean. But she couldn't hold them back, and now that she knew he felt the same way, it would be even harder.
"I'm scared I'll hurt you... like I hurt Sean," she whispered the name. "We shouldn't... I don't want to let that happen. We should be friends, and nothing more."


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Poetic Ingenius- [Kenny:] wrote:
Wave's smile widened. "My mommy used ta sing it to me!"

Salem stared at him, "I want to know."


Connie nodded and smiled, but a touch of sadness appeared in her eyes.

Sean's eyes were pained. "Salem. Please. Don't make me tell you... Just let me hold you now- I've been dreaming about it for so long." He looked into her eyes, taking her hands in his. "Please?"


message 8565: by [deleted user] (new)

((My turn to have an idea. XD Have Rife get all mad at Ellis! 'Cause he made Elly so upset and 'cause it's partly his fault that Elly doesn't want to love him.))


message 8566: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Nephilim wrote: "((ok i'll talk to you later.))

"Yeah, I'm sure. Rife smiled trailing his thumb across her lip."

"Thank you..." Elly let her lips part slightly, and she kissed his thumb. "But Ri..."


Rife nodded the smile slowly dying.
"What ever you want Elly." He said nodding looking at her.
"Whatever makes you happy." he murmured


message 8567: by [deleted user] (new)

((Bah. I'll be disappearing soon...))

Tears appeared in Elly's eyes. "I- I don't want it, and it won't make me happy. But I- I don't want to hurt you."


message 8568: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((damn.))

Rife wiped away a stray tear
"You won't though."


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She stared into his eyes and whispered, "How would you know?"


message 8570: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I can tell." Rife said green eyes flashing.


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"Rife... what do you want?" She asked, her hand stroking his cheek.


message 8572: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife thought for a moment then shrugged
"It's complicated."


message 8573: by [deleted user] (new)

She sighed and nodded. "Tell me... please? It's not like we have anything else to do."


message 8574: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife looked down at his hands
"I just want to not feel like I'm on the edge of disaster and waiting for it all to explode. And you give me that. You give me that, its so much better than anything I would have thought."


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She bit her lip, tears coming again. "I... That's how I feel about you. You make me feel like I'm not alone anymore, and... you make me want to let you into my heart. It's been years since I've let anyone in..."


message 8576: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "It's scary, I know." Rife said softly.


message 8577: by [deleted user] (new)

She nodded. "Yes," she breathed. "Scary."


message 8578: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Unbareably so." He murmured.


message 8579: by [deleted user] (new)

She looked into his eyes and sighed. "I don't know if I can. You'll have to... teach me how to let you in."


message 8580: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I can't teach you something like that," Rife sighed standing. "You're going to have to learn that."


message 8581: by [deleted user] (new)

"Don't go," she whispered, standing too. "Can I-" she began to ask, but then shook her head and stood on her tiptoes to touch her lips to his, her fingers twining in his hair and pulling him down to her.


message 8582: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok." Rife said picking her up a little kissing her.


message 8583: by [deleted user] (new)

She closed her eyes and a small sound escaped her mouth as she kissed him back. Her eyes flew open and she pulled away slightly, gasping.


message 8584: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife set her down and looked at her.


message 8585: by [deleted user] (new)

"Sorry," she breathed, "I just- need to catch my breath..." She leaned her head on his chest.


message 8586: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He smiled running his hands over her hair
"We have all the time in the world."


message 8587: by [deleted user] (new)

She shivered as his hands sent tingles throughout her body. "Don't stop," she whispered. "That feels so good..."


message 8588: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments He didn't, and even if she hadn't asked he would have kept running his hands over her hair and down her back.


message 8589: by [deleted user] (new)

"Well..." she said quietly after a few minutes of comfortable silence, "It may not be as hard as I thought."


message 8590: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife laughed quietly.


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She looked up at him and smiled. "You know what I mean, though. Especially with girls... we get all dramatic and we think everything will be too hard... but then we get into it and it's easy. Great, in this case."


message 8592: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Well the grils that I've lived with haven't had much time for relationships." Rife smiled crookedly.


message 8593: by [deleted user] (new)

She laughed. "Girls are that way about everything, though. Not just relationships."


message 8594: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Not mine. Liv and Emmy are different." he laughed "And so are you, for that matter."


message 8595: by [deleted user] (new)

She blushed. "Not really."


message 8596: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yes, you are." Rife said "Trust me."


message 8597: by [deleted user] (new)

"I trust you... with everything," she said solemnly.


message 8598: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I'm glad." Rife said smiling.


message 8599: by [deleted user] (new)

She nodded. "Do you trust me? Do you trust me not to hurt you?"


message 8600: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I do trust you with anything and everything I have to give." Rife said simply.


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