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message 101: by Bharat (new)

Bharat Chugh | 93 comments although he understood that he had done the perfect murder, nobody could possibily guess


message 102: by Ahtims (new)

Ahtims (embeddedinbooks) | 47123 comments Mod
How and why he did it.


message 103: by Bharat (new)

Bharat Chugh | 93 comments Beacuse of his sense of pride in the perfection of his crime, he wanted someone to know, someone to find out why...


message 104: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments he did it...he did not crave glory, but wanted the veil to be lifted...


message 105: by Ahtims (new)

Ahtims (embeddedinbooks) | 47123 comments Mod
So he hatched up a plan to...


message 106: by Preet (new)

Preet Dholabhai (preetdholabhai) | 4 comments show the world that he was not different...


message 107: by Ahtims (new)

Ahtims (embeddedinbooks) | 47123 comments Mod
from any other psychopathic killer who


message 108: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments wanted to kill for the sheer gore and carnage


message 109: by Ahtims (new)

Ahtims (embeddedinbooks) | 47123 comments Mod
He knew that he was much more refined.


message 110: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments He loved the art of killing and the intricate planning that went into it, the look on the face of the victim when he saw his own blood dripping...


message 111: by Shene (new)

Shene (septisme) | 32 comments he would have continued unabated except one day he looked into a mirror whilst holding a knife


message 112: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments and saw what a monster life had made of him


message 113: by Shene (new)

Shene (septisme) | 32 comments he traced the lines of his face


message 114: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments and the contours of his body...


message 115: by Ahtims (new)

Ahtims (embeddedinbooks) | 47123 comments Mod
especially the shape of his knotty skull,


message 116: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments which reminded him of that fateful day


message 117: by Shene (new)

Shene (septisme) | 32 comments when as a child he first saw


message 118: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments the brutal murder of his father


message 119: by Jignesh (new)

Jignesh Patel | 403 comments he swore to avenge his death


message 120: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments and, so, taking a sanctimonious route, he planned


message 121: by Shene (new)

Shene (septisme) | 32 comments plotted and met his Guru who


message 122: by Aditya (last edited Feb 16, 2015 12:51AM) (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments guided him on his path to revenge and revealed secrets


message 123: by Nikhil (new)

Nikhil Chaudhary | 670 comments of the Kratia tribe, thought to be long lost


message 124: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments , both in physical and mental existence...


message 125: by Nikhil (new)

Nikhil Chaudhary | 670 comments His Guru, the wandering samurai, traveled with him from town to town


message 126: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments but he did not teach him, he guided him, he did not impart information.... he imparted observation...


message 127: by Nikhil (new)

Nikhil Chaudhary | 670 comments to the way he fought any rogue or bandit who was stupid enough to challenge him


message 128: by Glen (new)

Glen D'souza | 207 comments the day they parted, the guru handed him a sword.


message 129: by Jerry (new)

Jerry Jose (jerryjose7) | 469 comments then he was struck by a lightening and bitten by a Cobra. Which gave him powers beyond human imagination


message 130: by Sadaf. (new)

Sadaf.   Zulfikar | 22 comments But he no longer looked like a normal human being and so decided to stay in solitude, until he could figure out a way to deal with what he had become.


message 131: by Jerry (new)

Jerry Jose (jerryjose7) | 469 comments Anway to lighten things up, he held the sword of omens up and yelled Death to Mumm-Ra.


message 132: by Kudrat (new)

Kudrat Kaur (princkhera) | 31 comments As he held his sword, just having screamed at the top of his lungs, he's struck by an epiphany.


message 133: by Jerry (new)

Jerry Jose (jerryjose7) | 469 comments Its all coming back to him. Everything makes sense now. He been having visions of alternative timelines that couldnt exist coz of his actions.


message 134: by Kudrat (new)

Kudrat Kaur (princkhera) | 31 comments Now that he's had this revelation. He knows exactly what he needs to do - to get to the timeline he wants. What actions are necessary so that he will...


message 135: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments fulfill his true purpose, exact his revenge, impart justice...


message 136: by Kudrat (new)

Kudrat Kaur (princkhera) | 31 comments upon those who have wronged not only him, but those he cares about. The first thing he needs to do is...


message 137: by Aditya (new)

Aditya Jain | 4115 comments to plan, for failing to plan is planning to fail...


message 138: by Miria (new)

Miria | 112 comments Then he decides to walk north and


message 139: by [deleted user] (new)

caught unaware, walks into an ambush of


message 140: by [deleted user] (new)

he decided to go home and talk with his friends


message 141: by [deleted user] (new)

and then they started dancing...


message 142: by Shreya (new)

Shreya Choudhury Just when he was dancing,there was a series of footsteps approaching towards him


message 143: by Srihari (new)

Srihari Vijayakumar | 11 comments a hooded figure was staring right at him


message 144: by Diptarup (new)

Diptarup Ghosh Dastidar | 12 comments He could discern his figure as akin to the man of his dreams with the gun, but


message 145: by Sumeet (new)

Sumeet Mahendra (sumt7) | 191 comments His heart doesn't let him to do so then with sudden urge from inside I move forward to...


message 146: by Abhishek (new)

Abhishek Beracah (abisek) | 329 comments ...to bark of the tree to get a closer look at the hooded man but he was astonished to find no face inside the hood. He took out his gun....


message 147: by Ahtims (new)

Ahtims (embeddedinbooks) | 47123 comments Mod
and chewed a gum


message 148: by Abhishek (new)

Abhishek Beracah (abisek) | 329 comments "eww - the gum taste like ****" he though to himself and spit it out and aimed at the empty walking hooded ghost and shot it right at the chest.....


message 149: by Ahtims (new)

Ahtims (embeddedinbooks) | 47123 comments Mod
alas, the bullet just passed through and pierced a....


message 150: by Abhishek (last edited Jan 25, 2016 01:33AM) (new)

Abhishek Beracah (abisek) | 329 comments .. man walking behind the empty hooded man. He was crying with pain. When he came closer, little did he know that it was his long lost....


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