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message 351: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina burst out into giggled grinning widely at her cousins actions and soon the whole place was filled with circus animals and people, clowns included and Sabrina was clapping as she hollered, "AND LET THE GAMES BEGIN!"


message 352: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I stopped, turning to the audience and held up three fingers. "AND MAY THE ODDS BE EVER IN YOUR FAVOR!"


message 353: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina began laughing as the circus began and the crowd roared going crazy over the spectacular performance, while the other part roared and hollered about how stupid this was and bring on the fighting. Blah blah... Those numbers began decreasing.
"THE FIRST ACT!" Sabrina called out grinning and gestured to the amazing lion tamer, "THE LION TAMER!"
The crowd went crazy just as someone touched Sabrina waist and she whipped around to see who and froze her Eyes when she saw none other then...........


message 354: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Nathaniel.

That person was;
Nate.


message 355: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I stopped, staring at them before smiling. I ran over giggling. "Nate! Nate is that you? You...you look older!!" And with that I hugged him tightly.


message 356: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Nate growled before he looked at Astra and pried her off him before tossing her away, "it's cause I am little cousin," he snarled before his gaze flickered to Sabrina who stood frozen with fear, "I have someone very special to you Sabrina, he looked lost, so I decided to help him," he purred his grin sinister while the whole colosseum erupted into flames.


message 357: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked around. "Nate have you bowler found your Juliet?" I asked with a grin. "She should tame you." I laughed.


message 358: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((What??))


message 359: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) ((She's asking if he's found his mate cause he's being a dick))


message 360: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Ahhhh okay))

Nate glared at Astra, "you've found yours and he's not tamed is he?" He snarled before he flicked his hand in her direction and caused Her to go flying....
Sabrina screamed and appeared behind Astra just in time so she landed on Sabrina instead of hard against the wall...


message 361: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I groaned slightly before wincing as I hugged Sabrina. "I'm sorry." I apologized before instantly appeared in nates face growling. "What the hell?! What crawled in your pants and bit your ass?!"


message 362: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina grunted ignoring the pain and her bleeding out form before shoving Astra out of the way before Nate had a chance to strike at her, "don't you dare hurt our cousin or Lucian!" She screamed and blasted him with an earth shattering blast that caused him to fly back and Into his own flaming field. Sabrina heaved out breaths shaking insanely before collapsing onto her knees glancing at Astra tears falling from her face, "I'm so sorry..."


message 363: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I shook my head before hugging her "no apologizing! It's my fault! I'm sorry Sabrina!!"


message 364: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina collapsed into her sobbing freely now, "he's gone Astra!" She cried out her whole body shaking, "I felt the cord snap, he's dead, my love is dead," she began crying hysterically as she clung to her cousin grief and guilt taking hold of her consuming her.


message 365: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I shook my head. "No! He wouldn't! I can bring him back!! I will try!! I can try!!! I won't let you hurt!" I said as a tear rolled down my cheek.


message 366: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina continued to sob helplessly, "he's gone Astra, it's been cut, he's gone for good," she cried into Astra's shoulder holding her tightly.

Estella appeared moments later seeing them and came rushing over falling to her knees beside them and wrapped them both into a hug comforting them both as Sabrina's sobs consumed the air.


message 367: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "I'm so so sorry..." I said softly as I nuzzled into both of them. "I'm sorry"


message 368: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sabrina gained some composure to pull away snuffling and wiped her eyes, "it wAsnt Nate, it was my fault, I killed him, I killed Nate... She saw it... And she killed Lucian," she began sobbing again and Estella rubbed her back.
"Who is she?" She asked softly.
"Katherine," Sabrina choked out and collapsed onto Estella's lap and sobbed.


message 369: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "Who's kathrine?" I asked


message 370: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella shuddered and looked at Astra, "Katherine is a witch, but she was selfish... She wanted to be immortal too... She's the first vampire, she found a spell that made her immortal. But it turned out that the spell which included drinking from an infant, but it would mean she would have to drink blood forever or she'd die...." Estella stated coldly rubbing the sobbing Sabrina's back, "Katherine it now vampire with the abilities of both vampire and witch..... And she had the strangest obsession for Nate, she must have saw Sabrina 'kill' him and she killed Lucian for revenge," she said softly causing Sabrina's wails to increase...


message 371: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "But it was a mistake...and doesn't she know he comes back?" I asked


message 372: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella laughed, "yes but she doesn't care, she already hates Sabrina, this was just a perfect way to get back at her," she snarled angrily as Sabrina's sobs began to quiet down as she slipped slowly into unconsciousness.


message 373: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I growled, slipping out of the hug and darted off. I wasn't going to let this chick win.


message 374: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "Astra! There is nothing you can do-" but Estella's voice was lost with distance.....

A figure appeared in front of Astra successfully stopping her and a husky voice growled, "what do you think you are doing?"


message 375: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I jumped back. "None of your business!" I said before trying to walk past.


message 376: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle grasped her wrist in an iron grip pulling her hard and fast against him glaring down at her, "it is my business, you won't go after her," he stated in a snarl.


message 377: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "It is not your business and I shall do what I please! If you like it or not!" I said trying to pull away.


message 378: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle's grip was firm tight, unyielding as he growled glaring down at her, "I OWN you, you will do whatever I say!" He shouted at her his eyes black, "you WILL NOT go after her! You WILL listen or else suffer the consequences!"


message 379: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "YOU DO NOT OWN ME!" I snapped right back before shifting into a small dragon, slipping out of his arms before shifting back. "AND YOU WILL NOT TELL ME WHAT TO DO!" And with that I bolted.


message 380: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kylie's roar could be heard, causing the ground to shake.... But when and if she looked back... He would not be there.


message 381: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) ((Ha! You said Kylie XD))

I jumped slightly before I ran faster knowing if he was coming after me he could easily catch up.


message 382: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((Dammit autocorrect))

**kyle's

That's when she banged into something..... Just that something wAsnt visible and a yelp could be heard before dust moved like someone had fallen.


message 383: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I took a step back, wondering what happened. I looked around trying to comprehend it.


message 384: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "You-you ran into me," a small voice stammered but there was no one around.


message 385: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "What?"


message 386: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Slowly before Astra a small golden haired child sat on the ground tears in her golden green specked eyes, "you ran-ran Into me," she whimpered as though she was shocked.


message 387: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "I'm so sorry!" I said crouching down. "I didn't mean to. Are you alright?" I said trying to bring the child into my lap.


message 388: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "No! D-don't touch me," she cried smalls sobs leaving her small body but she froze surprised that the girl was able to hold her and curled up into a ball on Astra's lap sobbing.


message 389: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I bit my lip, placing gloves on my hands before I carefully rubbed her back in a calming way. "What is your name sweetheart?"


message 390: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) The girl blinked by tears as she curled into her before she looked up at her, "a-Adrianna," she stammered before biting her lip swallowing hard...


message 391: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled at her. "Adrianna, that's such a pretty name. im Astra."


message 392: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Adrianna smiled softly before hugging herself, "do you know where my mummy is?" She asked softly, "I don't know where she is. Can you help me Astra?" She asked in a small voice.


message 393: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "whats her name, or at least what she looks like?" I said softly before smiling


message 394: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Adrianna thought hard before frowning wiping her eyes, "my mommy looks like me... But she had green eyes, pretty green eyes," she said her lower lip quivering.


message 395: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "Okay, where did you last see her?" I asked softly.


message 396: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) The little girl. Adrianna blinked like she was trying to remember and tears started sneaking out again, "I don't know..." She whispered brokenly.


message 397: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nodded slightly, getting up as I scooped her into my arms. I guess the stupid bloodsucker will have to wait for now. I started to head back, maybe Estella and Sabrina could help.


message 398: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Adrianna yelped her small hands gripping onto her tightly as if fearful she'll fall....
Estella was still holding Sabrina, comforting the broken girl...


message 399: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "Stella.." I called out softly.


message 400: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella frowned before she whispered softly to Sabrina before Sabrina nodded and stood up wiping her tears as they appeared in front of her, "yes?" Estella asked while Sabrina looked down at her feet.


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