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message 501: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) **HE! (its a he, he had a dick XD)

"its helps control my dragon. they act funny...act funny around you" he said but blushed


message 502: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira looked at him confused, "it acts funny around me?" she asked confused before she giggled, "watch this," she said eagerly, just as lily pads began growing and soon blossoming.


message 503: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos smiled, trying his hardest to hide his blush and he watched the flowers in awe.


message 504: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira giggled softly as on grew right around him and she grinned, "it likes you!" she said brightly, "flowers are the best judge of characters," she whispered as if it was secret.


message 505: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) he smiled, it was a large, kind smile. "well i like them too"


message 506: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira beamed at him brightly giggling as she gently caressed the nearest flower, "not everyone does..." she whispered softly.


message 507: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) he frowned. "they should. theyre beautiful" he smiled


message 508: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira beamed at him, "That is so kind," she said, "so why does your dragon calm in the water?"


message 509: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos shrugged. "im npt sure, notmally i heat up the water but now, its like something is connecting me and relaxing my inner beast. but i like it"


message 510: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira giggled, "that's cute," she chirped before looking at him curiously, "could i see him?" she asked softly.


message 511: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "who? my dragon?" he questioned. why on earth wpuld she want to see him, its just an ugly side of him, no one liked.


message 512: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira nodded, "yes, your dragon," she agreed with a soft smile, "unless you don't want to... it's okay..."


message 513: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos shook his head. "no ill do it" he said and slipped out of the water, shaking himself off before he closed his blue eyes and when he opened them they were gold reptile eyes. he shifted from boy to large violet almost black dragon. he looked at her, he was small, but he was a kid, he scurried over to her and curled up in her lap


message 514: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira had swam over to the shore and hopped up, sitting on the grass close to the water. She watched him with large fascinated violet eyes (oddly would be the same shade as his dragon i just realized) and gaped in awe seeing him shift. Once he was on her lap she giggled at him as she held him close and nuzzled him, "you're so cute! I love him," she chirped happily as she began to pet him.


message 515: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos looked up at her with bright eyes and he licked her face, hopping up like a puppy and pushed her down on her back as he licked her face, he made a spund equivilent to a purr


message 516: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira squealed when he did this, falling onto her back and was giggling uncontrollable at his kisses, "dragon kisses!" she squealed closing her eyes and squinched up her face trying to stop herself from giggling as she soon went to stop him.


message 517: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos grinned at her giggle, loving it as he rolled on her, rubbing his face into hers and into her neck, rubbing his scent on her.


message 518: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira, after wiping her face, began giggling when he did this, his scales scratching against her made her ticklish, so she began squealing with laughter.
((damn possessive dragon lol))


message 519: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) ((lol you think its cute))

demos smiled and was soon laying on her torso purring as his tongue was flicked out between his teeth like a happy cat. his eyes were closed but he was very much awake. he just loved being near her.


message 520: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((I think it's adorable!!!))

Sapphira was zapped of energy from all that laughing. She soon wrapped her arms around Demos, pulling him up and closer as she turned onto her side, cradling him against her as she whispered a soft goodnight before her open eyes fluttered shut, and she was soon sleeping.


message 521: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos opened his eyes in shock before he saw what she had done amd he smiled, nuzzling against her.


message 522: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira smiled in her sleep cause of this, snuggling close to him. She woke up a while later, still cuddling with him, her violet eyes fluttered eyes and her pink tongue darted out and curled in a yawn. She then blinked and seeing Demos smiled.


message 523: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos was contently purring as his tail swished. he was still asleep but his ears perked up at her yawn befpre his golden eyes slowly opened to look at her


message 524: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira giggled smiling at him as she began to pet him again, her finger curling around his tail. "You're really pretty.."


message 525: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) he purred louder, his smile growing at her touch. he moved closer, placing his head to hers. not as pretty as you


message 526: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Sapphira gasped, her eyes flying even wider then it originally were. "Oh my river goddess! I heard you!" she exclaimed excitedly and began to giggle, "I'm not that pretty silly," she muttered blushing as she petted him again. Suddenly though, something in the water grabbed her leg and with a startled scream she was pulled into the river, leaving him there on the shore.
The only signs of her was the bubbled water from her screams, and a single purple water lily, that matched the colour of her eyes.


message 527: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos instantly shifted into his self again. "Sapphira!" he cried before diving after her. he looked around


message 528: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) once under


message 529: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Nothing, just darkness, too still, too dark nothing. She was gone......

Estella was shaking as she appeared in the forest, trying to calm down enough, she had to find her sister, before it was too late... She had to warn her away from him... God if he broke their deal she will kill him.

A note appeared in Astra's hand, stating for her to come to the Colosseum.


message 530: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) demos soon came out of the water, gagging before he looked back into it. he made a promise, hed find her, and when he did he would protect her properly and never let any harm come her way. he loved her.

i looked down at the note before looking around. i wasnt that far from it. i began to walk. wondering who gave me the note in the first place, oh well, ill find out shortly


message 531: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ((awe!))

When she got there, in the middle of the arena, was a blanket with a basket laying on it. But not only that, but the blonde haired beauty of Kyle laid there, looking at her with a cocky smirk with his arms behind his head, pillowing it.


message 532: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i looked at him oddly before walking over to him. "and what are you doing?" i asked curiously, he seemed, normal liked this, i think i liked it.


message 533: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle beamed at her, "taking a hot girl for a picnic, by the way she should be here soon, you should go," he teased sitting up and gestured her to sit.


message 534: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i sat down bext to him before cocking my head. "i dont know weither to take that as a complement or a conplete diss." i said with a smile


message 535: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle winked at her, "take it as both then beautiful," he purred teasingly and sat up, "so lets call this a date lovely and snack on it," he purred opening the basket to a vary of delicious foods.


message 536: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i smiled before i put my hand to his forhead. "you dont have a fever or something? are you feeling alright?" i asked curiously.


message 537: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle gave her a look, "I don't think demons can get sick sweetie, is it bad that I want to do something romantic with you?" He inquired as he began taking out the food.


message 538: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "dont know, last time you tried romance i woke up in your bed practically naked." i said with a slight smile. "and i thought you dont do, romance" i said dramatically


message 539: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle laughed, "don't tell me you didn't like it," he purred wiggling his eyebrows, "I am amazing at romance, trust me, I know how to woo a lady," he teased and handed her a plate.


message 540: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i smiled, laughing slightly at his comment. "to woo a lady you must do as seen" i said in a fake british tone and thanked him for the plate.


message 541: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle winked, "monkey see monkey do lovely," he teased and brought his drink to his lips, "to romancing and wooing!"


message 542: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i smiled, rolling my eyes slightly as i watched him. somethings odd about this.


message 543: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle downed the drink easily, since he wasn't one to get drunk and nodded at her plate, "eat Astra, it won't bite," he teased her lightly, knowing he was mentally fucked up for doing this, but sadly his demon was finally, vreeeoup gone, locked up tightly and for once not controlling his every move.


message 544: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i nodded before i looked down before back up at him. "thank you" i said softly before taking a bite


message 545: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle nodded and they lapsed into silence as they ate the gorgeous food.


message 546: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) once i was done i put the plate down next to me and smiled at him. "so whats the real reason for all of this


message 547: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle finished soon before her and was licking his lips watching her. "I wanted to so something for my mate," he stated simply, "is that a crime?"


message 548: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i shook my head. "it cpuld be, and stella is the cop" i said before chuckling. "no im just surprised about it, i would of never thought youd do something like this."


message 549: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle laughed at that knowing she was right about that, Estella would be originally the cop..... But since the deal.... He smirked slightly, his demon coming out as he winked at her, leaning closer so his breath would tickle across her flesh, "that's what you get for assuming precious," he purred.


message 550: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) i sighed, a shiver taking over me as i gently cupped his neck. "havent you heard, assuming is so in right now. i get in trouble for assuming just the little things." i purred looking into his eyes, my green eye peeking out from my bangs. i could be a living ragdoll every girl wants, you know, if you braided my hair and made me look plasic, or fabric. i never understood my looks. long brown hair, one blue eye and one green. i was way off from stella, with her long red and stunning cream eyes. i couldnt believe it.


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