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message 51: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I shook my head. "This is a dream, just a dream." I said before walking away


message 52: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) She simply slammed into a wall of shadows, "it may be a dream little star... But I control it... And I can and will do anything," he said and she then was surrounded by shadows so dense it was sucking out the oxygen...


message 53: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I gasped, coughing as I searched for an exit. Not finding one I collapsed onto my stomach. "S....s....st-"


message 54: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "What's that little star? Say it louder," he purred sinisterly...


message 55: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I gaged on nothing, no air in my lungs to speak no voice I mouthed the words: stop...please stop!


message 56: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle laughed and appeared in front of her, "learn to fear the big bad wolf," he growled in her face before the shadows were gone and everything he brought left with him...


message 57: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I rolled onto my back, breathing heavily as tears rolled down my cheeks. "S-Stella....!" I cried out. "I'm so sorry!"


message 58: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) ~~~~


message 59: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I shot up, tumbling out of the tree, landing on the ground. "Shit...a dream..." I laughed. "Just a dream. Thank god. It...it felt so real"


message 60: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella was standing over her scowling, "I told you... But you refused to listen!" She snapped scowling at her.


message 61: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I rushed up and hugged her tightly. "Stella I'm so sorry....I really am." I said gently sobbing.


message 62: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella immediately softened holding her in a comforting hug, "it's okay, it's okay, I won't let him hurt you," she cooed softly rubbing her back as she held her head swaying her slightly...


message 63: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I nuzzled Into her, holding her tighter as I shook slightly in fear.


message 64: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella hugged her tighter holding her like a mother would hold a child to comfort her..


message 65: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) "Awe...how sweet, a family reunion. Now I wonder what would happen if someone where to break this moment up..." a husky voice purred from behind them.


message 66: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella stiffened opening her eyes and slowly turned her head narrowing her cream eyes when she saw who it was, "ah shit, not you," she growled holding her sister tighter...


message 67: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked over to see a man with bright silver eyes and dark messy hair. He smirked at us devilishly. "Awe miss Estella, miss Astra. How nice it is to see you." He turned his gaze to me. "Astra, how's about you go find Kyle. He's been waiting for you."
I shook my head. "No! Go fuck a tree."
Calix laughed. "Yes I will fuck my sweet." He purred. "Now go!" His eyes glowed brightly a I felt my mind take control and I began to walk away, heading deeper and deeper into the woods as I neared shadows.

Calix smiled. "Now....where were we....hello my dear time angel..."


message 68: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella gasped watching her sister walk away and knowing she couldn't do anything about it... She growled whipping around to face him and struck him hard against his cheek with her hand, "you meany!" She snapped at him turning around to run after her sister..


message 69: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix chuckles before she was surrounded by a huge wall of flames. And he was right behind her. "Well my time angel...what shall be the first thing on out list?" He said as his hands caressed her sides.


message 70: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella yelped when she almost ran into the flames and stumbled back to only run into him which meant she went to move away but that's when his hands caressed her sides and she swallowed hard, "what.. What do you want?" She stammered refusing to look anywhere but the ground as she convinced her knees to stay locked and not to crumble beneath her...


message 71: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Kyle soon appeared walking behind Astra silently following with a sly smile..


message 72: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix smiled. "I want you" he purred in her ear before he pinned her against him, and he attacked her neck with kisses.

Once I was far enough away my head shook an I looked around confused. "Where...? Where am I? Estella?"


message 73: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella gasped when he said this and shuddered when he began attacking her neck and squirmed trying to get away but only to realize she was trapped anyway with the fire... "Stop please," she begged him fighting her bodies desire refusing him.

Kyle chuckled and slid behind her, "Estella's busy with my cousin, having her little fun.... Leaving us to have ours," he purred in her ear as he brought his hand up to clasp her shoulder tightly brushing away her hair to reach her ear, "I know you want me," he purred in her ear and chuckled pressing her against him...


message 74: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix smiled. "Give in to your needs and desires. It will only make it better. Common...you know you love this..." He purred before licking her neck gently.

I swallowed hard before stiffening. "No.." I muttered


message 75: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella growled, "no leave me alone... I don't even know you! I don't love it and your insane!" She spewed crazily shuddering under his obviously skilled tongue...

Kyle chuckled and nipped her ear before purring, "liar."


message 76: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix chuckled before trailing a finger down her back. "Give in...give I'm.." He taunted in her ear.

I shook my head. "If I wanted you I would of have myself to you...no!" I said struggling to get out of his grip knowing very well what I said were lies.


message 77: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella shivered biting her lip before she growled whipping around to face him glaring at him hard, "I don't even know your name if you even think I'd 'give in' then there's something wrong with your brain!" She snarled backing slowly away from him her hair matching the flames surrounding them...

Kyle laughed against her neck pulling her closer, "we both know that was lies, all of it.... You don't roll that way.... And the only reasons your too scared to admit it is cause of what you sister has said about me... And what I showed you... You know I'm dangerous," he said and then in her ear her purred, "and you like it," he purred.


message 78: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix smirked. "Oh my manners have left me. I do apologize, Calix is my name and you're my game." He purred with a chuckle, as the flames vanished and she was pinned to the ground. "And yet...you still deny the desires you have."

I swallowed. Why?! Why was this all true?! Why couldn't I control myself! I did find him attractive, yes. But still! I didn't answer, unable to anyways. I shook my head.


message 79: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella yelped when he pinned her to the ground and squirmed desperately to try and get away from him before she froze staring at him in shock, "calix? Your thee calix? I thought you wouldn't.... Look.. So... Appealing," she muttered shaking her head and mumbled to herself distracted already...

Kyle laughed and whipped her around to press he against him smirking down at her, "why do you insist on denying it? Us?" He sneered at her before he captured her lips with his..


message 80: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix smiled. "Yeah I'm that sexy ass demon." He purred kissing her neck. "My time angel"

I froze for a moment before placing my hands on his chest melting into the kiss before pulling away. "Us?"


message 81: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella snapped out of her thoughts and stared at him stunned, "but... Your evil!" She snarled and thrashed, "let me go!"

Kyle smiled victoriously down at her, "yes us... Your going to be mine," he hissed seductively in her ear...


message 82: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix smiled. "I may be evil...but you are mine and you will always be." He stated.

I stumbled back away from him. "No"


message 83: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "No!" Estella shouted glaring at him her eyes turning... Well one red while the other pure white, "your in my future! I don't see you in my future so your not! And I am not! So let me go!" She shouted thrashing as she tried to escape...

Kyle growled his eyes turning black as he snarled at her, "yes."


message 84: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix smiled as he viciously pressed her lips against Hers.

I shivered before pushing him away. "Never! Never will I be yours!! Never will there be us! You sick bastard!" I shouted before running


message 85: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella's eyes shot wide with shock before she screamed against his mouth and bit his lip... Hard.... Her hair becoming real flames...

Kyle chuckled and she simply ran into Kyle who appeared in her way and caught her before she feel, "what no thanks for you knight?" He purred grinning down at her..


message 86: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix growled before he retrieved his lip back. "Naughty naught star. Naughty!"

I struggled to get away from him. "LET ME GO!"


message 87: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella growled at him both of her eyes now red, blood red, "bite me," she hissed the flames of her hair slowly slithering down to consume her body.... "I warned you pretty boy.... Time and time again," she purred viciously, "But didn't anyone ever tell you not to play with fire?" She asked leaning slightly forward as her eyes were consumed by the flames too and she whispered, "cause you'll only get burned."

Kyle grinned down at her pulling her closer, "now why would I do that little star?"


message 88: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix got to his feet, just watching her now. "Oh honey I don't get burned. Never will."

I tried my best to push myself away. "Cause I said so! STELLA!"


message 89: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella instantly was on her feet the fire cooling down till it was just her hair and she winked at him, "the players in the end are the ones to always burn..." She purred before there suddenly were two Estella's but one just had her normal red hair.... Before the one Estella left leaving the one with fiery hair... "Shouldn't you be running?"

The other Estella appeared as grasped ahold of Astra, "leave my sister alone you devil!" She snarled kicking his knee out but that only angered Kyle and he growled releasing Astra, "I will be back... And it will be the end of you both," he snarled viciously before he disappeared..


message 90: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix smiled. "Nope! I'm enjoying this."

I shrugged her tightly. "Thank you!" I cried into her shoulder.


message 91: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella grinned, "then you'll really like this part," she purred and lunged at him only to shift into her fire dragon the moment she tackled him to the ground and snarled in his face huffing out a breath of smoke pinning him down easily....

Estella nodded hugging her and comforted her, "it's okay little sis, it's gonna be alright.... I'm sorry I didn't get here sooner... That bastard names calix was keeping me busy," she scowled but continued to hug her....


message 92: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix smiled as he sucked in all the smoke. "Mmm..." He purred. He trailed a finger down the side of her face.

I pulled away slightly to look up at her. "Okay...ew...I don't need to know..." I said before giggling.


message 93: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella looked down at him disgusted and went to snap off his fingers...
don't touch me vile creature..
She snarled into his mind..

Estella looked at her taken aback, "not that way! Astra!" She said sharply looking at her with her mouth gaping open, "why would I do such a thing! God Astra!"


message 94: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) Calix giggled before pecking her head. "Catch you later, love" he said before vanishing.

I giggled. "I know but it could be true"


message 95: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella snarled angrily before she too disappeared morphing back into herself...
Estella gave her a disgusted look, "hell no! I would never do it with him," she shuddered at the thought before she too began chuckling...


message 96: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I took a breath before relaxing. "I'm really sorry for everything I've done..."


message 97: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) Estella shook her head stepping away and brushed a hand through her hair, "it's not your fault, just stay as far away from Kyle as you can... We should go to- wait she's busy," she mumbled and thought long and hard...


message 98: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I looked up at her oddly. "To where?"


message 99: by ӍдѕҞa (new)

ӍдѕҞa (whichsidewillyouchoose) "I was gonna suggest seeing Sabrina... Nuts she's busy at the moment..." Estella mumbled before looking up at Astra, "what do you wanna do?" She asked excitedly...


message 100: by Nightmare (new)

Nightmare Queen (hadesdaughter) I smiled up at her. "Can we got to Greece? I remember when you use to take me when we were younger and I just loved it."


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