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They sound so cool!

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Believe me they are. You'll love the brothers, they're so funny and they actually care about each other

[[deleted user]]

Sounds good.

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

=)

Well, i g2g but hopefully we'll chat soon....
bye and night!
xoxo

[[deleted user]]

Bye and night

haha
cya!
xoxo

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

anyone on??

[[deleted user]]

Anyone on??

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

i am now
r u still there?

[[deleted user]]

Yeah, im still here
How u going??

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

I'm good =)
Just working on my story some more.

How u going? How was ur day?

[[deleted user]]

Im okay.

My day was good. I walked into a pole thing today and really hurt myself so my shoulders and neck and upper back are all sore. But other than that im okay.

How's your story going?

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Omg haha, sorry...that just sounds like something i'd do, lol. I hope your shoulders and back feel better soon though.

Not bad, not bad. I only got one more chapter and the epilogue to go and them i'm done. Gonna be sad when i'm finished, but i'm proud i've completed it.

[[deleted user]]

Thx :) lol

Wow! That's gonna be so cool!!

Completing a book!
I wanna finish mine now hahaha

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

You're welcome =)

It's gonna be. It's a big thing for me considering how short my attention span can be at times, lol.
Seriously, it's almost 300 pages on Word. I'm thinking of seeing if i can get it published. That'd be cool.

Keep working on it and you'll get there. How r u going btw?? I haven't had time to check and see if you've updated lately.....

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That would be amazing if you got it published!!
I was reading some other discussion on GR and they were talking about a girl who got her book published at 13 I think they said and they said it wasn't even good. And I've read some of your writing and its amazing so I think you have an amazing chance at getting it published!

[[deleted user]]

My books going okay.. Im almost up to the 4th chapter.

[[deleted user]]

I have updated it since you last read it I think...

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

It'd be such an incredible feeling if someone actually decided they wanted to publish it!
Thank-you. I'm been told by a few people that they think it's good enough to be published, but i guess i'm very critical of myself. Plus it's a lot harder in Oz than it is in the States to get a book published.

I think so too. Well, hopefully you'll add more on here soon and i'll check it out for you

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It is alot harder in Oz.

Thanks that would be good to hear your opinion.
I probably have heaps of grammatical errors but i'll sort them out when I've finished it.

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Yeah, it is unfortunately.

Okay, i'll let you know how you go in regards to that.

[[deleted user]]

Okay thanks! :)

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Np =)

So anything else new?
I started reading Clockwork Angel today. It's soooo good. Different to Mortal Instruments, but still good as hell.

Have you read the mortal instruments trilogy by Cassandra Clare?

[[deleted user]]

No I havn't. I have heard it is really good though.

[[deleted user]]

I was wondering, (You don't have too) If maybe you would consider editing my story. I completely understand if you don't want to, I mean you have to write your own story and edit that, but when I've finished it.

[[deleted user]]

You really dont have too though

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Oh, you HAVE to read it! Seriously, i won't take no for an answer! It's one of those MUST READ series's.
Oh, god Jace.....honestly i'm sighing just thinking about it.
It's my second fave series after VA and there was moments when i was reading it if i wondered if it would end up trumping VA. It didn't, but just for me to have considered it is SAYING SOMETHING!

[[deleted user]]

WOW!! Sounds like I HAVE! to read it!!!

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

You do have to read it!

Okay, i'll edit you're story. Just give me a few days until i have some free time and i'll have a go at the chapters you have up.
The only thing with me editing is that you lose the opportunity to go over it yourself. That's usually the time when a writer is able to fix and add things. (That's what i do)

[Sophie *Ninja Rapunzel*]

hellooo guys, howz it going? :)

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Sophie *Ninja Rapunzel* wrote: "hellooo guys, howz it going? :)"

Hey, Soph..... it's going good for me. I'm busy as hell, but i like it....how u going??

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Rachel wrote: "You do have to read it!

Okay, i'll edit you're story. Just give me a few days until i have some free time and i'll have a go at the chapters you have up.
The only thing with me editing is that..."

That would be great... Umm... I'm okay with that. As long as its got the main points that I have written and sounds good. Then im okay with that.
Thankyou! Oh and You didn't have to edit it now! hahaha I was gonna wait until I finished it!

Hello Sophie! How are you!?

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

★ Kaycee ★ wrote: "Rachel wrote: "You do have to read it!

Okay, i'll edit you're story. Just give me a few days until i have some free time and i'll have a go at the chapters you have up.
The only thing with me edi..."

Okay i'll try and focus on the grammar mainly and leave the ideas to you lol

[Sophie *Ninja Rapunzel*]

yesss, busy for me too. i have so much homework tonight (i havent had homework in a few months... other than assignments and its killing me) but i seriously cant be bothered doing it... and im gonna be screwed if i dont get started on it now.. :\

how was your day today girlies? :P

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That would be great thankyou!!
Im just so terrible with grammar and paraphrasing and all that stuff. Ideas - No problem! Grammar - Kill me now!!

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Sophie *Ninja Rapunzel* wrote: "yesss, busy for me too. i have so much homework tonight (i havent had homework in a few months... other than assignments and its killing me) but i seriously cant be bothered doing it... and im gonn..."

Fine, for me. What about you?

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Soph: My day was good, it's my early finish day with school so i've been relaxing and trying to read. Oh, i'm working the the last couple of chapter's to Destined. I'm just about done!

Kaycee: I was bad with grammar once too. But i've gotten better, thanks to hard work and lots of scoldings from my English teacher lol

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Rachel wrote: "Soph: My day was good, it's my early finish day with school so i've been relaxing and trying to read. Oh, i'm working the the last couple of chapter's to Destined. I'm just about done!

Kaycee: I..."

Hahaha... My english teacher sucks!! She knows nothing!

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

★ Kaycee ★ wrote: "Rachel wrote: "Soph: My day was good, it's my early finish day with school so i've been relaxing and trying to read. Oh, i'm working the the last couple of chapter's to Destined. I'm just about don..."

This was my teacher the year before last. He was a god, and he helped me so much. I'd be screwed if i hadn't had his help

[[deleted user]]

Sounds like an amazing teacher!

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

He was. He left the school unfortunately :(

[Sophie *Ninja Rapunzel*]

:O your nearly done?!?! i have to catch up with it over the holidays... and i need to add mroe to mine too- its been a while since ive added a new chapter, LOL
stupid school :(

[[deleted user]]

That sucks!

[[deleted user]]

No offense to my school but the teachers arn't exactly genius...

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Sophie *Ninja Rapunzel* wrote: ":O your nearly done?!?! i have to catch up with it over the holidays... and i need to add mroe to mine too- its been a while since ive added a new chapter, LOL
stupid school :("

I know Soph! It seems like forever that you last added to it. I wanna know what's gonna happen. Dean mainly *blushes* but with everything else too....
Yep almost done, 1 chappy and the epiloque to go, then that's it. Done, dusted, finished.....

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

★ Kaycee ★ wrote: "No offense to my school but the teachers arn't exactly genius..."

I have a few good ones at my school and a couple that i'm fairly sure i'd learn more by being taught by a wall.

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Hahahaha!!

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

★ Kaycee ★ wrote: "Hahahaha!!"

Hey, don't laugh. It's the truth!
;D

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Haha, Im not laughing what are you talking about :P lol

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Sure you're not, sure you're not *rolls eyes*

Ahhhh, lovley ladies i gotta go.
Kaycee, Soph i'll chat with ya soon.
Later!
xoxo

[[deleted user]]

Okay!
Bye :)
xoxo back at ya! hehe