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[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Kaycee wrote: "WOW! I'll have to read it!"

??? Destined???

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Yeah... I would read it write now but i have so many ideas for my book i just keep typing!

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Lol, just keep doing what you're doing, it's not going anywhere lol.
IF you do decide to read it, and i'm not saying you have too, the first 10 chapters or so are really raw. It gets better as it goes

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right* not write arr

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Rachel wrote: "Lol, just keep doing what you're doing, it's not going anywhere lol.
IF you do decide to read it, and i'm not saying you have too, the first 10 chapters so so are really raw. It gets better as it..."

Okay :D

I need a boys name!
Any ideas?

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Hmmmm, what does he look like and how does he act??
Is he your main guy??

[[deleted user]]

Yeah he's my main guy.

He has black hair and bright green eyes.
He is a very strong person and stands up for what he believes in and people he loves. He's good guy and has a good sense of humour.

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Oh and he's really confident but very serious at times

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Haha...the gut in my Destined sequel had black hair and green eyes lol


Hmmm, i'm thinking. Do YOU have any names in mind???

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Umm...

Logan, Eli, Simon......

??

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Kaycee wrote: "Umm...

Logan, Eli, Simon......

??"

Ok well, i'm gonna vito Logan....cos he's mine and you can't have him ;P

How about Keiran or Chase? I really like those names?

[[deleted user]]

hahaha sorry didnt mean to steal logan!

I like chase.
Yeah, im gonna use chase!

Thankyou!

Almost finished my first chapter.
It's kinda short but oh well!

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Lol, that's alright. Logan's my man!

=) I was gonna use Chase in a story but changed my mind. I'm glad you're gonna use the name. I can't wait to see what you're Chase gets up too....

[[deleted user]]

hahaha! me too! :p

[[deleted user]]

Just finished my first chapter!

[[deleted user]]

It's more like a page though :(

[[deleted user]]

Im gonna add more to it

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

I'm reading it atm

[[deleted user]]

Oh okay

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

It was good. Just remember to focus on grammar. You didn't make many mistakes, so that was good.

I wonder what Alyssa has to decide? Hmmmmm....

[[deleted user]]

hahaha! its a mystery! I told my mum about it and she's like 'so what does she have to decide?' and i was like "IM NOT TELLING! i dont want to ruin it!!" so she's kind of intrigued..

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

You'll find more people like mysteries.

Oh, an idea! Always try to end your chapters on a bit of a cliffhanger/mystery....people will be more interested

[[deleted user]]

Yeah well im planning on this being a series... and i, myself, love cliffhangers and i think i know how i want it to end.

Thanks for the tip :D

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Cool. It's always good to know you ending. Personally, i find the beginning and ending to be the easiest bits. It's the middle bit that gets me.....

Np...

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Rachel wrote: "Cool. It's always good to know you ending. Personally, i find the beginning and ending to be the easiest bits. It's the middle bit that gets me.....

Np..."

I know! That's exactly MY problem!!

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Lol

[[deleted user]]

Rachel?

[[deleted user]]

Can you do me a favor?

[[deleted user]]

You still online??

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Yeah, sorry i was distracted.

What's the favor??

[[deleted user]]

Can you read this and tell if it makes sense?



My fate will be decided here, after all this time I show no fear
Should I choose the right one now,
My future lies with all of you now.
Which way left, Which way right,
Help me get to sleep at night.
Help me choose, Help me seek
My fate is destined or so I think."

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Yes, it does.... the only problem i have is that you used a line that ended with now twice. I think you need to find somthing that rymes with now, insdead of using it twice

[[deleted user]]

Yeah, thats what i thought...

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Just change that and it will be fine

[[deleted user]]

Any ideas I tried everything i know and I cant find anything?

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

How about.....

Should I choose the right one, i don't know how,
My future lies with all of you now.

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My fate will be decided here, after all this time I show no fear
Should I choose the right one, I dont know how
My future lies with all of you now.
Which way left, Which way right,
Help me get to sleep at night.
Help me choose, Help me seek
My fate is destined or so I think."

That sounds really good

Thanks

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

You're welcome!

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I finished writing chapter 1 rachel!!!!!

Im so excited
I really like it so far!

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

oh, i'll check it out =)
....just give me a few moments

[[deleted user]]

It's fine :)

Dont rush

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Haha, my laptop is having a real bad day....it keeps not letting me access sites and it's pissing me off

[[deleted user]]

hahaha aww
that sucks!

[[deleted user]]

bad laptop!!

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Yeah ;)

[[deleted user]]

lol

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Hey, i read your chapter.

It was good so far.
Was that really the correct Latin translation, or did you use random Latin???

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I got the correct latin translation

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

Cool! Cos people often wonder about that.....

[Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten), Temporarily in charge =)]

i g2g have dinner but i'll talk to u soon

bye!