False memory By Dan Krokos - Starting July 28th 2013

[Abi]

Miranda wakes up alone on a park bench with no memory. In her panic, she releases a mysterious energy that incites pure terror in everyone around her. Except Peter, a boy who isn’t at all surprised by Miranda’s shocking ability.

Left with no choice but to trust this stranger, Miranda discovers she was trained to be a weapon and is part of an elite force of genetically-altered teens who possess flawless combat skills and powers strong enough to destroy a city. But adjusting to her old life isn’t easy—especially with Noah, the boyfriend she can’t remember loving.

Then Miranda uncovers a dark truth that sets her team on the run. Suddenly her past doesn’t seem to matter... when there may not be a future.

Sarah and i will be reading this Sunday. Everyone is welcome to join. :)

[Sarah Elizabeth]

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[Abi]

It would be awful to lose your memory!

[Sarah Elizabeth]

I agree!

[Sarah Elizabeth]

"Hello, I lost my memory. I was wondering if you could help."

She's certainly to the point. I've seen more emotion from someone whose lost their purse or their cat than she has for her memory!

[Abi]

Sarah wrote: " "Hello, I lost my memory. I was wondering if you could help."

She's certainly to the point. I've seen emotion from someone whose lost their purse or their cat than she has for her memory!"

I know! There's also the fact that, she doesn't see why the cop thinks she's faking.. Erm, Most people who've lost their memory, don't know their name, and they don't go shopping for bras. Why do you think he doesn't believe you?

[Sarah Elizabeth]

And if she only knows her name and that she's 17, how did she know her bra size to go shopping? Surely she didn't go in the changing rooms, check her bra, and then go back out to look for bras. who goes shopping for bras when they've lost their memory. bra shopping isn't exactly stress-free.

[Sarah Elizabeth]

I wonder if she realises she's now left her bras behind?

[Sarah Elizabeth]

7% (view spoiler)[ they stole the police car?! (hide spoiler)]

[Abi]

Sarah wrote: "I wonder if she realises she's now left her bras behind?"

Lol! A waste of $40.

[Sarah Elizabeth]

totally.

[Sarah Elizabeth]

26% (view spoiler)[ have to say that peter found noah and olive extremely quickly. wouldn't they have been further away already? (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

28% (view spoiler)[ i think that going after a rogue who kills roses to ask him to help the roses is a bad idea. where did they come up with that one cause it's a shocker. (hide spoiler)]

[Abi]

Sarah wrote: "28% [spoilers removed]"

I thought that was odd too..

[Abi]

37% - (view spoiler)[ When she said she trusted him, it didn't give him permission to erase her memories.. (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Abbie wrote: "37% - [spoilers removed]"

I know. that's ridiculous! How could he even use that against her?! (view spoiler)[ and asking if it's over between them? how the hell should she know? he erased her memories! it's almost like it never even happened in the first place! (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

45% (view spoiler)[ how's elena going to explain her dad's sword being missing? ☺ (hide spoiler)]

[Abi]

55% - (view spoiler)[ That was a hard situation to be in. Having to choose who to kill. Would have been very awkward if she chose just before they fake shot Peter. (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

Abbie wrote: "55% - [spoilers removed]"

I hadn't thought of that, but yeah, that could have been seriously awkward!

Not sure what to make of this second love triangle of the day. (view spoiler)[ she should really be p*ssed at Noah for taking her memories, and she seems to like Peter right now. bit awkward though, especially seeing as Noah obviously still has feelings for her. Unfortunate for poor Olive too, there's two guys, and neither of them want her! (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

66% (view spoiler)[ great, the suit will hold her together. what if she has internal bleeding?? the suit isn't going to stop that! (hide spoiler)]

[Abi]

Sarah wrote: "66% [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[ Maybe it has extra organs in it... Like a brand new lung in her pocket? an extra kidney at the back? ;) Lol! High tech enough to save her.. but not high tech enough to stop the knife going in, in the first place? Hm.. (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

You'd think that armor would be designed to stop a knife?

75% (view spoiler)[ the idea of transplanted memories is an interesting one - she really has no idea who she is now! (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

89% (view spoiler)[ so the armor doesn't stop knives, but bullets ping right off of it.... interesting. (hide spoiler)]

[Sarah Elizabeth]

90% (view spoiler)[ so the bullets bounced off of Noah's suit, but went straight through Olive's? Plot hole! (hide spoiler)]

[Abi]

Going to finish this later. :)
What did you think of it?

[Sarah Elizabeth]

It was alright. I thought the little twists towards the end were quite good, but there were more plot holes too!