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Ilsa, Titania
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Aug 15, 2013 07:51AM
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"You will understand in time, I am sorry, I can not save you now, even if I could Drax would burn both of us to a crisp, stay calm and confident, your friends will come, I'll make sure of it" He turned around and conjured a cup of water, he gently set it in her hands
"Your right I do...." He lifted the cup to her mouth and poured, he then stepped back and his body collapsed into shadows
She gasped, but then fell silent. She wondered if that was all the stranger could do, or not. She blinked and lowered herself so her weight was on her arms. It hurt, and she was sure they'd lose their blood flow, but it was the only way she'd be able to sleep.
She didn't sleep for a long time, and she kept hearing a song from the Broadway Beauty and the Beast running through her head. The song Home. It was hardly a comforting song, either.
Someone was thrown in a cell far away from Fieras. The person was cloaked in darkness. She was bleeding bruised from being beaten. She coughed up a lump of blood.
Legolas snuck back in, hearing Madelaine's scream. "Madelaine!" He whispered.
Madelaine couldn't hear him. Like Frodo, Madelaibe was being engulfed by the darkness. Her eyes weren't brown but black empty sockets.
((ooh is she turning evil?))
"Madelaine!" He raised his voice to a louder whisper.
"Madelaine!" He raised his voice to a louder whisper.
Madelaine let out anothe blood curdling scream. Part of her was fighting the darkness but she was too weak to hold on any longer.
"Madelaine! Oh my god!" Legolas said, horrified by what he saw.
Madelaine looked over at him. Her eye sockets were black her face emotionless. She was beaten up everywhere bruised all over.
Legolas stuck his hand in between the iron bars. "Im going to get you out alright?"
Madelaine didn't say a word. She crumpled to the ground as she grew weaker by the minute.
Legolas swore and managed to reach in just far enough to grab her hand.
Madelaibe didn't feel it. There was no lock on the cell and no keys. It would be difficult to get her out.
((oooh sorry Drax. What was ze plan? Bitteschoen und dankeschoen))
Legolas took out his sword and tried to cut through the metal, but it didn't help. He swore again.
Legolas took out his sword and tried to cut through the metal, but it didn't help. He swore again.
Fiera woke up. "Who..." Her voice was dry. She didn't think they'd hear. "Who's there?" She saw Legolas's silhouette and breathed his name.
There was one lose bar on the cage. If he could move it, she would be able to fit throught it and leave.
((ooh. Pretend she can't see them because the cells are seperated by walls and prisoners cant hear or see others.))
((She could be evil now! Because they hadn't come for so long, she could get angry and try to kill them or something like that!))
╰☆╮Madelaine Base╰☆╮ wrote: "((She could be evil now! Because they hadn't come for so long, she could get angry and try to kill them or something like that!))"
((That's totally out of character. Even if she were evil, she'd try to keep any of them from dying.))
((That's totally out of character. Even if she were evil, she'd try to keep any of them from dying.))
Legolas shifted the bar, slung Madelaine over his shoulders, and then sprinted down the corridor, away from fiera's cell. he hadn't heard her. Soon Legolas and Madelaine were seated on the Elf's horse and were riding back to the mirkwood.
((happy now drax?))
((happy now drax?))
Fiera called after them, but her voice was too breathy. She started to cry into her arm. They hadn't even looked into any of the other cells for her.
((aww now that makes me want to cry. bad Legolas! I feel so bad for Fiera now. :( ))
((:D The end of my trilogy will end with the main character dying))
((I'm on book 5 of 8, writing wise. It would have been 4 books, but they would have been too long to be a reasonable choice for an agent.))
((yeah, that's the response I get a lot. :) In book two, I tear the reader's heart apart, tape it back together, then repeat.))
She felt something inside her crack. It was cold, and angry. Hateful. She yanked against the chains. "I give up, you-" she let loose a string of vulgarities, "-Drax, you win! I can't do this! You monster, I can't!"
Drax began walking down the stairs a while later, whistling softly. He had no idea he'd won her over.
She stood stubbornly, no blood flow in her arms, but somehow maintaining some form of dignity. She met his eyes as he approached.
Her head blazed, as if it were being boiled or steamed. But the rest of her was icy. The -slight- feeling she got from her fingertips was like CO2. And her legs wanted to fall out from under her. She wished she had splints so she could keep them from wobbling so.
"What spell did you use? That couldn't have been real, so what are you doing? Why are you messing with my head?"
Her head blazed, as if it were being boiled or steamed. But the rest of her was icy. The -slight- feeling she got from her fingertips was like CO2. And her legs wanted to fall out from under her. She wished she had splints so she could keep them from wobbling so.
"What spell did you use? That couldn't have been real, so what are you doing? Why are you messing with my head?"
Madelaine let out a groan when he picked her up. Her face was getting even more pale by the minute.
Legolas rushed out of the fortress. ((move to the mirkwood palace))
Ilsa wrote: "She stood stubbornly, no blood flow in her arms, but somehow maintaining some form of dignity. She met his eyes as he approached.Her head blazed, as if it were being boiled or steamed. But the ..."
"What are you talking about?" Drax asked, yawning. He noticed that a bar was missing on a cage, but shrugged.
"You're trying to get to me. It's not going to work. You expect me to believe you have the worst security system in either of our worlds?"
"Legolas was here! He rescued Madelaine! That wasn't real. It couldn't have been."
((Gtg, spending the night at the hospital with Mom and Grandpa))
((Gtg, spending the night at the hospital with Mom and Grandpa))



