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Stacia (the 2010 club), groupaholic, YA-MA founder
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At no fault to the author: there were several, very noticeable typesetting issues in the first book and it kind of drove me crazy. They might have reprinted- because I got the first round of books. (Not arc)
Storyline was okay. It got really heavy with the science aspect of the book in the middle, which is fine- but it was slow going for me.
Second book is... Five times better than the first. A lot of progression, a lot of high stakes. Time is running out. Those kinds of things. I'm glad I stuck with the series (almost wasn't going to because of the pacing in the first one) but now I'm really glad that I did.
I'm only 100 pages in, so this opinion could change. But so far so good. ^_^


I've been very slowly working my way through book 1 on audiobook (as in, I've been going at it for weeks). This is my third or fourth attempt to try to do this as an audiobook. I keep thinking that I can do it but my mind doesn't seem to want to hold focus, so I might switch back to print again, just to get the darn book finished.


There was one part of book two that Wells glossed over that was pretty major and I almost missed it. He was too busy writing about the landscape changing and then something major happens. I literally almost didn't notice it because it was one sentence describing a major event.. Two sentences explaining the aftermath, then more landscape.
I would have cut back on the middle of the story. Beginning and end were great, but the greatness gets lost in the slow portion of the middle.



I was a bit disappointed in the end of


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