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Gabby was right I had found it I just wasn't sure if it was right I wanted a second opinion

If I post it will you guys tell me what you think of my poem? It again is homework :)

I know that I will die
We all do
Whether it will be sooner
Or later
At the of a child
Or an adult
A male
Or a female
I know not the answers
I only know that I will die
It is why we are made
Our whole lives lead up to that moment
That moment when we are lifted from our shelve
When we are bought
When we are stripped down and broken apart
Bit by bit we are chewed
Bit by bit we are swallowed
Bit by bit we die
'Till there is nothing left
I am next
I know it now
My family are all gone
I am the only one left
The hand reaches toward me
I close my eyes
The hand grabs me
I say goodbye
By Rachel
Right there's the poem. Feedback is greatly appreciated, be completely honest - don't worry about hurting my feelings or anything like that.

@Hollz yeah it's for school and I really hope I don't have to read it out that sort of thing petrifies me lol.
@Naomi love the pic of the dog :)


I feel the same way. When a kid gets hurt I wish I could go to them and help them
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