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message 251: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Are you a teen writer?


message 252: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Elle wrote: "Nice! good start you should really continue. You could use some editing like spelling, but you really have something here. Ur not from the US are you? Just saying that because you say mum instead o..."

Yes I am from the UK. This is the roughest first draft literally I havent even read over it yet. I will release it on amazon when I am finished


message 253: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Sapir wrote: "NICE!!! You write beautifully, Ashley. How old are you?"

15 years old. Thank you.


message 254: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments That's OK. I'll look forward to the final copy!


message 255: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Wow!! That's amazing.


message 256: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Sapir wrote: "Wow!! That's amazing."

Your too kind I'm gonna blush but I dont know how lol


message 257: by Selene (last edited Jun 16, 2013 10:54AM) (new)

Selene | 89 comments Ashley wrote: "Sapir wrote: "NICE!!! You write beautifully, Ashley. How old are you?"

15 years old. Thank you."


I will be 15 this year. Are you a freshmen or a sophomore?


message 258: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Elle wrote: "That's OK. I'll look forward to the final copy!"

Can you pm people on here I would send you it when I finish it you want


message 259: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Selene wrote: "Ashley wrote: "Sapir wrote: "NICE!!! You write beautifully, Ashley. How old are you?"

15 years old. Thank you."

I will be 15 this year. Are you a freshmen or a sophomore."


They dont have that in the UK what are you reffering to? I think they call it secondary school over here


message 260: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments On goodreads you mean? Yeah, go to the profile and click on the words: send a message.

I'm going to be a sophomore when the year starts!


message 261: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments BTW, I love the cover of The Vampire Project. Have you designed it yourself?


message 262: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Ashley wrote: "Selene wrote: "Ashley wrote: "Sapir wrote: "NICE!!! You write beautifully, Ashley. How old are you?"

15 years old. Thank you."

I will be 15 this year. Are you a freshmen or a sophomore."

They do..."


Oh. Well are you in secondary school?


message 263: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Sapir wrote: "On goodreads you mean? Yeah, go to the profile and click on the words: send a message.

I'm going to be a sophomore when the year starts!"


Lucky. I will be a freshmen.


message 264: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Sapir wrote: "BTW, I love the cover of The Vampire Project. Have you designed it yourself?"

No I'm not that amazing at graphics XD I paid for it to get designed.


message 265: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Ooh. Professional XD


message 266: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments Ashley wrote: "Sapir wrote: "BTW, I love the cover of The Vampire Project. Have you designed it yourself?"

No I'm not that amazing at graphics XD I paid for it to get designed."


Well it was really well designed.

Selene wrote: "Sapir wrote: "On goodreads you mean? Yeah, go to the profile and click on the words: send a message.

I'm going to be a sophomore when the year starts!"

Lucky. I will be a freshmen."


OOOOO! Me 2!!


message 267: by Nightinkgale (new)

Nightinkgale | 17 comments I write poetry :)


message 268: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Anita wrote: "I write poetry :)"

Share some


message 269: by Nightinkgale (new)

Nightinkgale | 17 comments Okay :)
This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.

i Remember

i remember cruel days
damned to drown in
obliterating waves but then,
saved in a creaky old boat.

i remember a once upon a time
when promises were drifting and
You - my Hero.

i remember the sunny daze
of silver chains , etched
oaths ; tingling skin
floating in husky hope.

Now I hate my memories.

I start to lose my will to kick
Piercing salt burns my
Mouth , carving out
Empty promises

Amused… you paddle on


message 270: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments Anita wrote: "Okay :)
This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.

i Remember

i remember cruel days
damned to drown in
ob..."


That's beautiful!


message 271: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Elle wrote: "Ashley wrote: "Sapir wrote: "BTW, I love the cover of The Vampire Project. Have you designed it yourself?"

No I'm not that amazing at graphics XD I paid for it to get designed."

Well it was reall..."


Lol. Yeah, can`t wait.


message 272: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments AMAZING!!!!!! OMG you're so talented :D:D


message 273: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Anita wrote: "Okay :)
This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.

i Remember

i remember cruel days
damned to drown in
ob..."


I like your poetry. You should be a poet.


Nancy (Apollo) (George) (nancystevens4hotmailcom) hey,guys


message 275: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Hi Nancy (:


Nancy (Apollo) (George) (nancystevens4hotmailcom) hey,what's up?u huys are writing are writing some super good depressing poetry here


message 277: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments LOL


message 278: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Selene wrote: "Elle wrote: "Ashley wrote: "Sapir wrote: "BTW, I love the cover of The Vampire Project. Have you designed it yourself?"

No I'm not that amazing at graphics XD I paid for it to get designed."

Well..."

Cant wait for what?


message 279: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Hey Nancy (Apollo) i am Selene. We were reading some of Anita`s poems. We told her to share some.


message 280: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Anita wrote: "Okay :)
This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.

i Remember

i remember cruel days
damned to drown in
ob..."


I like it even if my vocabulary is so bad I dont understand most of it lol. You should collect some of these and make a kindle book out of them.


message 281: by Nightinkgale (new)

Nightinkgale | 17 comments Elle wrote: "Anita wrote: "Okay :)
This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.

i Remember

i remember cruel days
damned ..."


Now the comments are getting long haha thanks :) I have just started reading this old poetry book it really is magical. Timeless.


message 282: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments Nancy (Apollo) wrote: "hey,what's up?u huys are writing are writing some super good depressing poetry here"

lol


Nancy (Apollo) (George) (nancystevens4hotmailcom) Sapir wrote: "LOL"

u know whenever u make a smiley i think it's actually a sad one and i'm like "wha..." and then i see the eyes are at the other side i'm like "wait..oh that's a smiley!"


message 284: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments I don't know, I got used to writing them like that (:


message 285: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Ashley wrote: "Selene wrote: "Elle wrote: "Ashley wrote: "Sapir wrote: "BTW, I love the cover of The Vampire Project. Have you designed it yourself?"

No I'm not that amazing at graphics XD I paid for it to get d..."


I was just telling Elle about me becoming a freshmen in high school. She was going to be one too.


Nancy (Apollo) (George) (nancystevens4hotmailcom) Selene wrote: "Hey Nancy (Apollo) i am Selene. We were reading some of Anita`s poems. We told her to share some."

hi,u guys dont need to introduce urselves i've been here a loooooong time i just dont comment alot but read it all


message 287: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments I'm a new mod here. My name is Sapir, I'm 14 and a half and I'm going to be Sophomore when the year starts.


Nancy (Apollo) (George) (nancystevens4hotmailcom) Sapir wrote: "I don't know, I got used to writing them like that (:"

it's alright something u shuold be different here


message 289: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Yes (:


message 290: by Nightinkgale (new)

Nightinkgale | 17 comments Ashley wrote: "Anita wrote: "Okay :)
This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.

i Remember

i remember cruel days
damned ..."


Thanks :) I can explain it to you ? It is a simple poem coloured in with exotic words to make it seem more impressive ;)


message 291: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Sapir wrote: "I'm a new mod here. My name is Sapir, I'm 14 and a half and I'm going to be Sophomore when the year starts."

Lucky.


Nancy (Apollo) (George) (nancystevens4hotmailcom) Sapir wrote: "I'm a new mod here. My name is Sapir, I'm 14 and a half and I'm going to be Sophomore when the year starts."

okay.i guess i'll introduce myself i'm nancy stevens i am not a mod,i have all my legs and arms on me,i'm 16 and gonna be 17 in a month and i'm gonna be a senior


message 293: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Wow!! A senior. You're going to have prom this year. ~so lucky~


Nancy (Apollo) (George) (nancystevens4hotmailcom) yeah a prom.super


message 295: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments If we'll do weekly reads, will you take part?
I want to add more activities because the group kind of grew this week and that's the best I got XD


Nancy (Apollo) (George) (nancystevens4hotmailcom) yeah sure but what is weekly reads?


message 297: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments To have a group read every week.
(And I'm asking all of you not only Nancy)


message 298: by Nightinkgale (new)

Nightinkgale | 17 comments I have just turn 18 can somebody please explain how your School's grades work. I know a senior is last year before it is Junior??? I get so confused (I'm from SA in our High Schools we only have Gr 8 , Gr 9 , Gr 10 ... Gr 12)


Nancy (Apollo) (George) (nancystevens4hotmailcom) yeah people PITCH IN!!


message 300: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Anita wrote: "Ashley wrote: "Anita wrote: "Okay :)
This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.

i Remember

i remember cru..."


Just warning you I have very low brain capacity :)


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