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Jun 16, 2013 10:49AM

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Yes I am from the UK. This is the roughest first draft literally I havent even read over it yet. I will release it on amazon when I am finished

15 years old. Thank you."
I will be 15 this year. Are you a freshmen or a sophomore?

Can you pm people on here I would send you it when I finish it you want

15 years old. Thank you."
I will be 15 this year. Are you a freshmen or a sophomore."
They dont have that in the UK what are you reffering to? I think they call it secondary school over here

I'm going to be a sophomore when the year starts!

15 years old. Thank you."
I will be 15 this year. Are you a freshmen or a sophomore."
They do..."
Oh. Well are you in secondary school?

I'm going to be a sophomore when the year starts!"
Lucky. I will be a freshmen.

No I'm not that amazing at graphics XD I paid for it to get designed.

No I'm not that amazing at graphics XD I paid for it to get designed."
Well it was really well designed.
Selene wrote: "Sapir wrote: "On goodreads you mean? Yeah, go to the profile and click on the words: send a message.
I'm going to be a sophomore when the year starts!"
Lucky. I will be a freshmen."
OOOOO! Me 2!!

This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.
i Remember
i remember cruel days
damned to drown in
obliterating waves but then,
saved in a creaky old boat.
i remember a once upon a time
when promises were drifting and
You - my Hero.
i remember the sunny daze
of silver chains , etched
oaths ; tingling skin
floating in husky hope.
Now I hate my memories.
I start to lose my will to kick
Piercing salt burns my
Mouth , carving out
Empty promises
Amused… you paddle on

This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.
i Remember
i remember cruel days
damned to drown in
ob..."
That's beautiful!

No I'm not that amazing at graphics XD I paid for it to get designed."
Well it was reall..."
Lol. Yeah, can`t wait.

This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.
i Remember
i remember cruel days
damned to drown in
ob..."
I like your poetry. You should be a poet.

No I'm not that amazing at graphics XD I paid for it to get designed."
Well..."
Cant wait for what?

This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.
i Remember
i remember cruel days
damned to drown in
ob..."
I like it even if my vocabulary is so bad I dont understand most of it lol. You should collect some of these and make a kindle book out of them.

This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.
i Remember
i remember cruel days
damned ..."
Now the comments are getting long haha thanks :) I have just started reading this old poetry book it really is magical. Timeless.

lol

u know whenever u make a smiley i think it's actually a sad one and i'm like "wha..." and then i see the eyes are at the other side i'm like "wait..oh that's a smiley!"

No I'm not that amazing at graphics XD I paid for it to get d..."
I was just telling Elle about me becoming a freshmen in high school. She was going to be one too.

hi,u guys dont need to introduce urselves i've been here a loooooong time i just dont comment alot but read it all


it's alright something u shuold be different here

This one is about my Ex best friend. We were like sisters for 3 years and one day she stopped talking to me but I love the emotion.
i Remember
i remember cruel days
damned ..."
Thanks :) I can explain it to you ? It is a simple poem coloured in with exotic words to make it seem more impressive ;)

Lucky.

okay.i guess i'll introduce myself i'm nancy stevens i am not a mod,i have all my legs and arms on me,i'm 16 and gonna be 17 in a month and i'm gonna be a senior

I want to add more activities because the group kind of grew this week and that's the best I got XD

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