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message 201: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments You're going to be 15 in December? So you have to be one of the oldest in you year, right?


message 202: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments No, there was this boy in my grade who was 16. Going to high school after summer vacation.


message 203: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments OK, that's weird.
So you're one month younger than me!!
I have a friend in my year that is going to be 16 in December. She's pretty much the oldest I know in my year.


message 204: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Ha. But yeah.


message 205: by Nadine (new)

Nadine A. (anisnadiah) Hi, my name is Anis and i'm 16! This is my first time joining a group on Goodreads. I would appreciate it if you guys can recommend me to great books you've read :D Thanks in advance! xx


message 206: by Selene (last edited Jun 16, 2013 12:21AM) (new)

Selene | 89 comments Hi Anis. I am Selene. Nice to meet you. Okay.


message 207: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Hi Anis!! Welcome to the group. I'm sure you'll have fun (:
Check out the BOOK RECOMMENDATIONS thread for recommendations!! ^_^


message 208: by Nightinkgale (new)

Nightinkgale | 17 comments Hi I'm Anita. I'm searching for new materials to read and would love some good recommendations (I already went through my accounts recommendations[Over and over again])

:)


message 209: by Varnika (last edited Jun 16, 2013 08:49AM) (new)

Varnika Chopra (varnika_chopra) | 3 comments Hey! I'm Veronika ;) M 17. I would like to make new friends n would like to read some good books..:)


message 210: by Jessica (new)

Jessica O'Gorek (geminirising1) | 6 comments Anita wrote: "Hi I'm Anita. I'm searching for new materials to read and would love some good recommendations (I already went through my accounts recommendations[Over and over again])

:)"

Hi Anita! If you like Twilight, (or even if you don't like Twilight) the Hunger Games and the Caster Chronicles, but feel the paranormal theme has been overdone, my first novel might be a refreshing change for you! See what other have to say about my "unique spin" on YA paranormal romance.



Ethereal Fury (Gemini Rising, #1) by Jessica O'Gorek


message 211: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments Hi! Welcome to the group! Feel free to join this group as well http://www.goodreads.com/group/show/1...


message 212: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments Anita wrote: "Hi I'm Anita. I'm searching for new materials to read and would love some good recommendations (I already went through my accounts recommendations[Over and over again])

:)"


Hi Anita! My name is Elle. You said you wanted some recommendations, so here they are.
1.Matched
2.I'd Tell You I Love You, But Then I'd Have to Kill You
3.Heist Society
4.Anna and the French Kiss
5.Lola and the Boy Next Door
6.My Life Next Door
7.Cinder
8.Hex Hall
9.School Spirits
10.Truth or Dare


message 213: by Jessica (new)

Jessica O'Gorek (geminirising1) | 6 comments Elle wrote: "Hi! Welcome to the group! Feel free to join this group as well http://www.goodreads.com/group/show/1..."

Thanks Elle! I will join the Wide Web of Friends too!


message 214: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments Thanks!! :D


message 215: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Hello my name is Ashley (I'm a guy) and I like teen fiction and I also write fiction a lot now. I like Harry Potter and I like White Crow by Marcus Sedgwick.


message 216: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments Hey! I <3 HP 2!! :D


message 217: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments he he, what teenager doesnt (I'm guessing you're a teen)


message 218: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments U know it!! LOL


message 219: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments I see you like Matched I guess thats a girls thing because me as a guy I couldnt get into it, and I'm even embarrassed to say I actually tried to read it. What I didnt understand was what if someone dies before they are eighty how is that fair


message 220: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Hi Anita, Ashley, Jessica and Veronica!! I'm glad you joined us (:(:


message 221: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Sapir wrote: "Hi Anita, Ashley, Jessica and Veronica!! I'm glad you joined us (:(:"

Thanks I'm glad I joined


message 222: by Rachel (last edited Jun 16, 2013 10:03AM) (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments They don't, their environment is so controlled by the society that they don't die before 80. I think Matched is a girls thing though. Don't feel bad for trying it though. I know of at least 4 guys who did try it. None of them liked it either. :)


message 223: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Ashley wrote: "I see you like Matched I guess thats a girls thing because me as a guy I couldnt get into it, and I'm even embarrassed to say I actually tried to read it. What I didnt understand was what if someon..."

It's not only because you're a guy... I didn't like Matched either. It was all too sappy and borrring.


message 224: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments What!? It wasn't sappy or boring! You must have put it down too soon! The book didn't pick up until at least halfway through.


message 225: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Hi Ashley, Veronica, Jessica. Glad you joined.


message 226: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments I read 100 pages at least if I remember I liked the premise but it was just too boring.


message 227: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments Ohh, well not every book is for everybody.


message 228: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments I've read it until the very last page, Elle!! It just wasn't for my taste...


message 229: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments That is so true.


message 230: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Not everybody likes sappy books. I kinda don`t.


message 231: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments Sapir wrote: "I've read it until the very last page, Elle!! It just wasn't for my taste..."

Oh, sorry!


message 232: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Selene wrote: "Not everybody likes sappy books. I kinda don`t."

Me neither.


message 233: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments They just seems like they are always kinda boring and kinda depressing a little at the same time.


message 234: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Selene wrote: "They just seems like they are always kinda boring and kinda depressing a little at the same time."

Lol it was quite depressing I really did want to like it I just didnt


message 235: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments It`s true. They do seem like that.


message 236: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments sometimes they can be upbeat and cheesy.


message 237: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Oh. Well the ones i have read have always been sad and depressing.


message 238: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Can someone read an excerpt of a fiction story I am writing?


message 239: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments Oh well the books Anna and the French Kiss and Lola and the Boy Next Door are chessy and upbeat.


message 240: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Sure Ashley!!


message 241: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Yeah sure, i will read it.


message 242: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Here it is unedited so far:

I felt an emptiness in the pit of my stomach as the car drew close to the new house. It was painted white, dull. I caught a glimpse of my mother’s face off of the car mirror- she was smiling to herself.

I pushed the car door open, crunching onto the gravel and standing aside as the removal van screeched to a halt behind the car. It was just me, mum and belongings. A whole summer ahead and I had no friends, a new town with new people. Welcome to Sommerville. More like dead ville.

The house was at the bottom of a dirt track leading into town. Great. Just a house and no one around for miles around. A few houses were dotted on the horizon, nothing else.

The house looked alright at least, a bit spooky but I’d seen worse. The paint was peeling in places but it was a home none the less.

One of the removal men got out of the van and helped with our boxes. I was careful to not break anything when I almost jumped out of my skin, I heard the breaking of plates before I even realised what happened. Right outside our house was a girl I hadn’t seen before. She smiled and waved slightly and I almost felt embarrassed. The only girl in miles and I had already messed up in front of her.

I tried to keep the shock out of my face as she helped me pick up the broken porcelain pieces.
“Hey.” I said, fixing my hair into place awkwardly. My hair was messy at the best of times but now it was just plain playing up.

She giggled, picking up a piece of broken porcelain and wiping some dust off of it.

“What’s with scaring me like that?”

She looked down embarrassed and shrugged brushing her hair out of her face. I felt a bit guilty interrogating her like this, she was helping me after all after I’d acted alike an idiot.

Once all of the plate had been gathered up, I brought the remaining boxes into the house. She was waiting outside sitting on a bench outside. I came out sitting down beside her, she was looking into the distance up the dirt tracki.

“You didn’t say what your name was.” I said breaking her out of her trance.


message 243: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments That is a good start. I like it. Are you a writer? Do you want to be one?


message 244: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (starjoy899) | 65 comments Nice! good start you should really continue. You could use some editing like spelling, but you really have something here. Ur not from the US are you? Just saying that because you say mum instead of mom.


message 245: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments NICE!!! You write beautifully, Ashley. How old are you?


message 246: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Yes I am a writer. And I have a self published book on amazon.


message 247: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments Thanks by the way @Selene


message 248: by Sapir (new)

Sapir | 407 comments Oh, really? Which book?


message 249: by Selene (new)

Selene | 89 comments Cool and you are welcome.


message 250: by Ashley (new)

Ashley | 30 comments http://www.amazon.com/The-Vampire-Pro...

Here it is. I dont think it will be as good as the new one but it is my first try at fiction.


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