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Is it Just me or Does Bella Seem like Jr Wards Favorite?
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True, but I think it is a combo of whom Jane is mated to. And I actually loved her standing out when Wrath was being an ass hat in the King for a change. And the other part is that I think maybe, and I could be wrong here. But she might some how feels like she can relate to Jane a little bit. I mean from the way Jane is described a little bit and how Ward herself looks on the back cover of the books...Good be a bit of a stretch but yea. Maybe her way to add herself in the story a little bit without dominating it with her own personal voice so to speak.
Will add I will agree the other shellans do take a much farther back seat at times. But I think that is more or less a thing about Ward's writing style in the series. As I've talked about this before with another friend and we said how other shellans don't have much air time, same with Manny. But also in regards to Xhex and her mother getting to know each other better even. I personally though that was handled rather strangely too. I may not be a fan of Xhex's mom but it was weird that there was not much interaction between them at all save for a few scenes.







True.. but it still doesn't stop her from sucking in my eyes for doing it LOL

So instead of doing that completely, I pick my battles, like not liking Wrath from the beginning, feeling that Butch and Marissa were awesome as a second chance couple, wanting to kick Ward in the shins for changing Tohr in his book, heck even making it through the bachelor version marriage proposal for Blay and Qhuinn in the end of their book



I also agree with you both about the couples coming back with some couple issues of their own. Does keep it more realistic. I just don't like how Ward writes it where some couples just dominate the hell out of someone else's book with their issues. Looking at you V and Jane when I say that big time. As I still think there could have been more intrigue where Payne was concerned. But it seemed like V and Jane came into Payne and Manny's house so to speak and just talked over everything they did there. Like look at us more than my sis and her guy. V dropped some cool points with me for that, especially at their 'issues' didn't even seem to be about anything important in the first place.


Then I crack open their book and it's more of the evading and pushing each other away. The keeping really small things from each other at first. And it got to be super annoying to me. Couple that with some of those initial 'love' scenes which I felt read a little too careful and out of character of sorts while still being IN character(if that makes sense) and not really lost in the passion of finally being together like some of the other couples in the series so far. I mean if I was finally hooking up with the dude I wanted for umpteen forevers, I would not care about or worry over if we broke the lamp or about having to move to the floor so we don't break the pretty couch. Hell we all know the Doggen live to do stuff for these guys, so just add broken furniture to the tab and get to acting like this is some real deal getting it on time. But it just didn't feel that way to me til Blay was the top and he told that chick to move away from his man in the club to me.








Yeah it's more annoying for me too. I LIKE the old formula for these books better..
See D, I loved Rehv's book.. to this day I think that was the only book that had tons of plots, but was still balanced in the sense that it still felt like it was Rehv and Ehlena's book. The other book that I think the subplots were done well in was Lover Reborn too.

Oh I was locked in either way in Rhev's book. Loved the different aspect of the Sympaths. And plots to take out Wrath were just as good too. So can't knock that and hey Rhev and Ehlena still wound up together anyway. That was the main thing. Seeing Lover Reborn just makes me twitch all over. Always felt too soon to me. Didn't care for the love interest. And Ward did bad, bad things, to Tohr in that one. That I still don't like her for.


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LOL.. Me too! I didn't want to cry with Tohr's book. I REALLY tried not too. I was happy to finally get Tohr's book cos I had been waiting on his conclusion since book 3. I wanted Tohr happy more than I wanted him to mourn Wellsie forever. So I thought his book came right on time. I felt like if V could have an HEA with a damn ghost who should have never been able to come back, & if Wellsie wasn't coming back then Tohr definitely deserved to have his 2nd chance HEA

I still think a ghost is more plausible in a paranormal story than the forever young Manny. He is going to end up being a fetus pretty soon. Actually how I think of him now lol.
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Ah, well see what you are speaking of ties in to the V, Jane, and Butch scenario that many have expressed not being a fan of. I agree that Butch and V had more chemistry for sure. But I think at the time I don't know if Ward felt like Butch had much of a purpose just yet in the story. And V was kind of not all there in his head getting himself shot. So probably Ward's way of adding in a doc version of herself/cock blocking the Butch and V's HEA possibilities.
As for Manny and the slowing down of the aging, I have read my share of vamp stories. And even just a few mins ago someone else I'm talking to about the BDB books about too, mentioned that the slowing of the age thing was brought up in the Story of Son too(which I didn't quite like the vibe with so wasn't paying that much attention to it in the first place). But honestly though, after having read some vampire stories over the years. The slowing down of the age thing just never sounds/reads right to me. And in Manny's case when women much younger than he is thinking he is in college too or something. That just seems like quite a leap.
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Ok then might I ask what you thought of Phury and Cormia? Hmmm.
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Like I said I've never wanted them together cos I feel like it would ruin the type of relationship that they already have. And the fact that they are both mated now, if they were to get together, it would totally undermine the meaning behind bonded mates & ruin Butch & V's very sacred and unique friendship..... So the dynamic with V & Butch, wasn't what caused me to dislike V & Jane. They simply just don't mesh for me. I always envisioned V with a certain type of woman. From book 1, I was eager to know who his mate was going to be. So when I get to his book and realized his mate was Jane/Ward? Yea, I wasn't happy about that LOL!
From a writer's stand point I think V and Butch was really a test run for Ward anyway, to see how this type of relationship would be received in this series without actually crossing those lines. I don't believe she ever intended for them to be together. When she saw the reception of it, the haters & the lovers, she chose to keep Butch & V where they were at, but then decided to go full throttle with Q & Blay. Which was also suspect to me cos Q was always very adamant about settling down with a woman. But after book 6 all of sudden he's wanting Blay. I really think that Ward was originally gonna have Q be with a Chosen cos that would have made an interesting plot device concerning Q's less than stellar genes being paired with something of perfection like a Chosen. This also explains why Ward still chose to have Q & a Chosen (Layla) to have a child together. She gave the Q & Blay fans what they wanted, but she still took a little of what she had intended to happen, concerning Q, a child, & a Chosen.
Phury & Cormia, Ward ruined them for me cos she didn't develop their relationship at all. They got lost and were pushed to the back in their own book. She didn't really go deep with Phury either when it came to his issues & drug problem. She was building up to this starting in book 3 where Phury was concerned, but by the time she got to his book, his redemption & love life was just basically dropped & then lost to all the subplots going on his book... I have a love hate relationship with Phury's book, cos it could have been the tightest book Ward written in this series, with the exception of Z's book. I say that cos Phury's book was a definite game changer in the series. All the subplots in that book, started what was to come & what was rectified later in the series. And I loved that. What would have made it awesome is if Phury & his love story hadn't been lost in the process. And Ward admitted that she totally dropped the ball with Phury & his story. I think if he alongside with Cormia had been more balanced with everything else going on in that book, Phury's book would have received a much better reception than it did. So many people either hate his book or had a hard time finishing it. I was one of them. I hated it when I first read it. Then I read it again almost a year later and liked it much better the 2nd time around, but it will forever be a hard book to read. Which is why I've only read it twice.
But this is also why if Ward is going to be exploring revisits, I would really love one with Phury & Cormia. Cos really, they never actually got their own book, and their relationship has been MIA since book 6.
Dang! My bad. I didn't mean to write a novella. LOL!

I see what your talking about. But I guess them making sure to move in their shellans to their shared space already sorta keeps them altogether enough anyway to appeal to them. So yea I guess it wouldn't work out now. And yea, Butch may have been for the ladies true, and I did like him and Marissa getting a second chance relationship even. But once the Omega did his hexy thingiemabobby to Butch and he became the destroyer person, who did he go to and was in the bed with over it, but V. I mean it's moments like that, that make me feel like Ward should have just took that leap off the bridge and went with Butch, V, and Marissa having a triad relationship. Lord only knows they have proven it many a times over that those relationships happen in other worlds. And not like V had beef with Marissa really so could have worked something out. ;) And maybe for a change I wouldn't have seen V as such a semi ass hat jr. after I first read about him. And that is saying something, cause I don't normally like ménage relationships.
I think so too when she added in Jane/herself with V in their book, she was still sorta questioning the Butch and V thing. Particularly when she wrote Jane asking if they were a gay couple or not. So still feeling it out I suppose. As for Qhuinn and Blay, plot device yes. But honestly again between those two I sorta seen the writing on the wall with them too. I mean out of a whole class of pre-trans males she zeroed in on the ones that had the most potential to end up being a likely couple. Wasn't just a coincidence to me there for sure. And true, although Qhuinn said he always wanted to be with a Chosen. I never quite believed it about him anyway. Almost read like when I used to say I wanted to be a lawyer and that was mostly because it was a thing with pleasing my folks and doing what they wanted. In short being the "ideal" life for someone else but when it's not really your own dream. As for Blay, it seemed ever since he transitioned he was totally hot and gay for Qhuinn. Which I guess that part of things felt weird to me. Maybe because we didn't quite follow Qhuinn and Blay's history like we did with JM at first. But it seemed a little odd that now he has his man body, he suddenly wants Qhuinn. Going back to Qhuinn, he was just exploring all avenues I think when he transitioned and could have gone either way for man or woman partner. But yea, it was a pretty sweet plot device for him and Layla to have a child together. Although I still want to kick Ward for making Layla suffer as long as she had and have grown men running away from her. I mean that is just craziness to me. Given how healthy their sex drives are.
I have to admit that Phury and Cormia's book/relationship was like the equivalent of Tohr and Autumn's to me. But only somewhat better cause Cormia and the other Chosen actually brought new meaning into Phury's life. Actually appreciated his efforts too more so than the other Brothers ever did. And all that junk with him and Bella(the hair brushing any one?) I mean dude I didn't blame him for going on drugs. How much under appreciation can one person take. I will agree with you so much other stuff was going on as well in his book and I hated how he and Cormia got back burnered like a lot. But I still really loved them together. I think it was my first high rating for a book in this series. Really showed that even the 'rock' of the group can crack under pressure. As for re-visiting Phury and Cormia, I don't think Ward might visit them again. As so many folks didn't really seem to care for him from the beginning. At least from some other comments I've read before in regards to how peeps feel about him.
Haha, no prob on the long response. I can be super long winded sometimes myself when making a point.

I totally agree. I hate Jane and remembering that men can have more that one shellan I hope Ward gives V a living breathing vampire female. He said once in his book that no one has ever feed from him. I can only imagine how intense that would be for him and I want that for him. I feel like since they had a falling out with Havers Jane was the excuse for the BDB to get their own in-house doctor. His relationship was a cop out. I didn't really buy his instant attraction to Jane in the first place.

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