Bill asked David Wong:

When you're editing your own work, how do you give yourself "fresh eyes" so you know what should be cut/altered/left alone?

David Wong Two steps: 1) I let it sit for a few weeks and 2) I print it out on paper. Seeing it printed instead of on a screen does a weird thing where it tricks my brain into thinking it's seeing a brand new thing. Then I mark that up with a red pen (previous "perfect" scenes wind up covered in red slashes) and do the next round of editing based on that. It's a shock to the system - seeing bad sentences and blatant plot holes leap out at you. I don't know if it works for anyone else, I think other people just show it to writer friends to get their impression (or post it online for feedback, if they're not worried about it getting stolen). I usually don't do that, though, my writer friends are all incredibly busy and I wouldn't do that without paying them for their time. And then that would just make it weirder.

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