Hello Jennifer, The False Prince is a wonderful, action-packed adventure story! I loved it! My question is: How do you know when you've hired a good editor? This, because I saw a few things that could be edited: e.g. a punctuation error (no comma after back, p. 267) and the need for old-fashioned dialogue (Let there be a celebration!" p. 347). You are an amazing writer! Looking forward to reading The Runaway King!