This might sound dumb, but does Amy ever get revenge on Jeff and Greta? Knowing how she likes to get even with anyone who she thinks has wronged her, I wouldn't be surprised. That would be really cool if you wrote like a short story of her getting even with them!
Hi Ivan, I LOVE Jeff and Greta and I love Amy's strange holiday with them in the Ozarks and the nasty turn it takes. I originally, in a very early draft, had Jeff and Greta return to the story near the end, but it just didn't feel right. But I do like the idea that Amy, somewhere in the back of her mind, is planning her revenge. Of course she is.