Franco answers “Why did Colleen have to write that last...”

Alicia asked this question about Verity:

Why did Colleen have to write that last chapter?? Why???

Franco D Why not? If it's about the story line, it's ok, as good an ending as any other. But what I do not like is that the quality of the writing/storytelling…moreWhy not? If it's about the story line, it's ok, as good an ending as any other. But what I do not like is that the quality of the writing/storytelling in the last few chapters was relatively poor compared to the rest of the book.(less)

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Greg You mean lines like, "Crew cries for him {his dad} almost every night..." (C. 13, 3rd p.) which makes no sense because the intent is "Crew cries OUT f ...more
Oct 31, 2022 02:31PM · flag

Caitlin Agreed. While I do think there's some merit to the story, I have seen a LOT of 5 star reviews of the book. If it's based just on personal enjoyment, g ...more
Jan 20, 2023 12:45PM · flag

Greg Agree.
Jan 20, 2023 01:08PM · flag

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