M.A.R. Unger
WRITE….put your work down after you've finished a chapter, then start reading out loud. If the dialogue doesn't sound natural -- cut it out, if you're repeating words or ideas --cut. Tighten what you've written and proceed. Get into a writer's group and critiques that tear the crap out of what you've done. Rewrite to a central theme or guiding metaphor, as a UNLV friend says..
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