Renegade Star (Renegade Star, #1)

by J.N. Chaney

but

Had to note this: two (2) "buts" in ONE (1) sentence, TWO (2)!

“Cloak us and get us the fuck out of here!”

Pretty slow on the uptake captain.

a dozen armed men in red armor entered through the airlock.

I could always turn around and kick his ass, but with a dozen more behind him, I was pretty sure I’d wind up a corpse.

Dozen came on board, plus their boss. He is in the cargo bay, so only eleven (11) behind this thug. Can author do simple math or is he FORGETTING HIS OWN STORY AGAIN [caps intentional]?

that I thought.

"…than I thought…." Try some proofreading next time you commercially publish a book, sir.

clutching the extendable pistol I’d dropped in the lounge,

There was only one bullet left in my little extender pistol.

I saw that my extendable pistol,

Fratley had already been disarmed, so there was no reason to kill him.

Really? Guess the author is a soft, naive millennial.