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December 13 - December 20, 2024
Kate Maton as furnished me
has
Canton Peak
Later Peaks
As soon as they were sat, she
British phrasing
unoffended by the dwarf’s remark despite refuting it.
disputing
a wide birth,”
berth
get the wagon to the townspeople.
"
allowing her to nod with what she agreed too.
Garbled sentence; probably the last word should also be "to"
one that showed a lack of pretention
pretension
to follow the tracks
it required his skills to follow it
them [tracks, plural]
the reaction of some recent slight or issue.
reaction to
the bodies of their earlier foe.
foes
it might equally lead to Meera or herself getting hurt again as it could be helping Meera
it was just as likely to lead to... as to...
fixing this door before I do anything else.
"
generosity that comes along with it.
"
to unbury the door yet gain
again
that’s all the clothes he had to wear.
he’d headed in his general direction
this
was too focused on dodging a flurry of attacks that he didn’t see
so focused
she reached out an arm to pull him back.”
Not dialog
with a few others issues
other
“We’re half-the same,”
No hyphen
It didn’t answer,
Wolf is "it"
The wolf didn’t answer, but once again tipped his head
Wolf is "he"
the wolf could close its jaws
Wolf is "it"
he was going to have to gently lick it
Wolf is "he"
as if he was laughing
Wolf is "he"
It eyed her hand
Wolf is "it"
some more food for being offered,
Garble
It was almost someone you didn’t expect. He
always
Were they really about the storm the house
about to
instead of Andron,
Andorn
Sahria tried to focus, aimed, and let off her arrow anyway.
Second time shooting a bow with a shoulder injury
we’d try not to damage anything.
"
The large wolf was by the stairs, looking expectantly at them as it sat and panted.
Wolf is "it" again (in Book 2)
an elderly woman said. “I’d been losing so much food to the blighters. I can’t thank you enough,” the old woman said.
Omit one tag or the other
“I learnt a thing or too carpentering
two
on this side of the grassy knell.”
knoll
“I’ll meet you at the inn,” Andorn replied,
Nobody else said anything to reply to
Ulfur wagged his tail,
Wolf is "he"
praise and censor Thorgrim.
censure
and risked their lives for the other.
each other
on the roads these days.
"
“Is that so?” she looked between the two, her
She
trying to diffuse the situation.
defuse
widow Ventin
Widow [title is part of the name and should get a cap, IMO]
“Oh, you wonder of a person,” Yarlihn replied
Again, nobody said anything to reply to
There were still too many of the smaller rocks and debris
"too many of the... debris"?
couldn’t blame the guy from pulling back.
for
