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December 13 - December 20, 2024
It leaned in toward her.
Wolf is "it".
But something that doesn’t bloom
"But
him light our way.
"
“Aye. let me get
Let
to the large lantern but eventually
lantern, but
be able to survive on a lot less sleep than some of the others but it could make
others, but
“Riding East.” “Then East we shall go.”
No cap when it's just a direction, not a place.
rescued the priest’s satchel but didn’t stop.
satchel, but
the moon that currently peaked through a gap
peeked
the sailor and Haldin both took in the appearance of the other
each
hotter than normal..
One full stop, not two.
“How do I know?,” he continued
No comma
“I think we need to give him a name,” Sahria said as they coaxed it
him/it
before they did..
One full stop, not two.
We hoped you might
"We
the horses needing rest
Thank you for writing horses as living creatures and not machines!
And If you can gather
if
What if they are willing to harm them.”
?
If you might have noticed,
As
and growled. a moment later
A
a moment later. This house isn’t lived
"This
The door gave out easily,
"Gave out" means something specific, which is not what is meant here; just "gave".
this time two hitting the thugs Sahria faced each.
two each hitting the thugs Sahria faced.
a few hours rest
hours'
nothing soothes a worried mind than seeing something for itself.”
more than or better than
so the fire could burn them and enjoy the smell they gave off or relax for a little while.
off, or
burned a more gentler way
a gentler
they had even named it. Fenix was part of the guild and they had even named their guild after him
Creature is "it" and "him" in adjacent sentences.
with my chores for the day.
"
spending all this time focusing on her discipline and meditating each day that she hadn’t been paying any attention
spending so much time... that
to the stables yet themselves and Sahria had
themselves, and
She hoped that Sahria hadn’t gone to town yet or anyone else left,
yet, or
if people knew it existed.
Creature is "it"
sending the message to Fenix that he had to hide
Creature is "he"
She was quiet, barely needed to sleep, and tidy.
quiet, tidy, and barely needed to sleep
was little more of a cursory glance
more than
covered up Fenix again and hid its light.
Creature is "it"
as soon as we have rested a little.
"
the guild of the eternal flame
Why not caps?
the mother may well have been right
might
She refrained from being too blatant in her feelings of being justified, but she could imagine
“We’ve come from Canton Peaks
Not really
would like a drink a piece.
apiece
Being dragon born
dragonborn
For a wooden carving behind glass and so many strong wards, Meera was confused,
Dangling modifier
the right discrete people
discreet
“Over a year, but less than two.
Later: over a month, but less than two
in the right direction.
"
the moon was a brand new sliver in the sky and we’ve just had another since then.
Meaning over a month, but less than two
Eliot had done his duty
Elliot
