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December 13 - December 20, 2024
Those who had left already were gone
Well, yes.
going back to her home land.
homeland
as early in the morning that they might have,
as early... as
or that the thief might be far more clever the closer they got.
might not be
It wasn’t a large fare
a large meal or ample fare
We did everything we could, but this thief stole a fake and, somehow, if this ever worked, then we did everything we could.”
Garble.
As the priest figured out that he was given all the answers they could gather,
had been given
was worth helping but the thieves
helping, but
they wish it to be discrete
discreet
After giving the kid a coin, the kid hurried away
After he gave... [dangling modifier]
looked at the man servant.
manservant
serving as my aids and guards.
aides
sometimes it’ tough.
it's
Ulfur got up from where he’d laid by
lain
paid him for delivering it. He raised an eyebrow when he noticed the temple crest
Again, pronouns switch referents; the "him" in the first sentence is not the "he" in the second.
The priests at the temple had offered to sleep them
give them a place to sleep; host them
It was their way of protecting both it and themselves.
Fenix is "it" again
people took to row boats to
rowboats
the row boat backed to the stern
rowboat
powers, such as you’ve seen my god grant and has aided us.
What is the subject of that "has"? The god? Garble.
It didn’t take her long to find the scent she was looking for.
Three months later.
she had guessed the timeframe.
How?
no lack would be blamed on Yarlihn for it if it wasn’t perfect.
Garble
who can move faster and with more skill on her feet than any sailor can keep their feet, too.
Garble
If there’s 3 fishermen,
three
The man hadn’t asked for any money and he hadn’t queried about the level of danger.
Too easy.
it didn’t have many cannons.
First we've heard of guns
He had taken the help
helm
one of their sales tore
sails
onto his back. Before she could do anything else, Sahria hit it with an arrow and Elliot’s rats mobbed it, crawling all over it and biting it.
Opponent goes from "he" to "it"
Since Sienna had been talking
Sahria
with most of our friends around you
of your
one I asked for his help
once
where Yarlihn and them parted ways.
they and Yarlihn
still get to stick a fellows
fellow
looking after Fenix again. and Ulfur had lolloped
, and
Between them they may be able to
might
Yarlihn new there was always a chance. Once
knew
they had the entire crew out on decks,
on the decks OR on deck
Yarlihn found himself back on the seas and navigating waters and awaken emotions he’d thought long dead.
awakening
as if they were wary and while there were
wary, and
stop him endangering them either.
"him"
Julissa had also been wary of it
"it"
The less someone needed to bilge out water,
Not a usual meaning of "bilge"
a rope from the row boat fast.
rowboat
his non-answer was as much an admission
as much as
and it wouldn’t make it true.
"
The island was larger than Sahria expected it to be.
had expected
walk among the forest
through
Andorn planned to sailout under the cover of darkness,
sail out
