Ruth’s Comments (group member since Nov 11, 2012)

Ruth’s comments from the Aspiring Authors and more ... group.

“Even the strongest and bravest must sometimes weep. It shows they have a great heart, one that can feel compassion for others." - Cornflower- Redwall

Jason Bourne (although I love Jeremy Renner, he didn't do well in that part.)

Prison Break or 24?

That'll be nice. What's your new one about?

Repicheep

Edmund or Eustace?

yeah, it's not as big of a deal if it's something you don't care about in the first place.

just if you're stumped on one story move on to the next.

are those 1D guys? if so, neither

The White Witch or The Lady with the Green Curdle (or whatever her name is) :p

Annabeth Chase- also a demigod

adventure

Narnia or Alagaesia?

:p know what you mean, that happens all the time to me. I've got like five stories I'm working on at the moment.

Yeah, like we've been doing annotating in school, and we've been having to do it to really good stories, and it just makes it annoying.

oops, I mean
Perseus- Zeus's son as well

Poseidon- Zues's son as well

lol, yeah I hate it when you have to read a good book for something like that. (:

Don't worry, you'll get further. I'm really liking how it's turning out so far.

That's really good!

Zeus- Hades's brother

listening to music

Listening to epic instrumental music while you are writing a story to give you ideas or writing in silence?

Thanks! You should read it, it's actually quite intriguing :)

We had to read Hamlet for school and when we were done we had to write a poem that summarized the whole book. It's random.

Something is rotten in Denmark,
King Hamlet the great is dead.
The Queen once again has married,
Or so all the people have said.

The ghost told young Hamlet the culprit,
Revenge blossoms now in his heart.
For none but his uncle did slay him,
Who now is the king of Denmark.

Laertes has challenged a duel,
For his father young Hamlet did slay.
But both blade and wine have been poisoned,
In order that Hamlet might pay.

With both of the duelists poisoned,
Young Hamlet now kills the king.
His mother has tasted the liquor,
They all die but justice now rings.