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Snow White

Star Wars episode I-III or episode IV-VI?

Finnick

Johanna or Katniss?

Who are they? I like Charlie's name better

Peeta or Cinna?

The Host
trailer looks really good

Whenever I say the name Alleka what is the first thing that pops into your mind? I'm checking to see if it fits the character I'm matching it to.

James Bond
Percy Jackson (haven't read Heroes of Olympus yet)

Twilight or Vampire Diaries?

Poseidon

Percy Jackson or Clash of the Titans? (the movies)

angels

Hermes or Dionysus?

Harry Potter

Hermione or Ron?

Thanks!

Thanks! Is it too overdone, though? That's the only thing that was bugging me.

Katniss

Percy Jackson or Harry Potter?

The beginning of the histories of how the earth and a magical land called Eolaria were created:

There was Olea, the king, and he ruled over Monwell. He created the worlds when time began and named them, Earth and Eolaria. On Earth he created humans. Eolaria, however, he left bare. From his servants on Monwell he chose six, and their names were Claudius, Gorgaira, Kinarra, Finwell and his brother, Fingen, and Jormundar. Olea called these six the heanor, and commanded them to fill Eolaria with things of their making.
Awed by what Olea had done, the heanor gazed at the land, afraid to mar it in any way. But then Claudius stretched out his hand and touched the dirt. Underneath his fingers sprung grass and flowers of such beauty as none had seen. He then made the rain and the sun to give his creation life.
The rest of the heanor then saw that they could do such. Each in their turn touched the land.
Gorgaira made the waters, and the sea, and all the creatures within.
Kinarra made the trees, each with their own beauty, and the wind in which to give them music.
Finwell then made the mountains, their peaks reaching high into the sky, glorifying the power of Olea. He then reached toward the sky and created the moon and the stars.
Fingen made the deer, and all the good beasts of the earth and the air.
But that which Jormundar created he hid from his fellows.
Then Olea returned and gazed upon the works of his servants. He tasted the salt waters of the sea and the fresh waters of the rivers. He walked among the forests. He watched the animals play. He stood upon the peak of the greatest mountain and looked down upon the land, and was pleased.
He then spoke to them, saying, "Give the land people to tend the animals and plants." Then he spoke to Jormundar, saying, "Where are your works?"
Jormundar replied to his master, "I have hidden it, so that it may please you when all is finished."

Silver Linings Playbook
Django Unchained

That is really good!

Hi!
So glad you made it!

Hunger Games

itunes or listening to music on youtube?

(: yeah, know what you mean. Thanks

Ok, thanks. However I don't have any other names for cities in Eolaria. Any other ideas?
The world is made up of 5 countries:
Galal, Nizor, Bryne, Jocktar, and Caira.

The name of a city kind of like Uru'baen in Inheritance.
I was thinking maybe Tatarna... does it sound too retarted?