Ruth’s Comments (group member since Nov 11, 2012)

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Cassandra Clare

Hunger Games or Harry Potter?

Haven't read vampire academy, but I like Adrian's name better.

Edward or Jacob?

Who are they?

President Snow or President Coin?

Gimli

Merry or Pippin?

Borimir in movies, Faramir in books.

Galadriel or Arwen?

Mr. Tumnus- faun

Bilbo

Aragorn or Legolas?

neither.

Inheritance or LOTR?

Grover, he's half human half goat.

Don't even have the first chapter yet, just bits and pieces, lol. That part comes from somewhere in the middle.

Thanks

Welcome.

Irene?

Normal name or creepy name?

Faerfolk

Witches or wizards?

Never read either, but I'll say Mortal Instruments.

Hobbits or Dwarves?

Yeah. I just didn't want to mix up the suspense of the moment with descriptions.

The dragons get described a little later in the book, because they have a pretty large part. Thanks for noticing that, though.

This is a piece from a story I'm writing about a guy who gets transported into a magical land called Eolaria and finds out he's the savior they've all been waiting for for about 2,000 years.

"What's wrong?" Will asked, seeing how Azzan looked up at the sky.
"Quick, behind these bushes!" Azzan said, shoving Will and Iferious behind them.
Will looked up and saw a great beast flying above them. "What is that?" He asked, trying to be as still as possible.
"A dragon rider," Iferious replied. "Hopefully he hasn't seen us."
But he spoke too soon. The dragon rider circled in the air and landed less than thirty paces away from where they were concealed. He dismounted and began to walk toward them.

Hunger Games

Talking dragons or dragons that are just like any other animal?