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Castle (1188 new)
May 31, 2013 06:16PM

60243 {OMFG ROBINROBINROBIN BELLA IS HYSTERICAL. DTGVUJNUCSES I DIED. XD

And yaaaaays Frances can be Guard Dude, who now has a proper name! :D woot woot!}

Max watched the entire escapade fighting to remain silent, eyes flickering from Bella to Lynne and Toph as they went back and forth. He made a mental remark that the odds of getting away with his horrific act were very much in his favor. No weapons, no blood, and not a word from his mouth gave him away. Max involuntarily flinched at the sudden sharpness of Bella as she snapped at the servant.
Castle (1188 new)
May 28, 2013 01:55PM

60243 {I know. Max hasn't said anything...}
Lonely Me (949 new)
May 27, 2013 06:45PM

60243 Gotta love Ye Olde Place of Heaven on Earth. ^_^
May 27, 2013 06:43PM

60243 Oh my, everyone is dying.

Ducky stop reviving Kyra and let her join the undead. Mwahahaaaaa! X3
May 27, 2013 06:32PM

60243 Treasure Ducky wrote: "I trespassed on Camp Deer Lake property, walked around the block in the rain, and explored a gorgeous house for sale 2 streets away, so I win.

Mainly because of the trespassing bit. XD"


Swag. Ducky wins. Cause trespassing, duh.
Castle (1188 new)
May 27, 2013 06:18PM

60243 His brow furrowed with worry, but he just gave a nod of his head and stared intently at the floor, concern written across his face. However his head snapped up seconds later at the sound of feet bounding down the hall and into Bella's room- Lynne and a guard.

{BAM. Okay now Robin can take over Guard-Dude.}
Castle (1188 new)
May 25, 2013 05:08PM

60243 {Aww yissss! ^_^ That is so swaggie. Vat shall we call him?}

The guard stared at her, raising an eyebrow. "What do you mean murder? Did John put you up to this? God, he's been hassling me all-" He paused, seeming to notice the servant's genuine panic. "You're not...?" His expression dawned with sudden alarm. He started briskly down the hallway, nodding hurriedly for her to follow. "Show me where you just came from."

Max couldn't believe she was trying to help him lie to her own people. But he shook his head. "That servant- Lynne. She saw- saw me... bent over him when I..." He cringed. "She's probably gone to tell someone."
Castle (1188 new)
May 24, 2013 03:25PM

60243 {Thank you dearie. :3 }

He finally turned to look at her, stunned. Oh Bella, you are too kind to me. How can you even stand to be around me? Nonetheless, gratitude mingled with his surprise. "I don't... I wish I could just fix it. But then..." He touched her cheek. "It isn't as if I have a history of fixing things."
Castle (1188 new)
May 24, 2013 11:12AM

60243 {I can be a guard for now, but I don't wanna talk to myself, so can someone take Guard Man from me later to avoid that?}

{Oh yeeeeaaah the queen... *headdesk*}

A guard was wandering the halls in bored silence, gazing idly at the castle walls when he heard the sound of frantic footsteps. Whipping around, he blinked as Lynne came skidding up to him. "Can I help you, ma'am?"

After a moment, Max gave a slight nod. "Okay." He couldn't just leave her. He couldn't just run. He disappeared once again into the tower and stepped into Bella's room again. He averted his eyes from the body and went to her side. "Bella, I..." His eyes wandered away from her as well, and he thought dully as he spoke that he was running out of places to look. "I killed that man." His voice broke slightly on the word.
Lonely Me (949 new)
May 24, 2013 10:52AM

60243 Oh my god I love him so much!!! XD For a while I was talked into believing he was dead! I had a heart attack, lemme tell ya. Whenever we watch Bill Nye in school everybody yells at me because I sing the song. X3
May 24, 2013 10:48AM

60243 Aw no Ducky! D:

Good type job for a hurt arm though. ;)
Castle (1188 new)
May 18, 2013 03:52PM

60243 "You..." He looked at her incredulously. "You say that so calmly."
Castle (1188 new)
May 18, 2013 12:58PM

60243 He stood, and in the silence of the night, he caught the soft sound of her voice. He looked up at her from the ground, face so pale it was like a piece of moon. He said nothing at first, just gazed at Bella. Finally he spoke. "Do you know what I've done?"
Castle (1188 new)
May 18, 2013 07:19AM

60243 No. He couldn't have... No.
But he remembered. He remembered the deathly, silver-eyed monster locked in a lulling calm. A few murmered words in that voice and-
I killed him. Monster. I killed a man.
He looked at Bella, the glow in his eyes flickering like dying candlelight. "I'm sorry." Max tore from the room and kept running, knowing all the time that he couldn't run from himself.
Castle (1188 new)
May 17, 2013 08:37PM

60243 "I..." He stared at her, face twisted with confusion. Then realization hit him and fear knotted in his stomach as he turned around. His expression turned slack with consuming horror. He stared at the glaze-eyed man splayed out on the floor. And I don't think you should wake up...
For a moment he said nothing, just sat there, stunned into silence.
Castle (1188 new)
May 17, 2013 11:50AM

60243 He relaxed with relief and ran a hand through her hair. "It's okay. You're okay."
Castle (1188 new)
May 11, 2013 11:27AM

60243 Max ignored her threatening tone and reached again for Bella. Sitting down on the edge of the bed, he gently lifted her some, then pulled her into his arms. "Bella, please. Wake up, love," he murmured.
Castle (1188 new)
May 10, 2013 09:27AM

60243 {This is so fun... I frickin love evilness and drama. >:3 }
Forest (400 new)
May 09, 2013 04:50PM

60243 {Woot woot! ^_^ }
Castle (1188 new)
May 08, 2013 04:57PM

60243 He froze. Suddenly his silver-burning eyes were wild, his mind a tangled mess he didn't bother trying to sort out. Instead of relaxing into the feeling of a lulling dream, he tried frantically to grasp the feeling of slipping reality. What's happening to me I can't see where is she where is Bella my love where are you? He abruptly stood and whipped around, stumbling to the bedside where she lay. Despite the mess inside his mind, his reached out with completely gentleness and slid his hand into hers. "Bella, Bella..." For the first time he acknowledged the presence of Lynne, gazing at her, as if through her, with his glazed, frantic eyes. "What happened to her?" he breathed, touching the soft beat at Bella's wrist for reassurance.