Mel’s Comments (group member since Jun 02, 2012)

Mel’s comments from the The Unknown Awesomes group.

{Peace out, gotta go. :( School tomorrow. Ugh.}

"I can't imagine why not," Max said, laughing. Laughing. Something that had been absent in him for a long time. Ever since his parents died. A weight had been lifted off his shoulders, if only for a little while.

Max brushed a tear off her cheek. "I'm fine, Bella. More than fine, actually. It's you I'm worried about. You blame yourself for too much. You are too selfless."

That electric feeling came back to him immediately. Max closed his eyes and let himself be overcome with love for this wonderful girl. To forget everything else for a while. He relished every moment around her, afraid that it might not last.

Mel is victorious!!! :D

{XD}
There was nothing Max wanted more. "No," he breathed. He tucked a strand of strawberry hair behind her ear and reached for her hand.

Nope. Meeeeeeeeeee!

{Bella? :() }

Max's words tumbled out before he could stop them. "Because you're so sweet and kind and happy. And so... beautiful. I can't imagine anyone not falling in love with you. But Owen is careless. He played around with your fragile heart. Don't let him do that anymore. Please." He sighed, gazing at her, wondering if she could see the love in his eyes. "Bella, you make me so..." He trailed off, getting lost in her green-gold eyes.

"Your father cares about you. I'm sure he wants what you want. Owen carelessly threw your feelings aside, and your father won't ignore that. None of this is your fault, Bella."

"What?" Max lifted her face to meet his. He looked into her eyes. "Bella, you did absolutely nothing wrong." His eyes darkened. "It's him. I am so sorry he hurt you." I shouldn't have let him, he added in his head.

Moi is winning!!! :D

Max froze. Hope swelled in his chest, only to be immediately replaced with ferocious anger. How could Owen do this to her? Seeing her so hurt was heartbreaking. "Oh, Bella." Max murmured. "I'm so sorry." He held her tighter.

Max shuddered with pleasure at her touch. He wrapped his arms around her. "You can tell me," he whispered in her ear, softly.

Max whipped around at the sweet sound of her voice. The shrew zipped away into the buses again. "Bella," he murmured, his eyes filled with worry. He sat down on the ground beside her. "What happened?" His thoughts angrily flickered to Owen. What had he done?

Max had creeped away from the girls, and stood in a shaded corner of the garden. He noticed a shy little shrew sniffing around in a nearby bush. He coaxed it with his voice for a moment, as quietly as possible. Then his silver eyes stared into it's tiny ones. Max practiced for a while.

Yep, that's me. XD

Okay, guys. On my quest to further stalk the cover model, I have discovered that he goes by the name...Pi. Just...Pi. Says this: http://playswithmatches.wordpress.com...

XD That's good! XD

Woah! :() I hate it how one second it's like, "Omicheese! Deja vu!" and a second later... nothing. But it wasn't like that with the Max thing, thankfully. :)))
But four times in one day...Woah. :()