Blessing’s Comments (group member since Dec 24, 2023)

Blessing’s comments from the Beta Reader Group group.

I believe that together, we can shape your manuscript into a masterpiece.

You might have doubts and worries about your book and that's fine. I'd love to read through it, communicate with you and work with you to unleash the full potential of your manuscript.

You're reading this and thinking "hmm, do I really want to opt for a paid service?". In all honesty you should. Let your mind be at ease, your MS is in perfect hands.

Alongside my beta reading packages, I also offer a free call and revision. Please check my websites for more information about me and my packages.

https://bibliobeastreads.wordpress.com/
https://booktailor31.wixsite.com/webs...

Your story deserves the very best! Let's make it SHINE✨.

Hello, dear writers! My name is Blessing, and I offer paid beta reading services.

Beta readers play an invaluable role in the book development process. As a beta reader, I provide a fresh pair of eyes and a unique perspective. I offer a high-level overview of the book, along with constructive feedback on character development. Additionally, I will provide you with a comprehensive beta reader's report.

My critique will focus on the story's elements and much more, including in-line comments. I will also add a personal touch by connecting with you and your characters.

You can reach me at booktailor31@gmail.com. I am excited to collaborate with amazing authors here.

Hello, dear writers! My name is Blessing, and I offer paid beta reading services.

Beta readers play an invaluable role in the book development process. As a beta reader, I provide a fresh pair of eyes and a unique perspective. I offer a high-level overview of the book, along with constructive feedback on character development. Additionally, I will provide you with a comprehensive beta reader's report.

My critique will focus on the story's elements and much more, including in-line comments. I will also add a personal touch by connecting with you and your characters.

Please check out my websites
https://bibliobeastreads.wordpress.com/
https://booktailor31.wixsite.com/webs...

Alongside my beta reading packages, I also offer a free call and revision. Please check my websites for more information about me and my packages.

You can reach me at booktailor31@gmail.com. I am excited to collaborate with amazing authors here.

Hello Kate!

I hope I'm not too late.

I would love to beta read for you. Historical fiction is a genre near to my heart.

I can also deliver within the required time.

For more information, please check out my websites for more information about myself and my services -https://booktailor31.wixsite.com/webs...
https://bibliobeastreads.wordpress.com/

You can send me a mail at booktailor31@gmail.com

I look forward to connecting with you! Let's make your book great.

I'm glad I could be of help. You're welcome:)

Hello Chris,

Have you found your Beta reader already?

Juliet wrote: "Hi Sonya,

I am looking for a beta reader for my 116k-word adult fantasy, and I would love it if you could take a look at it (should it pique your interest). It is a magic-filled novel that is grou..."

Hi Juliet,

I don't know if this is me intruding, but I saw a few mistakes that I think I should bring to your notice.

1. It should be "Wizard brothers" instead of "brother wizards"

2. I feel like you should use "but when she discovers a book that alerts her to her real lineage", that'll personalize it. Discovery makes it sound like the book was discovered by multiple people.

3. You don't need to say "the same two brothers", brothers is always plural. Besides we already know that she was saved by 2 brothers.

4. I think it should be "her magic is emerging for the first time in her twenty years of life", instead of what's above.

5. I think it should be "It’s a cruel world to traverse for any witch, especially one orphaned in the way that she was", there's no need for "but" in that sentence.

6. "Secretly sent twenty years into the future by her mum as a newborn and placed with a non-magical family, in the hopes of keeping her safe from the magical world". So this means that she lived with a non-magical for some years family before the brother's saved her?

7. "But time has other plans for the witch, and even prepared with what she’s already learned of her future, she isn’t quite ready for what happens when she finds herself pulled twenty-two years into the past". I also feel like you shouldn't include this part in your blurb, it's giving away too much.

You could maybe say " But time has other adventures planned for the witch".

I don't know if you'll check back and see this since this isn't your original post. I sincerely hope you don't take this the wrong way.

Warm regards,
Blessing.

Okay!
Thank you for the response.
Whenever you're ready, I'm ready.

Hello, dear writers! My name is Blessing, and I offer paid beta reading services.

Beta readers play an invaluable role in the book development process. As a beta reader, I provide a fresh pair of eyes and a unique perspective. I offer a high-level overview of the book, along with constructive feedback on character development. Additionally, I will provide you with a comprehensive beta reader's report.

My critique will focus on the story's elements and much more, including in-line comments. I will also add a personal touch by connecting with you and your characters.

You can reach me at https://bibliobeastreads.wordpress.com/ and booktailor31@gmail.com. I am excited to collaborate with amazing authors here.

Hello Sawyer,

I would love to work with you concerning this. Here's my email: booktailor31@gmail.com.

Let's communicate more. I look forward to hearing from you.

Hello David,Compliments of the season✨
I would love to read about Ash's adventure,I work through fiver and up work,which ever one is comfortable for you.
My rates are $0.0012 per word.
I hope we can work together.
This is my mail-booktailor31@gmail.com

Hello Emily,is the search still on?