Isabel’s Comments (group member since Jan 22, 2010)

Isabel’s comments from the Elementals! group.

k thanks, i will read it.

yah, we need water, I was thinking like, they were hungry and thirsty, so they pulled water out of the humid air and drank some, but some spilled and then plants grew and they ate them...

what page?

okay, I counted up, we have intro, intro to the "tests" and earth, air and fire, we need water.

I have chronic on topic ness

yeah

(now I am hungry)

your story sounds good, can I read it?

OMG * wipes tear* that was really good, very poetic, on the verge of cheese, but you drove it home with that final line that wiped out the soft cheese with a spicy mustard of finality. kudos

okay, I transfered a lot of stuff over. but what do we need to wright next?

After the wind stopped it got warmer, but it was still freezing outside. They were all going to die of hypothermia if they didn't get warm soon. Then everybody noticed that the 2 firebenders weren't cold at all. The heat seemed to radiate off of them. the fire benders tried to help the others by hugging them (the first huggs) but it still wasn't enough. They then tried to concentrate on the heat like the others did with there elements, but they couldnt move any heat because it was just heat, not actual fire, but it moved a little. they were soooo frustrated (fire benders have a temper) that there emotions just exploded out of them, and they created the first fire.

omg that is like a twist, you have to be a real master to pull something like that off!

is it good, poetically cheesy (and I was ready to die because I had everything I had ever wished for)

or just cheesy (gasp choke faint die bio degrade)

what?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!

you should know I am beaming because this is really funny and I am immensity proud of the before, which I am copying into a final draft.

sure

the 8 benders now had there shelter. but every time they would go out to look for food the storm would push them back inside, someone had to calm the winds. The air benders took it upon themselves to do this. They ran out side and redirected the wind back upon itself, buy that wasn't enough. So they pushed it up, strait up into the sky, to space. the winds now blew about high above where they were camping. They were still blowing strong, but high enough to leave them in peace. That is how air benders created the atmosphere.

hahaha *gasp* the most powerful laws of all!!!!! WOW you are like, going to be a souless person for ever, cursed to be ridiculed for not respecting the noble art of bleeding onto paper.

So these 8 Great Ones had the power, but they didn't know how to use it, to do this, they went through the great storm. the great storm was, scientifically, just that, a storm, but to them, it was a test to see if they could use there powers to survive. They were conversing with eachother about their love of the elements when they felt the storm. They, so unused to any physical sensation, were terrified. They saw that they needed shelter, and so the first to finish a test was the Earth benders.

They needed to find shelter from the heat, the wind, the rain, the dust. They were ona barren planet, with no pretection. they serched over the hoizon, but didn't get far, so they stopped. . they were tired and frustrated, tormented by these emotions wich they had never fewlt before, so they found the will to use their powers. The two earth benders felt thire poiwer insid eof them and they, acting on instinct, made the many mountains that cover our planet today, they were bender. Working together they also made a small shelter from the dirt. Feeling drained but satisfied they all went inside, and rested.

in superhuman I am doing it modern but they are really secluded. wow, I have forgotten how much I liked that darn story. I should write in it more, having it finished will be worth the headaches.

I like the medieval more, it is much more interesting.

oh, it is modern, superhuman is modern but my earth fire prison thingy was all medieval.