Isabel’s
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(group member since Jan 22, 2010)
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i thought it was really good 9your story) but it seems to happen really fast. training, bro dies, join together (everybody is so close), meet illusy (i 4got how 2 spell it), dies. maybe you should expand it, and put in some travelling scenes.
now, *serious* many people would look upon our comments and say 'those people are crazy'....they would be right.
