Isabel’s Comments (group member since Jan 22, 2010)

Isabel’s comments from the Elementals! group.

i loath your smarty but comments. but on a more imortant note do you get what i am saying^

yeah, take that faith

yeah, those for water benders.

because it was from me

I still need to cut down more trees. grrrrrrrrrrrrrr

i like throwing knives.

still, I am the resident earth bender so it is my choice what I use.

YOU CAN EDIT WHAT i POST THERE THOUGH for like spelling errors and such. dont feel left out , I am posting your stuff too, I am just copy pasting it in my name. can't help that...

!!!!!!!!!!!READ THIS ALL THE WAY THROUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I STARTED A FINAL DRAFT OF THIS TOPIC FOR THE FINAL STORY. DON'T POST IN THERE WITHOUT GETTING IT CHECKED BY ME! I'M DOING IT SO THAT WE WONT HAVE THINGS LIKE : (EIGHTH GRADE NOW GRL........
AND DARIO IS A SOPHOMORE...... WEIRD.
EIGHTH GRADE RULEZ THE SKOOLZ!!!! )
IN OUR FINAL STORY. (NO OFFENCE)

!!READ THE FIRST POST OF THE BEFORE FINAL DRAFT TOO!!

This is the story of the time Before the four elements and how they came about in the Great Becoming.

Before the elements there were spirits with no limitations, no boundaries, and most of all, no reason for deceit.

The Earth was a barren waste land like Mars.

But as all things come, changes are made, and people are different. But I will get to that. This is the beginning. These spirits could not lie , they didn't know how, they could not deceive, they had no motivation. They lived in a world of ignorant bliss, all except four.

These beings needed no landscape because they floated in each other conscious. They were knowledge and spirit. Not solid liquid or gas, and not earth, air, water, or fire.

One day, 2 beings were startled by the sensation of something slithering across their skin. It waved and rippled and made beautiful sounds. They found breath.

There bodies took on shape,when their curiosities took on distinction. They still felt and smelled; five senses and such.

They awoke alone, and they were scared because for once they didnt have any connection with the thoughts, so they started to speak, to communicat ina a more raw form, but it was more powerful, you see, because in thought they can only express feeling. It was vauge. but in there speech they could use words, communicate more than just emotion.

Then, the same day, they found a flowing substance that made rushing noises and felt cold on their SKIN. They found drink.

Another time that day, they discovered a warm temptation, too bright to touch and too beautiful to look at. They found warmth.

They conversed of this elixer, most were not interested, but 2 were, they were of the water. They found the joy in water where the other 2 found the joy in breath.

And when the last two felt the soft substsance between there toes, they had found earth.

They were now almost full in demension, and they had breath, drink, warmth, and earth but they were still not happy nor satisfied.

Because it was dark and lonely in their world. One day, they joined hands, and found a new substance. It was light. When they had light, they had life.

Once they had all found there desires, they wanted to be with them, their unfulfilled wish was so great that the spirits saw them and combined there wills to grant them the power to manipulate there desires, they granted them there life force so that they were the only ones left in substance, and the spirits were inside them. Using the power of the spirits, they could bend.

So these 8 Great ones had the power, but they didn't used it. That is in the story of the great becoming: the first usage of there powers.

i have to transfer everything over:

Intro:

this is only for the FINAL DRAFT of the before so any comments or 'disclaimers' should go in 'the before' topic. if you want to add to the history you should put in the first before topic first and get it checked by me. (I get to check it because it was my idea to make a before file and a rough draft.)if you think I should change something put it in 'the before'.

in other words don't post in here without getting it checked by me first!

I think water should have like those ropes with heavy balls on them for the guyes.

an axe?!?!?!?! no way maybe for like burly macho guyes with no sence of the finer arts, but I want something firm, but precise I like the sword but I think throwing knives would be good.

hoooooooomer

i hate your ghostly humer

HARD CORE ELEMENTS YOU DUMMBIES!!!!!!!!!!!!! >:/

Really pretty flower. How do you get them?

Technacly but you would have to be able to separate molecules

I got the shovel. Soon to have the slingshot.