R.F. Gammon’s Comments (group member since Aug 10, 2017)

R.F. Gammon’s comments from the Rebellious Writing group.

Julian wrote: "Yeah, not sure.

Anyone want to comment their fave read so far this year?"

So far, my favorite read has been The Deceiver's Heart by Jennifer Nielsen. I've had rough luck on the five-star books so far this year :(

Gray wrote: "I grip the edges of the bathroom sink, looking up at my reflection in the mirror. I look sick. My eyes are bloodshot and puffy, my hair is matted from sweat and a restless night’s sleep, and the br..."

WHOA GRAY. Your description is just <3

Nicki wrote: "Here's an excerpt from my latest WIP which I have fondly dubbed my Top Secret Project...

Don’t panic. Get to the panic button. Push the panic button. Then, and only then, are you allowed to panic."

Ahhh, this is awesome. I have all the intrigue now.

Gray wrote: "I slow down slightly since we are on a back road, I turn and look at her, "Where are you going to in New York?"
Piper jumps, glancing away from the window and fixing her eyes on me, she pulls out ..."

Love this :)

Cecily wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Cecily wrote: "Hello all - I'm finishing up my second contemporary YA, The Competition, and have a secondary character who is homeschooled. She is important to the sto..."

I can answer this one, too. :P People will sometimes ask "do you really know anything?" I had friends who assumed I wouldn't be able to go to college because I was homeschooled, and also figured I wouldn't have to take standardized tests (I don't have to do EOGs or anything like that, but I took the ACT just last week, and have to take some tests always.) The biggest stereotype clothing-wise, at least from my experience, was that people assume you will wear pajamas ALL DAY and have all of your school done in five minutes. If you're a student like this girl in your story sounds like she is, you do school all day, every day, even over the weekends, and it might even be harder than public school curriculums.

I know this is a lot of info--sorry :/ But I hope it's helpful! ;)

Ivie wrote: "#NoCoffeeSquad. XD

But I would love to write in a coffee shop. Actually, scratch that, I just like writing coffee shop scenes. XD"

Yeah, I'm on the #NoCoffeeSquad too...but I still love coffee shops for some reason! I'd just get water or tea or something and call it good. XD

Allison wrote: "Here's a snippet from my current project, "the day we met":

There’s a certain magic about writing in a crowded coffee shop. The smell of freshly brewed coffee—the hustle and bustle of people—and t..."

I LOVE this. Man, now I want to go write at a coffee shop....

Ivie wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Here's a snippet from my project:

“And one other thing…”
“What’s that, sir?” Kariana put her hands on her hips.
Martin looked first her, then Derek in ..."

*grins* I have embraced the title of Evil Writer! None shall escape me! *runs off cackling*

*snickers evilly*

Here's a snippet from my project:

“And one other thing…”
“What’s that, sir?” Kariana put her hands on her hips.
Martin looked first her, then Derek in the eye. Kariana broke away to stare at the ground; Derek held the gaze.
“Come back alive.”

Danielle wrote: "And here's a little snippet from the book I'm editing now.


' David shook his head, leaning away. “Did you just do that?”

“I do it all the time,” Ike said. '"

Heh heh....fun times XD

Lila wrote: "Here's a snippet from what I wrote yesterday in Dusted Red. xD

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Slightly gestured to the water below him. "The mermaids killed him."

I tried to keep my eyes from widening too obviously large. "..."

WHAT? NOT OKAY, LILA. NOT OKAY. Moooooooooooore *sobs*

Danielle wrote: "Ooh snippets. :P

Here's one for my WIP: Sector One. :P

'Ike huffed when Josep hugged the helmet closer to his chest. “Don’t do this,” Ike said.
“Why not?”
“Because, it’s really annoying." '"

LOL---I feel like this is me and my friends (and I'm the annoying one).

Ivie wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Let me share a snippet from the 8k I wrote yesterday on my day off:

He swung his legs off the side of the bed. His head reeled a..."

*zips lips* I will say no more. *rides off like Théoden*

Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Let me share a snippet from the 8k I wrote yesterday on my day off:

He swung his legs off the side of the bed. His head reeled at the distance that just a few days ago h..."

*innocent smile*

Gray wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Let me share a snippet from the 8k I wrote yesterday on my day off:

He swung his legs off the side of the bed. His head reeled at the distance that just a few days ago h..."

*evil cackle* SPOILERS, m’dear!

Let me share a snippet from the 8k I wrote yesterday on my day off:

He swung his legs off the side of the bed. His head reeled at the distance that just a few days ago had been inconsequential, but now was a million feet down. He didn’t want to try to stand. Standing was bad. Standing would send him reeling to his face, and then someone would come in to see what had happened to him and ask why he was lying on his face, and then he’d have to explain that he was only just now remembering how to walk after being tortured. And that would not exactly be fun.
He put his feet on the ground and winced at the contact. Ouch.

Ahhh, I love all you guys’ snippets (Gray, Catherine, and Shine) <3 SO DIFFERENT, yet all so amazing. <3

Ivie wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Lila wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Ivie wrote: "Okay, y'all may have muscle and mean ones, but I have Peter. Just ask Lila, he one ups everyone. (Jk, we all have EPI..."

I agree. If nothing else, we’re writing such different GENRES that there really is no comparison. *goes off to start that thread* XD

Libby wrote: "K... you guys are off topic... like really bad. You should create a thread titled "Defending our favorite Charies from their cruel authors" XD

And here's another snippet from Dewdrops and Butterfl..."

I love this!!!!