R.F. Gammon’s Comments (group member since Aug 10, 2017)

R.F. Gammon’s comments from the Rebellious Writing group.

SHINE wrote: "(FROM DREAMS! I'm still trying to write out all the chapters.)Here's some of them, but there's a whole book of dreams I'm needing to write in chapters.

(EARLY 2000'S DREAM) No one knew how the vil..."

AHHHH INTRIGUING!!!!!

GRAY! HOLY CRAP! WHAT EVEN?! I NEED THIS! NOW!

Gray wrote: "Catherine wrote: "*cries*"

I sincerely hope that is a good thing. XD"

WHOA.

Gray wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Gray wrote: "Guys... I changed my WIP from third person to first person, so just to clarify, this is STILL from Of Broken Things and Paint Splatterings. This scene is fro..."

I LOVED IT BEFORE AND I LOVE IT MORE NOW

Gray wrote: "Guys... I changed my WIP from third person to first person, so just to clarify, this is STILL from Of Broken Things and Paint Splatterings. This scene is from Piper's brother, Alex's perspective, h..."

WHOA

Thanks Anna! And goodness, your story is so...enticing. I want mooooorreeee!!!!

Here's a little thing from my current WIP, The King's Daughter:

Derek and Kariana sat at the table, the empty seat between them indicative of Clarence’s absence. Esma sighed. Sometimes it was nice to be small and alone, but not right now. Not when she could have used a friend.
Sometimes it was the loneliest job in the world to be on top of the world.

Hey, everyone! I'm Faith, the author of thefloridsword.blogspot.com. I love writing, reading, and cats, and I play the piano. I'm in this movement to make sure that we pass on better books to the next generation. :)

One of mine is a Christian dystopian that involves the beginning of persecution in America. The one I'm tossing around in my head right now is a middle grade about a little Japanese girl during WWII who gets put into an internment camp in the Midwest.

True.


Next person here has been to a zoo that has elephants.