R.F. Gammon R.F. Gammon’s Comments (group member since Aug 10, 2017)


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Mar 31, 2018 04:07AM

233974 Ivie wrote: "Lila wrote: "Uuuuuummm, Ivie and Nicki, I do not make promises about who I torture. AT ALL. *evil laughter becomes even louder* *breaks down in sobs*

What's this talk about adopting my cinnamon ro..."


*shrieks* HANSEL AND DELMY!!!!!!! *falls over promptly*
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Mar 30, 2018 02:05PM

233974 Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "*evil cackling* I MAKE NO PROMISES, NICKI! NONE AT ALL! *laughs like Yzma in Emperor's New Groove* *turns into a kitten*

I WILL ..."


BUT WHO SAID THAT?????? *shrieks*
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Mar 30, 2018 02:05PM

233974 Ivie wrote: "@Faith: Did you get my email about Ruelle and Fleurie's song being out?"

YES! And it’s amazing!!!!
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Mar 30, 2018 01:37PM

233974 Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "*evil cackling* I MAKE NO PROMISES, NICKI! NONE AT ALL! *laughs like Yzma in Emperor's New Groove* *turns into a kitten*

I WILL WRITE IT GUYS. I'M WORKING ON IT NOW. XD"..."


*snickering intensifies*

SECOND BOOK! YES! How dare you give me that cliffhanger, Nicki! How dare you??????!?!!!!!!!!
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Mar 30, 2018 01:29PM

233974 *evil cackling* I MAKE NO PROMISES, NICKI! NONE AT ALL! *laughs like Yzma in Emperor's New Groove* *turns into a kitten*

I WILL WRITE IT GUYS. I'M WORKING ON IT NOW. XD
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Mar 30, 2018 01:13PM

233974 Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith... *sighs* I don't know what I'm going to do with you, but these excerpts you put up have bean MEAN.

Lila, t..."


Four books, actually....the one I'm working on right now is the second, and it's pretty dark too...the whole thing is just getting progressively darker as it goes. So. If you think the snippets I'm sharing now are dark....JUST YOU WAIT XD
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Mar 30, 2018 01:09PM

233974 Nicki wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Nicki wrote: "Faith... *sighs* I don't know what I'm going to do with you, but these excerpts you put up have bean MEAN.

Lila, that excerpt is amazing. I am so intrigued..."


NICKI.....you be careful with those books....XD I WILL BE WAITING. Give me allllllll the dark series finales. <3

(*whispers* My series finale is incredibly dark....)
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Mar 30, 2018 12:16PM

233974 Nicki wrote: "Faith... *sighs* I don't know what I'm going to do with you, but these excerpts you put up have bean MEAN.

Lila, that excerpt is amazing. I am so intrigued!"


*snickers* This is a very dark book two. I'm not apologizing. I'll /try/ to find something a little less angsty from one of the characters' sassy evil sister soon....XD Give y'all a break....
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Mar 30, 2018 11:08AM

233974 Lila wrote: "I guess I'll share one from Dusted Red. xD

A choking sound made me swivel around. There was Hansel, his eyes enormous, his fingers slack around the handle of his satchel. And behind him, Gretel, f..."


AHHHHHHH I LOVE THIS

LILA

ARGHHHHHHHHHHH SO GREAT

TERRIFYING INTRIGUING I NEED MORE NOW
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Mar 30, 2018 11:04AM

233974 Lila wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Here's a little more from my book to torture your feels:

She rocked herself back and forth, shuddering sobs shaking her whole body.
No one came to find her. She would’v..."


*grins evilly* Oh, I don't deny it.... :D :'( *is still heartbroken over what I do to my characters*
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Mar 30, 2018 10:53AM

233974 Ivie wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Here's a little more from my book to torture your feels:

She rocked herself back and forth, shuddering sobs shaking her whole body.
No one came to find her. She would’v..."


^_^
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Mar 30, 2018 10:30AM

233974 Here's a little more from my book to torture your feels:

She rocked herself back and forth, shuddering sobs shaking her whole body.
No one came to find her. She would’ve been surprised if they had. But the aching loneliness did not fade, and the terrible, terrible grief continued to rear its ugly head over her. Towering as high as the ceiling of this library, preparing to strike.
A living, sentient being.
A monster.
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Mar 30, 2018 10:28AM

233974 ALEX IS ME AT CO'OP. :P Wonderful snippet, Gray! <3
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Mar 29, 2018 09:55AM

233974 Ivie wrote: "Libby wrote: "Oh come on Ivie! We totally ship them. This is you we're talking about, and you're the hardest shipper I've ever seen. XD.

So many good snippets on here!"

Haha, I am the hardest sh..."


That's what I was gonna say....SHE SHIPS EVERYONE, ESPECIALLY THE "JUST FRIENDS" PEOPLE, SO...You can't blame us, Ivie! XD
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Mar 29, 2018 08:50AM

233974 Ivie wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Ivie wrote: "Gray wrote: "Ivie wrote: "Here's a snippet from Uprising. My betas, also known as the biggest Raeter shippers loved this scene. XD This is from Peter's point..."

*side eyes* Uh huh....
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Mar 29, 2018 08:50AM

233974 Ivie wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Ivie wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Here's a snippet from my current WIP, Book 2 of the Pentegreen Series:

She sat up and rubbed her arm, fastened the sling on tight..."


YES YOU MUST!!!!!
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Mar 29, 2018 08:43AM

233974 Ivie wrote: "Gray wrote: "Ivie wrote: "Here's a snippet from Uprising. My betas, also known as the biggest Raeter shippers loved this scene. XD This is from Peter's point of view.

I noticed the look of uncert..."


Uh huh.....just friends, huh? XD
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Mar 29, 2018 08:01AM

233974 Ivie wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Here's a snippet from my current WIP, Book 2 of the Pentegreen Series:

She sat up and rubbed her arm, fastened the sling on tighter, and tried to sink back into the blis..."


I will be sure to share more! (I've also got a progress thread going on the Yearlong Nano where I'm giving snippets fairly frequently, so you should follow me over there.... ;))
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Mar 29, 2018 07:42AM

233974 Gray wrote: "Faith/Florid Sword wrote: "Here's a snippet from my current WIP, Book 2 of the Pentegreen Series:

She sat up and rubbed her arm, fastened the sling on tighter, and tried to sink back into the blis..."


Zank you! :D
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Mar 29, 2018 07:06AM

233974 Here's a snippet from my current WIP, Book 2 of the Pentegreen Series:

She sat up and rubbed her arm, fastened the sling on tighter, and tried to sink back into the bliss of unconsciousness. People talked about sleep being a time when nothing was present except nothing. A chance to rest away from the world for a little while.
Evidently these were people who had never had nightmares.