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Sure can do :)


Hmmm maybe one of them is a peasant? Or is Forbidden love too cheesy.

Naomi smiled.

Its fine :) My boy are really bad anyways. I can't get them to sound like a guy. I'm working on mastering it.


Knights, Queens, Kings, Dragons, Wizards, Princess, Princes, Scandals, magic, etc. Vampires and Werewolves are something I do a lot of and a little bored of them.

Naomi felt the heat rise in her cheeks. "So I guess you might be looking at the future Mrs.Winchester." She joked, but in reality that sounded really nice.

We don't have to doubles. I know some people get upset if they don't get to play a girl because most people prefer playing the girl. :)


It could be anything really. Medieval fantasy sounds really interesting to me today. Though I'm not picky.

No sadly I don't, I do want to do something fantasy. I'm not really picky though. I do love doing doubles since it makes it fair.

Hi :)

cнεүεηηε wrote: "@Cheyenne, awesome, I can make the thread (:"

Okay :)

cнεүεηηε wrote: "Anyone?"

I will

Naomi and her partner never really got any big cases and that is the main reason she was a police detective to hunt killers down. Not to get called on a robbery case. Until this morning she got the case file to murder. Knowing fully that they were just trying to give her something that she probably couldn't solve, but she was determine to solve this case. Not only to prove that she was a great detective, but to show that girl can do a good job too.

Looking down at the case file for the 100th time in two days. She had no leads on the case it was driving her crazy. Everyone expected her to fail and part of her started to believe she was until she got a call about a private investigator who may have information she needed. Naomi filed for a search warrant all she had to do was wait for it to come through.

Deciding while she waited to look through the file again. Chloe Brookes was a college freshman she was really rich. Was that the motive Naomi though to herself? Everything about this crime seemed off like the murder knew what he or she was doing. This was a scary thought because they might strike again. And all the usual suspects in normal cases had solid alibis. She sighed in frustration. It would be so much easier if her partner would help, but he seemed a little off which was normal sometimes so this didn't strike her as odd.

Getting an email saying her warrant had been approved. She smiled as she got what she needed to move on with this case. As she drove to the PI's office. This was weird she never heard of this guy before. Normally people hire the best of the best. Parking her car on the side of the street. Naomi knocked on the door waiting for an answer. "Hello police we have a search warrant so open up." She used a booming strong voice.

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Ashton dialed the number quickly. "Ashley it's me we need to talk. The cops are not getting any closer make sure this PI doesn't crack anything either." He hung up the phone and walked out. He was staking out Naomi since the murder. In the ideal world he wouldn't have killed anyone, but if either of them gets close enough to solving it he would kill them too. He was being held back by Naomi anyways so it didn't really matter to him.

Lily looked at him and smiled a little bit. "Do you really want a broken girl?" Asking softly she was terrified of getting her heart broken and that made her push people away and she didn't want to do this to him.


Jay bit his lip a little bit. "Well you are almost done with school." He said with a smile.

Naomi eyes widened as he kissed her. She kissed back softly. This felt so familiar and she knew it was, but she wish she could just remember.

"I know, but I don't remember it. This would be a fresh start." Naomi blushed.

"That's good." Naomi said. "I know we just sort of met, but if you want to do a relationship. It just feels right to have one."

"Just me and you." Naomi whispered.

"Maybe one day it will last longer." Naomi said.

"Oh I see pretending to be married is the only way you will get a wife." Naomi joked. "It must have been the best time."

"We did this already?" Naomi asked.

"Carrying me over the threshold." She joked.

"Yes." Naomi said with a smile.