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"You aren't hurt?" Naomi asked.
Dakota combed out her hair quickly. The sun was shining in through her window which made her blonde hair look flawless. Out in the distance she saw the castle. She sighed a little bit as she put her comb down on her dresser. Life was hard and her family could barley afford food. Her father was so far in debt that the king was going to take him to prison soon. Then her family would be in ruins. Slipping into a dress walking down the stairs. Of course she did many things she wasn't proud off to keep her family from dying. She was thankful it hadn't gotten to the point of using dark magic. Though sleeping with men wasn't the best situation either. She didn't do it often, but when her family needed clothes or new shoes or anything they couldn't really steal it was the only choice. Dakota was disgusted with herself for doing that. Walking out of the door scoping out for a guy.
Walking past the fruit stands stealing a glance at them. It made her mouth water. She couldn't hit this stand up today because that would look to suspicious. The only sound she heard was her stomach growling in protest of this choice. As she walked past it. Everyone in the kingdom was happy the prince was marrying some Princess of the kingdom they were at war with it. Quite frankly she was tired of this honestly.
Marrying someone who didn't love was the worse thing. Then she wasn't the best either because she slept with random people she didn't like. The king was no good and from what she heard the Prince was just like his dad. This was really the last thing they need in their kingdom. Her mother yelled at her every time she mention something that was out of place for a lady.
Dakota realized she ran into someone at the last second. "I'm so sorry Sir." She whispered quietly. Just by his outfit she could tell he was loaded with money that her family needed so desperately. Remembering slowly not look at man unless if he speaks to her. Sometimes she wished that men had as many rules as girls did see how they liked it.
((I can go longer too, but this all I can think off at the moment.))
"I know. I would say it and everything,but I just meant you sort of." Naomi felt really bad she couldn't say this to him.
"I like you." She whispered.
Nodding her head slowly some. "Thank you."
"Sorry." Naomi whispered.
I can go as long or as short it doesn't matter to me. I love detail though, but I understand people get writers block etc.
"Yes" She whispered
"Dean it hurts" She whispered softly
Naomi steady herself on Dean walking slowly.
"Dean can I try to walk?" Naomi asked.
Naomi was happy.
Yes please my laptop died and I wouldn't do a good post without it.
Sounds good to me :)
Okay
She smiled softly. "That will take awhile. I will always second guess everything. I don't want you to jump into something like that." Lily whispered. "I'm happy you can." He whispered softly.
Sure :)
I don't know maybe late teens 17-19?
No problem Well if need be we could add magical creatures later on. For example the Prince is suppose to marry someone else and once he falls for the peasant. The Princess gets angry and uses dark magic to do something.
