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Wyatt left. "No she can't leave." Naomi had tears streaming down her face. "Please don't let her leave."

"I saw Wyatt." She whispered. "And..."

Naomi looked at her sister. Then everything was gone Dean was beside her. She was still breathing really hard.

Sam looked up.

"Wyatt you can't. I won't let.." Her eyes turned blue again she saw her sisters lifeless body looking at her. Naomi screamed she didn't know what was happening.

"No we were told to protect you guys and that's what Dean and I will do." Sam said.


Naomi opened her normal colored brown eyes. "Dean I'm tired."

Sam took the book and showed it to Wyatt. "No one is taking anyone."

Sam didn't say anything. "The demons probably don't know." He whispered. "If they did they would want her."

Sam bit his lip some. Knowing the only creature to do this was thought to be instinct. "There's only one that does that, but it's impossible they were all hunted." Taking out the book flipping to the page about an Oracle showing it to Deam.

Naomi felt drained.

"Parts of past that I never seen." Her eyes opened they were glazed over with ice blue color. Naomi drifted off into a sleep. She was out of it some.

"See the unseen. Too powerful. Can't be trusted." She said whimpering a little bit in her sleep.

Naomi got from the bed just like last time this happened she started to walk to the door. "Go to bed honey." The younger version of her nodded and went back to bed. "They are too powerful. How could you not know what he was?" His dad left the room to put to her to bed. Naomi looked around she was at the door. "I don't know..." Her knees were collapsing from under again.

Naomi quickly zoned out her parent's were fighting about something. "She's not going to be like him." Her dad replied. "How do you know they can't be trusted. They see the unseen." She then saw herself walked in the room tired from a nightmare.

Sam nodded. "Same."

"I don't know how I feel. I hunt supernatural creatures." Naomi looked down the headache came back again. Wincing some.

Naomi looked up at them she didn't want to be part of the Supernatural world. She hunted these kinds of creatures. "So how does everyone feel about this possibility?"

Did Ashley really think he was that stupid to let Naomi have a real search warrant? Even if she got a real search warrant it wouldn't matter that was his evidence. Most police didn't pay attention to the warrants this one looked real, but wasn't. This private investigator will notice and make point of it. She could lose her job or he will laugh her out and that was her weakness that would really break her down. Most of the people at the station though she was joke and a fraud that she couldn't do anything. This would either push her to the limit or she would keep trying.

In the end he wasn't afraid to kill Naomi. It would be something so simple to do and probably even more fore filling than killing Chloe he thought to himself. He was paying close to attention to everything that was going to go down here in just a short few seconds. He would call Ashley later to see if she found out anything else. For now he would have to wait until she got to close to solving the murder. Maybe he should just plan to murder her any way. He always got left with the bad cases because no one thought Naomi was cut out for the job. She was far too pretty and probably didn’t even care. She was just a distraction at the station the sooner she was gone the better it would be. Watching Naomi go inside the office. Thinking to himself that Ashley better not mess this up or he would kill her. Ashely wasn’t part of his equation she just knew way too much for his own good. It was funny how she thought that she was something special to him. In reality he thought of her as disposable.



Naomi walked in the office slowly waiting for the PI to let her in. Everything was going well and in days times she would be the respected. It was her breakthrough case and this made her so happy. “Good morning sir, I’m Naomi Drakes and from the local police department. I’m wondering what information you have about the Chloe Brooks case.” Speaking softly showing him her badge and the search warrant. This couldn’t be any easier than taking candy from a baby. Her goal of becoming part of the FBI might actually come true someday. This little breakthrough gave her hope. Sometimes hope was all one need.

She took a quick scan around his office noticing it was bare. He must be new at this she thought to herself. There really wasn’t no windows in his part of the building which was sad because who wouldn’t want to see the outside while working. Looking his name tag Richard he was fairly handsome, but had the sense of player.

"Dean please tell my sister this is crazy." Having a feeling Dean wasn't going to like this one bit. It felt like they had a conversation for fun about this before.

"Guys I'm human. I have no special powers or anything." Naomi said.

"Good." She whispered. Naomi looked at them. "I'm a human okay."

Sam looked at her he would let her sister or even Dean explain to her this.

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