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Nov 25, 2015 12:10PM

150761 Sam nodded his head some.

Naomi noticed. "Just stop I don't need your help or anyone's." She whispered harshly.
Nov 25, 2015 12:07PM

150761 Sam nodded and gave her light smile. "Southern California haven't been there yet for a hunt." Trying to get the silence to be over.

Naomi got up. She couldn't walk well, but she didn't want anyone's help.
Nov 25, 2015 12:02PM

150761 "If you need to talk you have everyone in this room." Sam said.

"Well let's start packing." Naomi said.
Nov 25, 2015 11:58AM

150761 Naomi didn't bother to chime in what they were hunting.


"Wyatt is everything okay?" Sam asked.
Nov 25, 2015 11:54AM

150761 Naomi grew really quiet again.


"Where were you heading?" He asked Wyatt.
Nov 25, 2015 11:50AM

150761 "I don't know and don't really care." Naomi whispered. Noticing the fact that no one asked if she was okay. Were they just using her.


Sam sighed.
Nov 25, 2015 10:11AM

150761 Naomi sighed a little bit. "Ah we should leave we been here too long."
Nov 25, 2015 10:03AM

150761 Naomi looked at Dean and nodded some not really paying attention to him or anyone. She was awfully quiet.
Nov 25, 2015 09:33AM

150761 "Because I can only say so much at once. Naomi will begin to understand this too. I'm never too far from her I'm going to let anything happen and I trust you guys won't either." He said.

Naomi felt her eyes open. "I have to go he said." Leaving the room like nothing ever happened.
Nov 25, 2015 09:27AM

150761 "You can't help her is something she has to do on her own. Orcales are more sensitive than humans. Before this let me guess she had a drinking problem and a self harm." He gave Wyatt.
Nov 25, 2015 09:20AM

150761 "Because forcing her into something is a good way to learn how to control it?" He said. "We have to get her out of that vision and quickly. The barrier isn't strong enough to kill, but its strong enough to do some minor damage."

Pain was all she felt. He walked over her and sat near. Touching her face his eyes quickly turn the same color as hers. Naomi felt herself being pushed out vision. Her father backed away.
Nov 25, 2015 09:07AM

150761 "Because you wanted to know what you didn't know." Her father whispered. "I can tell you right now your father doesn't want to be found there is barriar preventing her from seeing which is causing her pain." Taking a deep breath. "You all are hunters how do you think she feels being used. Going through visions at first is hard and terrifying." He said sternly.

Naomi screams fade into whimpers.
Nov 25, 2015 07:24AM

150761 You guys have been doing pretty well. I did block one person from the group because of this, but other than that great.
Nov 25, 2015 06:19AM

150761 Sam looked at Naomi. "I'm going to ask you a question. Where is your dad?"

Naomi didn't want to do this she didn't want to be force into this. Is this what people will do to her now? "I don't...." It was like she didn't even get a choice in this. A wave of pain hit her body. She let out a scream. Her ice cold blue eyes were filled with terror.

There was knock on there door. As Sam heard it he got up to open it. As he opened it a guy looked like Naomi pushed his way through him. "What did you do?" He asked all three of them. "I thought I told you to protect her." He said looking at Wyatt.
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Nov 25, 2015 05:22AM

150761 Yeah,

Sure :)

I would be playing a Brother and Sister who are Royal's. Basically one day the sister will go out to kill a dragon. Your guy would be a dragon. Then your girl is a Rebel with the plot to over throw the king. Eventually my guy and your girl will get together.

That's the basic character match up. If this is alright with you. I don't want to push someone into do something they really don't want to do.
Nov 25, 2015 04:34AM

150761 Naomi heard what they were talking about. "Dean are they going to force me to use my powers." She whispered. Hearing her sister talk like she wasn't even there made her feel bad.
Nov 25, 2015 12:56AM

150761 Sam looke at Wyatt. "I meant Naomi " He whispered. "Basically to force her to use her powers"
Nov 24, 2015 08:52PM

150761 Naomi nodded her head some. She leaned against Dean some. "I'm sorry Wyatt we will fight the demon,but we have to wa..." She yawned a little bit before continuing her scentence. "I'm tired and more information."

"We need to do more information. You could always ask your sister." Sam suggested. "I shouldn't have suggested that. You shouldn't use her to get information. She is still a person."
Nov 24, 2015 08:39PM

150761 Naomi looked at Dean. "I don't...." She cut herself off before she said something else. "I lied Dean its not the best feeling being near you is and I don't want to be a monster." She was fighting it.

"I know you want to fightnts demon, but you have sister who needs you. I know I saw this a lot, but I think helping her will help you."
Nov 24, 2015 08:29PM

150761 "But its such a good feeling Dean. I never felt that good before." Naomi said. "I don't feel. I can save her."


"I know how that feels. We spent our whole lives hunting the demon that killed my mom." He whispered.