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"I can't feel." Naomi wasn't going to admit she liked it.

Naomi looked at Dean. "I feel different." She croaked. Her voice was dry and shaky.

Breathing seemed a lot easier and she felt comfortable.

Naomi winced a little bit. It didn't hurt a lot it was just a weird feeling.

Naomi watched Dean then moved her focus somewhere else. Deep down she loved this feeling. She didn't have to worry about having emotions.

Naomi tried her best to squeeze his hand. She made her best effort , but only manage to lightly grab his finger.

Naomi figured out it was. The tempting path of darkness was coming over her. She was just to tired to fight it.

Naomi notice Dean trying to her best to show him about her emotions. Hopefully he would figure something out. Then maybe he couldn't tell by just looking at her eyes she thought.

Naomi felt her eyes open she was confused nervous. She felt like her heart was racing. Her hands were a little shaky.

Naomi felt emotionless she didn't feel like herself. She grew worried and panic. This wasn't good.

Naomi felt air come back a little bit. Her eyes didn't open she was hanging on to her life. She laid their motionless.

Her heart rate continue to drop. Naomi wonder what was going to happen next with her.

All she had to do was fight Naomi started to have second thoughts about fighting because was this the rest of her life being chased and trying to be killed.

Naomi looked at her sister. Today wasn't her day. Gasping for air, but it wasn't working. Feeling her eyes closed and everything went blank for her.

Naomi heard her sister something was wrong. The demons must know who she is. They want her dead and here she is vulnerable and weak. Her breathing started to slow down again. She had to fight. The 'nurse' gave her something that would stop her heart.

Sam nodded. "I'll be here." He joked.


The nurse quickly stuck her with the needle in her. She flashed out of the room. Naomi eyes flashed open pain spread through her body. She couldn't scream or do anything.

Sam nodded. "I just don't have a good feeling about all this."

Naomi felt the nurse come back something was off about her. She started to panic.

Lily smiled softly relaxing against him. Hugging was good start to a relationship. "I'm sorry that I'm not ready for something more." She whispered.


"Alice I never thought you would think of things like that." He said dramatically.

As soon as he started to yell at her she was confused. Taking a look at the search warrant her eyes widened. They set her up and now she was getting yelled at being accused of so many things. Flashbacks of her past started to happen. She took a step back shaking. Her dreams came crumbling down on her all at once. Naomi knew she should have stood up for herself, but she didn't. Taking a deep shaky breath. "My mistake." She lied and walked out. It wasn't her mistake. It was normal for her to take the blame for others problems. Getting into her car she sat down not leaving right away.

She decided to call Jane her best friend and room mate. Without her she probably wouldn't be here today. Explaining what happened. Jane sighed out of frustration. "Naomi Mae Drakes how dare you let someone walk all over you like that. I know your use to it because of Justin he was a low excuse of a person. He hurt you on so many levels." Naomi nodded her head. Hanging up and driving to her apartment to cry. Jane was the type of person who would stand up for her best friend no matter what. Jane drove to this PIs office and walked in without being invited.

Jane was also dating Ashton she was his next victim too. Naomi didn't realize that and Jane didn't know she was almost broke. She opened his door. "Now you don't know who I am, but I know who you are. My best friend came in here and you honestly went too far. You call yourself a good investigator then you would realize she didn't know what you were talking about. Naomi would never try to insult someone." She snapped. "Look I shouldn't have yelled at you Naomi got out of a bad relationship. He absued her mentally and physically. She is a mockery to everyone at her job. They gave her this case to see her fail. She's trying her best."

"I would like to invite you to drinks with us tonight. What you can do is show her that all men aren't scumbags. If you don't show up then that's fine." She whispered. Then she got a call. Picking up the phone it said her credit card was decline. Jane frowned. "Sorry I can't stay and wait for you to reply. The bar is the Ocean Bay Bar." She walked out and called Ashton. Something was up with it. Driving to the gas station she looked up to see him. Then there was gun pulled and shots were fired.


The shooting was on all over police scanners. Naomi heard it. Maybe there was a connection to this and Choles murder. That meant Richard would be there. Jane was right she couldn't let people frighten her away from things. Driving to the gas station she got out and then saw Jane's car. Her faced paled. Backing up into someone from behind her.


((My suggestion is maybe Richard is there and she backed into him.))

Sam bit his lip. "You don't think there is other demons." He asked.



The nurse smile and left the room. Naomi dreams turned into nightmares.