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Naomi nodded her head getting into the back of the van. "Okay." She whispered. Naomi always been shy around new people.

Sam sighed some. He wish he could move his legs.

Naomi nodded. "Do we have to tell him?" She asked. She didn't want to be viewed as a monster.


"He has fixed worse." Sam said softly.

Bobby nodded his head.

Naomi never meant Bobby before. She smiled softly at him. "Does he know Dean about me?" She asked.

Sam manage to get into the van in the passenger side. What was left of the car was in a trailer hooked on the back of the van.

Naomi smiled some. She found her way to Dean not wanting to leave his side intertwining her fingers with his. "I love you."


Sam nodded and made his way to check himself out. Seeing Bobby's van through the windows of the lobby.

"On the way to where we are going you can sleep." She whispered to him. "I can go now." Looking at the ivs. "It appears they took the ivs out already." Getting up slowly.


"Thank you." Sam said moving out of the door.

Naomi realized he was awake she frowned. "Why didn't you sleep?" She asked softly.

Sam nodded he got into the wheelchair and had the paperwork. "Hey could you grab the paperwork." He asked her. He was trying to figure out to use this. "Oh plus my cructches please."

Naomi fell asleep eventually against Dean. Opening her eyes to see the doctor. She gently shaked Dean to wake him up. Figuring the doctor would want to explain a few things.

Sam opened his eyes some seeing the wheel chair and crutches he would use. He had to get his cast off around the same time Wyatt.

Naomi pecked his cheek.


((Can you? Also we could take turns playing Bobby depending on the situation?))

"Picture me in short shorts and dirty tank top. Helping my boyfriend." She smiled.


((We can skip :)))

Naomi nodded her head. "Maybe I could help you fix your car." She whispered.

Calla frowned some. She had enough energy she flashed invisible unbuckling her seat belt slowly. Opening the door.

Calla knew they didn't believe her. They were mocking her she knew that.

Calla looked at Carter. She wasn't suppose to show others her powers. Taking a deep breath. "I'm not allowed to show them to people. I can control all the elements some better than others. Father says there's no one like me."

"My father said if you knew about me and what I can do you would want to kill me." Calla said. "So he kept me a secret." Her eyes wandered down. "Its only fair if I know your names since you know mine." She said softly.

Calla looked at them. "My father said if you knew about me you would kill me because..." She cut herself off. "If I wasn't so weak I would kill both of you." Calla spatted weakly. She looked up at them with fear in her eyes. She wouldn't consider herself a bad person. She was just taught differently. She knew they know all the villians, but she was a secret. Little did she know she was her father's special weapon.

((Sorry if this is short I'm eating dinner))

Calla didn't move at first she didn't know how long had passed out. Her eyes fluttered open she was in the car. Panic rose in her as she begin to realize what happened. Everyone left her to die. She saw the two of them outside she had to get out. She felt too weak to move.


"Please don't kill me." She begged them. "I will tell you anything you want to know just please don't kill me." Every bone in her body ached. This wasn't suppose to happen.

Calla winced at the pain then they started talking to her she freaked out a little bit. Why did they heal her? She thought to herself. She nodded her head some to her question she could hear her she was little fuzzy then everything was better. "My name is Calla." Whispering softly.

"Are you guy going to kill me?" She asked softly. "My father says you guys want to kill people like me." Calla was a little in shock from the whole situation and nothing really made since she closed her eyes softly passing out.

Calla laid there not moving. She was still conscious, but everything was fuzzy for her. The pain shot in her stomach through her whole body. Why did everyone leave her behind? Tears form in her eyes.

The guard walked over to Carter. "What do you want us to do with her?" He asked. He desperately wanted to leave her there to die, but in all fairness it was up to them since they did protect the city.

Calla tried turning invisible again or using her other powers, but nothing worked. She felt the growing sense of being cold. Realizing she was losing a lot of blood. Her father was right all the Heroes wanted to was to kill her.

“Okay guys, today you will be robbing the mint. Calla you will walk in invisible do not use any of your other power.” Calla nodded as she looked up at her father the leader of the Villain Affairs. At the time they made the organization it sounded catchy. “Zack and the others will cover her at all costs do not leave her there.” He said eyeing everyone in the room. “I expect everyone to come back with the diamond, you are dismissed.”

Calla walked out the briefing ready to go get this diamond. There was a reason she didn’t use any of her other powers. The heroes as her dad calls them didn’t know he had a daughter and if they did he told her they would stop at nothing to kill her. Of course she felt like there was more to the story, but she didn’t want to poke at it. Everyone in her gang got into the car and drove off. They pulled across the street from the mint.

Laila looked up at everyone. She was the brains and an excellent hacker. “So the diamond Max is talking about is one of the biggest diamonds in the world. Some say it had the property to give a person a lot of power. The heroes thought it was a good idea to put it in the Mint since no one is stupid enough to steal from it. There is several different guards the best bet is to take out the security cameras which I already done the take out the guards. Calla will follow in unnoticed. This is time sensitive mission. The heroes will be there in 10.” She said with a serious tone. Everyone nodded slowly. “Ready go.”

Calla turned invisible, seeing someone walk into the building she quickly followed behind while the others started to take out the guards. She was so close to reaching the diamond when she heard the Heroes coming. She turned around to see them pour in the building. Her heart started to rush. Everyone started to leave her even her boyfriend, Zack. Before Calla could do anything someone started to fire shots at her direction. How could they see her? Feeling most of them dodge her. Then one of them hit her in lower back. She fell to her knees her power stopped working. Feeling her eyes started to flutter shut. She started to hear so many blurry sounds. Was this it for her? Was she going to die?
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Zack ran out the building as did the rest of the gang. He thought Calla was right behind him. Then he heard gun shots fired. His eyes widen at the sound. “Calla.” He screamed. Dino held him back so he wouldn’t go chase after.

“If you go after her you will be caught too. There is no use having two of our people captured.” Dino said pushing Zack. “We have to go before they find us.” He pushed him in the car as they start to drive off. Zack was panicking because her dad was going to kill them.

“We can go back without Calla, Max will kill us all.” He glancing up at everyone through the rear view mirror. “We are going to get a hotel tell Max we are going to do a few more missions here, but in the truth we will be coming up with a plan to save Calla.” They looked at him like he was crazy. Because trying to save Calla was crazy. Everyone thought she was dead gun shots were fired.

“Man, we don’t even know if she still is alive. We can’t risk lying to Max for nothing.” Dino said. Lilia and the others nodded their head in an agreement. Zack kept quiet he knew they were right, but he felt like he didn’t do a good enough job of protecting Calla.

((I have my post written, but I had an idea for your girl character maybe she is a leader of the Heroes?))